SS aRhI: Once upon a Secret CH 4 updated pg 73- 28 NOV 2014

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Omoraboti

@Omoraboti

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

a possible future track .. loved this line " He had always shot words like knives at her and she had taken them all like roses from him. " .. carry on soon!

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annab

@annab

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Beautiful...so,everybody is carrying a secret...cnt wait to find out wt ?? pls continue and pm me pls thanx...

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Gunjan Mukherjee

@gunjanmkj

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

A new ff frm two of my fav writers! Ah,wat more cn i ask in these dreadful tyms..amazing beginning..loads of intensity..n loads of secrets! I love secrets! N evry1 has a secret to keep..intriguing! Promises loads of action..m sure i wud love d whole ff as much as i love d beginning..pls cntinue soon..n dnt 4gt to drop me a pm😊

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Kookiemonster

@Kookiemonster

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Great start..This might actually happen in the show. Each and every part written thoroughly and beautifully.

Looking forward to more updates.

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zohakhan7

@zohakhan7

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Beautifulll update
continue soon 😉

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starzyasha

@starzyasha

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Wow!!! Great start... 👏

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Gargee

@Gargee

Navigator

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Okay, I don't know how I missed this one- but fine. No problems, as I've found it.

And I love it! You two've done a fabulous job!! Okay, quick question- The guy with Anjali and the Bhaiya with Khushi are the same person aren't they?!?!?

Please please update soon!!! And also- what a name women!! Beautiful!!👏

And PM me!! *pouts* Pwetty Pweeease?😳

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lastdesire

@lastdesire

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

hey lyraa and harshu i lov ur stories...truly amazing...finally arnav came 2 knw da truth...

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Devilways

@Devilways

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Wow... a brilliant begining.. continue soon

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Chandana

@chandana.s

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Wow.. Im speechless.. Cant explain in words.. Truly loved it. Everyone has there own sarrow n secrets .. N all r trying to hide it from one another.. It was totally messed up.. Dont know where it wil take there lifes.. Wonderfuly written..