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Posted: 13 years ago
argh...dis guy confuses me more n more...
btw d small scene towards d end was hot !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
it was decided at Johnny's suggestion that Abhi and I should accompany him via train until Madras on the day after. From Madras to Kerala was a much shorter train ride.

Hmm... that would be interesting
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Posted: 13 years ago
actually im confused...i read that sentence and still im not clear about what did he actually mean by that...bt im touched when he asked her whether she wants to meet her parents...bt i never thought they will be leaving soon...im excited for their trip to kerala...
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Posted: 13 years ago
keeping ur eyes closed does not let u escape from reality...though it does give comfort...
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Posted: 13 years ago
A train ride?! Yay! I love train rides! Well, those and sarees...

Oh Abhi... I don't know what else to say.
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Posted: 13 years ago

i really dont get it.wats the problem with kushi.all this just bz of a kiss.if he betrayed her really y wud he marry her?y is she leading a dry life like this.hope ur next updates wud answer me.

anywaz good job.emotions r well displayed.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Niki urf Nirmala should stop monopolising the bathroom so much.

Poor Abhi urf Manu does not get to use his own bathroom. 😆

I have great hopes for the train journey, a single compartment and two days in the train from Varanasi to Madras, you can't run away anywhere, and she will be running away from the bathroom in the train, not to the bathroom, definitely not lingering there. 😆

Johnny for company, making them talk, even if it is in monosyllables.

Every time you mention 'take a train'. i have to stop and put myself back in 1983 and think, yes, definitely 'took a train'.

Thanks for the update.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94

A train ride?! Yay! I love train rides! Well, those and sarees...


Oh Abhi... I don't know what else to say.


Thank God for Niki and this thread, otherwise I was missing Devi's sarees. 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
How well you do that.. Their words assume such ghostly irreverence for form or shape after they are conceived, that they impart an almost divine allure to boundaries..
But then only words can do that:)... Abhi , ..

And such a vivid , rich kaleidoscope of conflict..

Thanks for updating twice..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: serialwatcher16


Niki urf Nirmala should stop monopolising the bathroom so much.

Poor Abhi urf Manu does not get to use his own bathroom. 😆

I have great hopes for the train journey, a single compartment and two days in the train from Varanasi to Madras, you can't run away anywhere, and she will be running away from the bathroom in the train, not to the bathroom, definitely not lingering there. 😆

Johnny for company, making them talk, even if it is in monosyllables.

Every time you mention 'take a train'. i have to stop and put myself back in 1983 and think, yes, definitely 'took a train'.

Thanks for the update.

I so agree with you, it's wonderful this story as it gives us a peek into the past. I big hand to D for attempting this and giving us this story. I too have to keep reminding myself of the time this story is set in, the 80's.
I just loved the exchange between Niki and Manu as there was no Nirmala or Abhi in that dialogue. The weekends are bright with these updates. Thanks D.

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