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ashred12

@ashred12

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#181

lovely...
yaar dis abhi is more confusing than asr of lavender...i still cant decide whether to like him or dislike him...uff

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mechantefille

@mechantefille

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#182

Abhi sure knows how to push it. He could have easily waited for her to move away from the bureau - he's purposely sticking to her - the dude is in over his head... he just can't keep away from her! Wow! Nikki - you're gonna be a goner. Plz plz D, can we have a fast forwarded update to the houseboat? Puhleease?!?

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Sur_10

@Sur_10

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#183

The rain part was beautiful... I could really see each drop of rain clearly
awesome writing

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bushrayou

@bushrayou

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#184

omg I swear I was holding my breath... my exhale came just with hers.

That was such a calming update.

I could completely picture that entire scene, sitting around, food going around, people talking and laughing, noise and quiet at the same time. the fresh breeze, the hum- it was all so natural and peaceful.

you always pull my heart strings by adding children... always make me yearn for the possibility...

lol her licking her lip yeah... completely intense! They are just something else... I don't know how they are moving but damn that is some steamy stuff. i love how they don't even touch yet I am holding my breath at the heat!

ps- love Jonny and the uncle!

Edited by bushrayou - 13 years ago

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appy

@appy_12

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#185

Whoa! Beautiful! :)

Like everyone above me said, you describe them so well.. Every bloody frame I can see! It is criminal to be so accurate I think! :P Hahah!

Abhi is such a.. let's not use bad words.. He is an opportunist! :P Doesn't leave a chance!

Really interesting.. when is Kerala?? :P

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bumble_bee

@bumble_bee

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#186

WOW! you weave magic with your words... my heart beat relentlessly through out this chapter in anticipation of something happening... i wasnt disappointed...