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purplelove

@purplelove

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#121

Love, love Mamaji. He is to cute. I hope her defenses finally crack on that houseboat. If nothing else she has to confront him about the past. Great update, thank you for the PM.

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-memorable-

@-memorable-

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#122

he called her "NIRMALA" not "Nikki"

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-Spree-

@-Spree-

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#123

A honeymoon? 😲 I am shocked beyond my wits, even more than Nirmala, If you can say so. A honeymoon is always in the order after marriage but I didn't assume it to be just too soon here.

Anyhow, Thank you so much for the double updates. I am glad I am reading this one. Nirmala's point of view somehow oozes out myriad of point of views, from her view, If you know what I mean. 😆

Thanks for the PM. Please Update soonish?

Regards

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#124

"A week on a houseboat! Just the two of us and water all around." Oh boy! I can't wait to read about that! lol

Stupid Niki. Stupid Manu. Stupid Nirmala. Stupid Abhi. Krishna Mama is one interesting character; he's awesome, even more so because of his gift for Abhi-Niki.

Thanks for the update, D!

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FaithnFate

@FaithnFate

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#125

Aha!! so we have name-sake-god of love...Krishna kanhaya😳Nice timing Mama jee...and what a astute persona you have...Electric couple indeed...😆😉 Awaiting to see more of him in the near future...😊

Aaya pardes se koi leke ek tofa...
Diya hai unhe ek safar pe mauka...
Kya dur hoge inke shikve...
Kya hogi beetein kal ki baatein...
Yea kal ki parchaaiyaan...de jaayegi naya sabak inke darmiyaan...

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@flowers4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#126

awe intresting a boat ride for a week ... hope they will be talking and maybe something more...but still early days...loved it ...keep on writting...

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ninand

@ninand

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#127

I truly am, at a loss of words and, a mesmerized audience. and what do you know, its Niki and Abhi who ve grown on me in a hurry..

Then come along a few Ganga didiis and Krishna mamas and i am never looking away.

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serialwatcher16

@serialwatcher16

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#128

Thanks, it was lovely to wake up to an update here.

The most unexpected gifts are the ones that bring out the widest smiles.

Or in the case of niki the biggest sputters.

You know, I was imagining the dining table, Krishna mama on one side sputtering, Abhi rushing pat his back and then niki sputtering, and Abhi rushing here. Being served like a shuttlecock from here to there. 😆

Monday morning😭

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-publicenemy-

@-publicenemy-

Navigator

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#129

Ladies,

I have to say, it is a rather disappointing showing when there are two back to back chapters (which I did over the weekend because this story was neglected for a whole week and I was getting much complaint in that regard) with almost 50 "likes" and we are barely skidding the marks of two to three pages for comments.

As much as I love this story, and as much as I usually can write without attention to feedback when the story-bug has taken hold, I have to say that the pace of story-telling here may slacken to just weekends. When I have two other stories on hand and time is somewhat limited to spread across all of them, things like this do make a difference, I guess.

Either way, happy reading.

P.S. If you do not comment regularly, do not ask for updates.

-D

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nandita

@nandita

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#130

You are an awesome storyteller! The is turning out to be an extremely interesting read.

A suggestion for you to attract more readers for this work-link your work to Lavender otherwise people may totally miss out on this beautiful story. I discovered this purely on fluke.

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