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Posted: 13 years ago

wow wow updated...and that too with such a amazing chapter...im more than happy to read this chapter...the way he made her stop struggling and how he caught the hidden meaning in her words...i wonder what will be his response knowing about varun..and the way his mother explained how he was stubborn in the decision of marrying her made me complete...i loved it..

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Posted: 13 years ago
So Manu was pining for her? And now he knows someone else kissed her!!! He doesn't want her submissive in bed...well one less thing she needs to be worried about:-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
haha that was fab ⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome one...worth the wait😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome update...a insight to abhi ...loved it , can't wait till u reveal what happened in the past with abhi and the other girl... continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
could that be more power packed? i am still reeling in from that dynamic update! I swear when you come at it you reallly come at it!

I am smiling from both exchanges. there is so much that is still uncovered so much that this tale still needs to reveal.

I was never a huge fan of abhi-nikki. it wasn't that I didn't like them I just didn't not like them either. not important you know? now I read this and I know like always I will fall in love with them only because of your writing.

Interaction between them excites me!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mechantefille

Oh wow - that was explosive.

I know I might sounds naive- but some things seem unclear - I expect a second read might clear it up...
I fin dit hard to bellieve that Abhi was pining away for her all this time. And it seems that when he saw he was going to be able to get her, he just didn't back dowwn. Seems like the wish of the heavens, right?
Was he really jealous, or territorial? Or just that husbandly chauvinistic attitude...hmm am still a bit unclear! He was kissed by a girl ( i assume) and then she was kissed by Varun... where is Varun anyway?
But he's so friggin certain he'll win her over!!
I didn't really like the idea of his mum explaining things about her son to her, but I see how that'll clear things up for Niki - if she feels like pondering over it.
Lines of the day:
" I would likely have the same reaction if I walked in and caught us in the state that we were in."
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I know it's too early to say something in favour of the man but...

Why is it so hard to believe...😊 is it because at that time his ...feelings were engaged with the other lady... ...or we have jsut seen one side of the coin(Niki's perception)

Remember...D had something about Enchanted time...for Abhi it think it was Niki... He never forgot her...sort of carried her within him...So yes, when he was granted he did take...the chance/decree of heavens as we would like to call ...

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Posted: 13 years ago
Finally an update and what an update it was. We are getting an insight into Abhi's mind but from different people and ofcourse a little bit of his thots also. Sometimes I forget the story is set in the 80s...Abhi seems like an MCP but I know he is not going to be one maybe it is just the times. Like Faithnfate mentioned mum-in-law reminds me of Shiv's mom and the situation is slightly similar and yet different from TOS.
Edited by nuts - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey D!

Update after a long time(I know unfair comment,after those back to bak updates of Lavender, I talking about BIFA alone)

I love ur word play...Ha! Manu is jealous, is he?! I wish him to be jealous...Loved her answer for his query...

Her convo with MIL was nice, she shd know the circumstances of her marriage...brilliant update
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: FaithnFate


I know it's too early to say something in favour of the man but...

Why is it so hard to believe...😊 is it because at that time his ...feelings were engaged with the other lady... ...or we have jsut seen one side of the coin(Niki's perception)

Remember...D had something about Enchanted time...for Abhi it think it was Niki... He never forgot her...sort of carried her within him...So yes, when he was granted he did take...the chance/decree of heavens as we would like to call ...

I know, I'm so dying to know what Abhi's side of it was... But the idea of him not kissing her for all the time they went out - gave me the impression of him not tainting her innocence...I dunno why - but that was the flavour I got from the "varun=balcony=night before marriage'' episode.

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