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ArshiRaiguptha

@ArshiRaiguptha

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: Psychedelic

Fourthing sounds ummm.. Not right! But thats not the point!

So Meera. Write a book! :D We'll buy it for sure. ;)

P.S. Update? :D

wen fourthng doesnt sound right, then wats fifthing..?? anyway, i agree with u people.

meera, yaar u shuld try writing a book.. i'll buy.. we all will buy..!!

:) :D

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daljeet

@daljeet

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#162

good work meera.i tried to comment on the post.but cudnt.but im really impressed by ur narrative.the way u described monsoon is gr8.also is it kushi r his wife upsetting him?u make me guess a lot dude.make it clear by atleast nxt update frnd.good job.

loved anjali shyam version"cute"👍🏼

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Kannvee

@Kannvee

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#163

read the story it's really interesting

thankx for pm

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Pramiti

@maverickmartin

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#164

How? How do you do it? I mean the chapters keep rolling off you like water.. And it really goes to show to show just how brilliant you are when you update a chapter, and i read it , and I never think of the fact that the last update was a day or two back! There's such a continuity.. almost unnoticeable..

now, THAT is something.

Fantastic work. Waiting for more of this scrumptious delight! 😛

Lord, how cheesy! 😆

Edited by drool_ovr_barun - 13 years ago

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@sherlockthor

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#165

meera i loved it!! honestly as people are suggesting please write a novel!
and the mystery is too much!!

loved every word and thnx for the PM!😊😊

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Jenna

@LondonChick

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#166

That was amazing as per usual =]

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-FarwiiDobaara-

@-FarwiiDobaara-

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#167

The lil bits of Arnav's flashback is confusing the hell out of me...Wonder if its Khushi's or his wife...
I love how Shyam is really understanding in this scene...The way he supports his wife yet still helpin out his friend. <3

"You shouldn't be..." ..."guilt came crashing next."

That was definately Khushi..At the party...So he feels guilty for what happened between these two that night =(

Really wanna have more Arhi scene 😳

Really loved the update! :D
Continue soon...

Edited by --SweetFarwii-- - 13 years ago

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Ajita Spencer

@sini1234

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#168

I am really intrigued by this update , I can see Arnav in pain , haunted by his past , but is Khushi also haunting him now ?? Cant wait to read next update .