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anumber1

@anumber1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#151

So I've decided to comment on IF instead of your blog so I can keep track of the chapters vs number of comments and make sure I didn't accidently skip any. Anyways, wow poor Arnav is really depressed and feels really guilty. I'm guessing his wife left him after she found out he cheated and Khushi left him...no idea why both the guilt of hurting both women is getting to him. Very well written. Great work!

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Stapleton

@Stapleton

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Posted: 13 years ago

#152

Nice update.
But it's a bit confusing.
I don't understand d story clearly...

Thanks 4 dpm

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irene

@rennie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#153

really good...wonder wat happened to arnav in the past and also wat went wrong in his life...

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Kuku

@lankan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#154

He finally met his sister. I look forward to his meeting with the writer : )

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Avani

@highonshows

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Posted: 13 years ago

#155

Wow,...Arnav past is totaly haunting him and hence he is so recluse...

love the FB,...are they anyways associated to his wife, hence his reluctance to c Shyam and Anjali together??? He has another FB, i beleive of the same person telling him to let Shyam and Anjali be if they love each other dispite Anjali being older than Shyam and Shyam working for Arnav...

Character are being developed very interestingly and u've piqued my interest even more with just the right pace of story telling...

Althought i make total sense of it i did read the update twice,...n thoroughtly enjoyed myself both times...

Cant wait for ur next upadate...

Meera, u dont respond to comment there days???

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@Hot.Pink.Heels

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Posted: 13 years ago

#156

Honestly?! Well right now I'm just a tad bit confused about what is going on and what exactly is bugging Arnav, but I love your writing style so I'll patiently wait for you to reveal the mystery!
Continue soon :)

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sur91

@sur91

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Posted: 13 years ago

#157

Just read the three parts. It's very interesting.

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sneaky-aj

@sneaky-aj

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Posted: 13 years ago

#158

ok..really have to say now that even though i love all ur works, i am a confused soul ryt now!!!
cant figure out what's happening with arnav at all!!
but awesome update as usual...u have successfully managed to keep up the suspense!!!😃

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velangini

@velangini

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#159

beautiful update

arnav's past is so mysterious

update soon

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Kalyaani B Rao

@Kalyaani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#160

"Let me tell you this: if you meet a loner, no matter what they tell you, it's not because they enjoy solitude. It's because they have tried to blend into the world before, and people continue to disappoint them." - Jodi Picoult, My sister's keeper.

Arnav's plight is summed in the above mentioned words, what a life is his, he seems to have everything and still the void in his life is there like a painful reminder of how insignificant life can be when you have no one to call your own.

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