*MN FF~Inconvenient relationship* Last part 142 - Page 35

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Posted: 13 years ago
Great work maria ⭐️
keep it up...😊
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Writer Note

Thank u so much everyone for ur beautiful comments🤗🤗means a lot to me, 🤗🤗🤗
i hope u ll liked the coming parts.
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keep reading the story.
Maria...remember me in ur prayers🤗

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Inconvenient Relationship

The hallway clock struck 6:30 and she took a last critical glance at her reflection, "I think I am looking quite Nice"she murmured shakily under her breath gathering all her confidence to face her soon to be husband. Just two days Left and she would be his wife. Her cheeks flushed with this thought and she shook her head slightly, she didn't know why but from the past few days she was getting nervous to think after two days she will've to live with Mayank under one roof and like a married couple they will've to get intimate, it was really strange feelings for her which were making her restless.

The car horn poked into her thoughts and shrugging she stepped towards the outdoors.He coked his head to see her coming towards the car,wearing a light pink embroidery suit with white and pink dupatta around her neck playing with the air,taking small steps nervously,she was looking gorgeous and he let his gaze ramble down over her body.Her cheeks flushed feeling his intense gaze at her but she kept her expression blank, a loud music in passing car brought him back and he startled a bit realizing what exactly he was doing, So what?? She is his soon to be wife and he has right to admire her beauty, his heart gave him the logic against his mind and he shrugged those thoughts quickly and gasping air he opened the door for her, she climbed into the car and adjusting herself on seat finally spun her head to face him.

"Umm. Thanks for coming"she could barely speak hiding her nervousness and Mayank smiled back recollecting his scattered thoughts.

"Get your seat belt" he pointed out"Oh!!"

He clicked the key and again titled his head to look at her who was struggling with the belt,he could see his hands trembling with nervousness and her face was showing panic, "Nupur are you alright?"She lifted her head at his concerned voice and could barely manage to give him a smile and Mayank felt something change in Nupur's behavior although they'd met before many times but he'd never seen her that much nervous around him, "yeah, I am fine"she breathed inhaling air, Her tone was shaking with nervousness and he couldn't hold back himself to notice a sudden change in her. "Let me do it"getting annoyed by her sudden change behavior Mayank leaned on her side and Nupur's already unstable breath caught in her throat, "No, I'll'"Nupur could barely whisper realizing their intimacy, the same thing that was threatening her,haunting her from the past few days,unaware about her nervousness,her fear he braced his one hand in one side of her seat to keep his balance and then took the belt,her heart thud as she felt his warmth breath touching the flesh of her skin she tightly closed her eyes in anticipation,after tying the belt Mayank lifted his head and forgot to blink his eyes to see her eyes closed tightly and her cheeks flushing due to blush,accepting defeat to the urgency to touch her he lifted her hand and touched her smooth skin with his knuckles,she jumped on her seat shivering with the new sensation and Mayank quickly leaned back and came back to his senses as he saw uneasiness on her face,her heart thud to See the way he was looking at her, through his eyelids , his deep-dark eyes were enigmatic, yet something seemed to crackle between them, an electricity that she'd not seen before there, the same she was experiencing from the few days in her dreams. As he gazed into her eyes, her body felt as if it were shedding years of musty cobwebs to become moist and dewy. The sensation was so strange, she wanted to run from there, but at the same time, she couldn't , he has right on her, she shivered once again thinking about the intimacy they would share after two days.

"I am sorry. I was'" He spoke softly getting embarrassed and she could barely manage a half smile in return, "it's okay"

Feeling the uneasy air in the atmosphere Mayank shifted his weight back at driving seat and in just a few minutes they were on their way.

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Nupur had bought Green and Red colored Dress , a white , red and green pearls work on it Making the Bridal wear more beautiful, and it was the first time when Mayank'd showed interest and he was the one who'd choose the bridal dress for his wife and Nupur considered his choice..

They rode back home in silence, it was the first time when Mayank found her silent the whole way she was not the same Nupur anymore whom he knew, Nupur, her fiance whom he knew before was immature, stubborn, innocent girl but today he found her different, the way she shivered whenever his hand accidentally brushed with her skin,the way he found her uneasy,nervous around him,it was evident something was bothering her but what?he couldn't figure out May be it was the reason Of mis communication gap in their relationship as he realized he never tried to give her that much space or talked to her politely so she could share with him whatever comes into her mind...

He swallowed his lump giving to her panicked face the last glance as she turned towards the gate.

pt 11...pg 76 *******************

here is next update,i hope you'll like it😳

Edited by Maria. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update dear
hope mayank realises his love to nupur
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Posted: 13 years ago
That was superb update Maria
i loved the way you showed Nupur change behavior with Mayank before Marriage it was a beautiful thought,it usually happens.
liked it very much,,continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
That ws simply beautiful...
I can understand nupur's uneasiness but being a guy mayank failed to understand it...But i think soon he'll get that too...
Loved this part...
Cont soon api..<33
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautifully written mari.u've shown nups emotion beautifully.good going hun.keep it up.
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Posted: 13 years ago
THat was superb update
amazing writing..loved it
do continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update SIS...
loved it lodsss
Beautifully written...
Awww...loved d way she blushed!!!
i hope MAyank will soon understand her nervousness n all...
now m hoping to get der marriage update...lolzzz
loved it to BITS...
love u lodsss SIS...🤗🤗🤗

ps: update "L&H" plzzz n wht abt my "Fallacy MayUr"????
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Posted: 13 years ago
aww... dat ws simply beautiful mari!😍

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