AarYa FF : Teenage Dreams! (Part 3 - Pg 25)

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Sampa Ghosh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

Wowy yaar,very fresh start of d story jst like cool dawn breeze tickling our sences,like a fresh buquet of purple tulips,and Yash & Aarti-perfect teenage couple.Loved d update & thanx 4 d pm.

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Sudha

@cssudha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

Awesome Update Shubhi dear...I keep on visualizing it...So lovely !!

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akanshya

@kingofme

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

cute part...

loved it...

cont soon...

thaks for the pm...

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Ria

@chand1234

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

aww.. <3

awsm updt !! 👏

pls pls pls updt soon

luv ur writing !

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Shubhika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: saf24
This was a really sweet update. I love the way it was written.

Thanks Saf 🤗

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Shubhika

@shubhika124

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: Misha123sharma
Amazing narrTion di
Felt like watching movie

Thanks Misha 🤗😳

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Shubhika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: Inkpen4877
Such a great start!!!! I am looking forward to where this goes!

Aww Thanks 😃

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Shubhika

@shubhika124

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Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: teju1816
shubhi !! u are just fabulous 🤗
wow superb update !! 👏
update soon dear !! 😳

Thanks Teju ☺️

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Shubhika

@shubhika124

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Posted: 13 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: AbbyluvsMaan
Shubhi...
Take a hug first... 🤗

Abby 🤗 🤗

You have written it sooo beautifully...
It ws sooo damn picturesque.. I cud picturize evry word I ws reading... ❤️

Awww baby ☺️ Love u

Teenage.. Dis period brings happiness for one and all and brings gloominess for many...
But for some people, the gloominess stays...

This was an absolute cute update..
But the worse is yet to come..
Aaahhh its gonna be painful...

Pain is the integral part of life 😍

Waitin for more...
Love you.. 🤗
Love u even moreee ☺️

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Shubhika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: zahra15
Shubhiii🤗

awww...this was really nice...😊
Awww ☺️
Reminds me of my college days...*except am still in college*😆
hehehe 😆
Aarti feeling shy, then Yash wishing her, how his friends were teasing him, all seemed so real.😊
And Pari being the chirpy girl screaming out loud, made everyone sang at the time of assemble, this is how we are too, nothing matters in front of our friends in school, we do what we want😆 in a good way😛
Vidhi having no regrets for foretting the birthday🤣 this would have suited Pari more if we went by the serial's characters😆
And finally the instant message from Yash...could this birthday get any better😉

Awww Zahra 🤗 You made me sooo happy! I love how u n Abby put effort in posting a looong comment! That makes one feel special ☺️
But I do feel that, this will not stay happy happy like this for long. Dunno why😔
Awww 😭
Anyways, continue soon, me waiting for more😛

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