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Posted: 13 years ago
Payash r so bad...my arhi rock😃 ...very interesting story line ,Nadz...Keep it up 👍🏼...Uknow well how we look up 2 ur creations😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
this payash creepy..argh..poor mamiji...thats really funny.arnav-garima
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Posted: 13 years ago

It is being a week Akash and Payal got married in court as Mami was very annoyed with them ,she didnot let Arnav gave them money .

one evening she was lying with pretending as if she was sleeping

Mami was in shock as she had over heard Payal and Akash conversation

Payal:: Akash your maa is to chipko , she cannot rest ,why she want you to be around her "

Akash: Payal i am too fed up she ruin the shadi , i always thought to have a grand wedding but she ruin my plan, even she had stop Bhai to send us on our honeymoon as all the burden will be on his shoulder

Payal: oh dont say that

Akash "it is true "

Payal i have idea ,i will ask mama to ask us to come with them

Akash: lets go from here ,if she get up she will again start doing Akash Akash


They walk out

Mami silently cried ,she felt some one had put a heavy load on her heart ,tears started flowing out of her eyes .she didnot open her eyes as she heard Arnav and Khushi coming in room

Khushi: "sit here dont follow me "

Arnav Mami is sleeping

Khushi so what if she is sleeping you sit here till i cook dinner.

Arnav: but

Khushi "shhh"

Arnav: shake his head" as you wish "

Khushi "good boy ,i dont want her to be alone or feel she is ignored ."

Garima walked in with oil (Khushi didnot let go the opportunity, Mami ji wanted an attended full time she ask Garima if she dont mind and like to be her attended , Garima wanted to be with Arnav she without thinking agreed )

Arnav: should i go ?

Garima no beta

Arnav sit back with his Lappy, he was looking Garmia she was applying oil in mami feet, he look at Garmia feet it was all cracked .he closed his laapy and walk to wash room , he came with bowl of hot water "Aunti put your feet in this"

Garima" but why beta"

Arnav: look at your feet it is all crack."khushi is so careless , she say's you are like her maa ,why she dont take care of you" he was angry

Garima:feel like hugging him, she hold her self .

Khushi came to check whether mami was awake or not she got surprised to see Aranv sitting on carpet with Garima feet in his lap he was drying with towel " you see she is your daughter , why you dont call me your son then?"

Garima" cupped his faced and kissed him

Khushi took step back she stand still with the wall, she had prayed some how they both come close , she dont want to force Arnav at all she wanted him to come close to Garima himself. she ran to her room as she wanted to thank lord .


Arnav:Khushi how could be so careless ? he came in

Khushi what happen she wipe her tears

Arnav: you asked your massi to take care of Mami , but you are not at all looking after her.

Khushi: is that only my duty , you cannot take care of her

Arnav i have

Khushi hide her smile

Arnav i have applied cream on her cracks too.

Khushi: acha tou mein kya karo

Arnav: she has no children , cannot we both call her Maa

Khushi what?

Arnav hold her arm" yar day before yesterday , i heard her talking to mami , actually she was comforting mami ji .she was saying you are so lucky you have someone who call you maa "

Khushi: so she hug him as she was moved with his act

Arnav: if we call her Maa, as you say we should give other happiness

Khushi oh you are trying to copy me

Arnav : he left her as he know she is trying to pull his leg" forget it , it is useless to talk to you"

Khushi: smiled " you order me , don't say ,samjha " she kissed his cheek ...she was really over joy as her all the wishes was coming true.she didnot bother to ask Garima about the past as she felt it will hurt her more . she plan to make her present perfect.



next day evening

Khushi was fixing his cupboard as he had lost his some shirt & asked her to find it , he was in shower . his cell was ringing ,she look at the caller name ,she picked up & walk to the pool side " hello "

DR: Mrs Arnav

Khushi: yes

Dr: thank God i found you , if you have time can you come to me

Khushi what happen?

DR: i can't tell you on phone

Khushi: i am coming , she deleted the call history " Arnav i am coming in half hour " she knock at the door & ran out of room as she knew he will come out & ask her 1000 questions she took an auto & reached hospital, directly walked to the Dr room

Khushi : what happen tell me quickly? she was out of breath

Dr: have a seat

Khushi " you tell me"

Dr: placed the report in front of her

Khushi read the name "Arnav" she look at care fully " he is taking medicine"

DR: medicine is not everything Mrs Arnav , he has mental stress , check this it was his last week & this is his this week , see how much difference is there.

Khushi: but why it happen

DR: physical and emotional stress can prompt an increase in these hormones, resulting in an increase in blood sugars, is he stressing himself ?

Khushi hmmm

Dr if it is not controlled blindness, kidney problems, and nerve damage

Khushi bas kara kuch nahi hoga

Dr: Mrs Arnav , you please check he sleep properly or not , as it happen if patient is not having peaceful sleep

Khushi: hmmm as she had seen him awake all the night .

DR: can i ask you one thing ?

Khushi sure

DR :i hope you both have a perfect married life

Khushi: ,saw her cell as it was ringing she picked up

Arnav where are you?

Khushi coming home in 20 mins , she cut call

DR: Mrs Arnav make sure his reports get better ,i will call him after 5 days , if reports same then i will start insulin it may suit few patient & it may not suit few it is the last remedy

Khushi: his reports will be fine after 5 days . she stand & walk out ." the reality is bothering him " she drive back home

Arnav" where "she ran & hug him "oye kya huwa "

Khushi: calmed her self " i missed you"

Arnav oh really , he picked her up. she was trying to see his face , he too good in hiding his emotions, "what happened why you are so pale ? are you feeling well" he made her sit "Khuhsi tell me what's wrong with you" as he could see tears in her eyes "please tell me " he hug her tight

Khushi " give me all your pain, all your stress Please "he pull her away & look at her

Arnav " DO scare me yar tell me "she madly loved him as if she will never get another chance, he was shocked at her , she in heart made promise to her self she will love him so much he forget all his pain , because of Mami sickness she was not able to give him time, he look at her "Khushi"she was all lost in her thought, he pinch her to bring her back in her senses

Khushi"ha "

Arnav: "thek ho"

Khushi: smiled kissed his chin.

Arnav i forget to get Mami medicine , i will go & get, you sleep with mami"he try to get up from her ,she pull him back

Khushi" Op will bring" (as Mami was sick she was avoiding him , she use to sleep with Mami and every day she use to find him sleeping on cough in same room ,she didnot thought he will take all that so serious ) nani had said to her once , he will never demand from you . her words ego in her ears. she run her finger in his hair" kya baat hai what are you thinking?'

Arnav : why i dont have a mom?

Khushi you have a mom ,never say like that

Arnav; what

Khushi bite her lips

Arnav what you said come again ?he grab her hand and pull her back to him

Khushi: i will tell you but you promise me you will not take stress , and you will not ask questions ?

Arnav i promise

Khushi:Aunti is your mom , you were diabetic at birth, she didnot had means to take care of you she gave you to nani

Arnav "how you know?"

Khushi: i said you will not ask me questions , i promised you i will find your parents i did" she saw tears

Arnav "does she knows about that?"

Khushi" yes "

Arnav :moved away from her " why you"

Khushi " i was not getting how to tell you" she hold his hand ,

Arnav hug her " I LOVE YOU"

Khushi: hug him back she could feel his shiver ,he cried

Arnav: can i see her?

Khushi yes she fixed his hairs ,he walk to the door

Arnav"You will not come "

Khushi: should i

Arnav yes he gave her his hand . she jump out of bed fixing her dress, she walked with him .


Garima was sleeping he walk and sat near her hold her hand, and kissed it

Arnav" my maa"

Khushi yes your maa

Garima heard their whisper she woke up she saw him kissing her hands "beta Kya huwa"she got confused

Khushi: with eyes told her she had told him ,she hug him he placed his head in her lap and cried khushi sat near him as he was still holding her hand , Garima pat him caress him , wipe his tears .

Arnav i remember this touch

Garima" when i use to get very upset Ramu kaka use to bring you to me "

Arnav: so Ramu kaka

Khushi shake her head in eye , wipe his tears , which was non stop flowing out. he wanted to feel the warmth of his maa lap she kept on patting him ,he slept.


Epilogue



Mami: he is my son he will eat what i will cook

Garima :he is my son he will eat what i will cook

Buaji: he is my son in law he will eat what i will cook

Khushi: please please you both don't fight , i have already made for him


Arnav who had enter home early could not hide his smiled, he at once didnot had single maa now he has 2 ladies who want him to call them maa. he mesmerized his wife who was standing with their medicine and milk

Khushi"nani yeh aap ki, Buaji yeh aap ki , mami yeh aap ki aur , maa yeh aap ki"she gave all the ladies their medicines

Arnav where is mine ?

Khushi: when you came?

Arnav when you were waving white flag ? he hug her

Khushi : Arnav

Arnav Ladies close your eyes as you have taken your medicine i want mine

They all had a laughter Khushi pinch him and ran upstairs .


Mami was annoyed from Akash ,she had given him his share and broke all relation with him.


Arnav was the only man of the house and all the ladies dont miss chance to shower their love on him



i am really sad i could not do justice with this story

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Posted: 13 years ago
ow its ended...why so abruptly..
but i so loved it..
Loved how khushi took care of mami,ma,arnav and everyone else...
Akash and payal argh..
Loved the milan and mom-son...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: .Saraa.

ow its ended...why so abruptly..
but i so loved it..
Loved how khushi took care of mami,ma,arnav and everyone else...
Akash and payal argh..
Loved the milan and mom-son...

yar time nahi mil raha kya karo


i am sorry for that
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow loved it !!! Finally Arnav got his maa & maami's motherly love ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
you did pretty much a lot of justice to this story
sad that you ended it but then every good thing must come to an end unfortunately
so now all the ladies of the house are after him only well he is the only male na
man dont know why he was stressing so much but then khushi made it all okay
thank god he knew who his mother was in the end
man that akash was sucha useless son i tell ya
wow hope to see more from you in your other works one hopes
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: chavvi16

you did pretty much a lot of justice to this story
sad that you ended it but then every good thing must come to an end unfortunately
so now all the ladies of the house are after him only well he is the only male na
man dont know why he was stressing so much but then khushi made it all okay
thank god he knew who his mother was in the end
man that akash was sucha useless son i tell ya
wow hope to see more from you in your other works one hopes

i will write its season 2 after few months
as i use to love this story
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Posted: 13 years ago
Di,why did u finish it soo soon??😭
It was going soo fantastic!!

I loved that Arnav finally found his maa!
He is soo fortunate to have Khushi in his life!
Same goes for Khushi too!
They love each other soo much- That the vital point of this story
They care for each other & stand with each other-that's core of this story as well as other Ss of urs👍🏼

Arnav was soo selfless ! He loved Mamiji despite knowing she didnt love him at all!❤️
DI, plss start it again if u have time! I am in love with this SS😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
i didnt expect this 2 end so soon.but i likd d ending.asr-garima united.arn was so happy 2 get his mom back.it was so emotional.but i'm sad abt mami-akash relation getting ruined.waiting 4 season2
Edited by jasminerahul - 13 years ago

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