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Posted: 13 years ago
i read all the parts in one go😛...wat can i say dis is so b'ful👏...best ff ihave read till yet...all d character sketch is so perfect👍🏼...love it...continue dear...❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome both parts.
dont tell me shyam is a creep here too.
what the hell he's checking out a married woman.
i really dont like it. hope khushi teaches him a very good lesson

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Posted: 13 years ago
loved reading this...khushi is so naughty..missing this khushi...
cant wait for their plans

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Posted: 13 years ago
this is an amazing ss.Mami as rnav's step mom.Wow!Akash-payal's characterisation is also diff.Shyam is dirty here also.Anjali NK combination was a fresh idea.scap me wen u update d next prt.plz update soon
Titl is Whirl ool.Ur pic was that of a pool.So i wish u cd create a scene where ARhi spend time near d pool
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Posted: 13 years ago
i love khushi...nice update!!!😃
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Posted: 13 years ago


Mami: yeh kon hain as she saw Anjali covering her dace with her duppata

Khushi : Anjali mami

Arnav hide his smile

Mami: Anjali removed the duppata

Anjali" nahi nahi i am feeling shy"

Shyam was confused , he look at khushi she had changed her sari into a anarkali dress

Khushi in heart " i will sort you" she made Anjali sit ,and walk to Arnav chair place her hand on his shoulder

Shyam just look away

Nani: was hiding her smile to

Mami: Anjali removed your duppata

Anjali nahi she hug Nani

Nani hug her back

Khushi: mami he already liked her what is the use of being so formal

Shyam who was drinking tea choke .

Mami: yeh bhi baat ha

Shyam look at her ,she was busy in checking Arnav temperature by placing her hand on his neck

Khushi: "if dont mind can you excuse us , he is still warm "

Nani: yes yes he should rest

Arnav got up "Anjali will you make tea for me "

Anjali sure bhai she just limb and walk back to RM

Shyam look at in shock as they all left, he was not getting how to find out way she limb .



As the reached in

Khushi: hang her self on his neck

Arnav: hold her " pagal " for her waist

Anjali: bhabi you are great kissed her cheek

Khushi:" go and do what i said ?"

Anjali: Bhai

Arnav what the ?

Khushi and Anjali had a high five

Anjali he will sure jump

Arnav :who taught her that?

Khushi did same . she brought her eyes balls in center and gave a scary look and show him tongue

Arnav: you naughty pie ,he try to kiss her

Khushi: just ran to kitchen " you cannot catch me "

Ramu kaka: smiled at them as he saw Arnav coming behind her

Arnav:Kaka woh coffee da please

Khushi: no kaka no coffee, he will have milk

Arnav: am i a baby

Kaka walk out

Khushi: yes you are my first baby ,drink

Arnav: no

Khushi yes aur doon aik show him her fist

Arnav: you are really .she didnot let him finish she placed the glass next to his lips he drank while wrapping his arm around her waist, and pull her close ,as he finish

Khushi nani

Arnav left her and look back

Khushi giggle kissed his cheek" like my good boy " wipe his lips

Arnav: you

Khushi go and keep an eye on him , i and Anjali will prepare dinner, as she say Anjali coming

Arnav: hmmm i will you both ,he sat on the counter

Khushi: "no go from here" pull him down " it is hot hear and you are still not well"

Arnav: Anjali what is that ? he pointed at her back

Anjali look away he peck her neck

Khushi in shock look at he he walk out of kitchen showing v at her

Anjali what is there?

Khushi kuch nahi lets make dinner



At dinning table


Anjali "bhahi i will serve him"

Nani hain hain kyun nahi

She walk to his side he was care full looking at her walking style she was limping , she pour in his plate ,

Anjali : bus ya aur ,she said in a very low voice he look in side the duppata and she did the same eyes trick

Shyam : hiccup as he really got scared

Anjali kya huwa

Shyam hiccup again , everyone look at them

Khushi: you quickly eat something your hiccup will go it is a very useful tootka (remedy) ,anjali help him

Mami yes yes anjali

Anjali:yes yes open your mouth she made him eat spicy dal . eat eat

Shyam was not getting how to swallow in as his tongue was burning ,he just puke as she put 2 more spoon in his mouth


Arnav disgusting dont you have any table manners ?

everyone made face

shyam i am sorry

Anjali just ran away as she was not able to hold her laughter

Mami: was feeling sick " excuses me "


everyone one left the table

Shyam was left alone ,he walk to his room. "what was that?everyone was eating but why i felt it so hot"he was really feeling embarrassed " and that girl her eyes , why i said yes ?" he just sat on bed .




Khushi and Anjali was rolling on bed and laughing like hell

Arnav :shhh pagalo , he close the door

Anjali: bhai did maa said hello hi bye bye to him

Arnav not yet

Khushi: lets hammer the last nail in MR Shyam Manhor Jha

Arnav what you are up to know ?

Khushi: check his arms " you have muscles "

Arnav: hold her arm "what you are up too"

Khushi: we need your and Akash muscles

Arnav for what crackpot ?

Khushi"Anjali you go and call him "

Arnav: Khushi what are you upto

Khushi: baby why you are in a hurry ? she wrap her arm in his neck

Arnav: bolna

Khushi: sealed his lips kissed him passionately , she left him as the were out of breath whisper " beat him black and blue ,she pointed at poolside

Arnav: look at Anjali who was with eyes asking him to come


Anjali chora haath hamara

Shyam: dekha let me see your eyes first

Anjali Bhai bacho

Arnav how dare you hold my sis hand? he just grab his arm ,and punch him as hard as he could

Khushi called nani and mami "dekha Arnav ko"

Anjali ran in Khushi bedroom and hug her , to hide her laughter .

Mami huwa kya

Khushi : we saw him holding Anjali hand

Anjali was hiding her self

Mami: yeh itna cheap hai,she look out both of her son's were beating him

Shyam listen to me i was just

Arnav: i saw it my self you where holding my sis arm .

Mami: get out of my home right a away .

Shyam:maasi ji

Mami: slap him

Shyam you all are taking me wrong .

Akash: pull him with his collar and drag him out of RM


mami look at Anjali who was crying with joy ,

Khushi i will talk to her you rest

Mami: anajli maa ko maaf kar do

Anjali : i will only marry NK

Mami yes yes you will only marry NK


Khushi felt someone hold her hand ,she look at Arnav, he was crying with joy "hey "she wipe his tears

Arnav you are blessing for me .


try the new ss Inner Guilt

dear kindly add this id

or pm me or scrap me your email id please , i will mail
Edited by naddiya26 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hello hi bye bye shayam! 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it alll...finally done..do update soon..loved the concept..loved how khushi care for him and for his family too
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...so hilarious😆...lol...better dan actual epis...update soon d next part!!😃lovinh khushi calling arnav "baby"😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
fantastic part dear...loved it👏

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