Dancing Queen! CHAPTER 25 part 2 !! hello again.! - Page 10

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Posted: 13 years ago
#91
Well, actually I like, no, love the twist...
Virat really loves, but the kind of person he
is, you can't blame Maanvi for what she does.
She just does not want to get hurt, and hates
Virat, and has a very good reason or it.
Love how you made her feel some kind
of connection, and make her think of him
the whole time.
But Virat is being really mean, how could he
do that to her? I think he desered this, he still
had a chance... But wasted it, I mean he caused
her getting back to her ex-boyfriend...
Love your update! As you see, your update has a
diffirent effect on me, I just can't stop talking!
Normally I get speechless, but today I talk to much,
Okay! I will stop now, don't worry...
Edited by BrunoMars - 13 years ago
avika26 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92
Doxt play wid fire mannu. . .its nt good for u.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#93
omg it was awesome plzzz continue asap
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Posted: 13 years ago
#94
amazing update
continue soon and do pm me!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#95
getting back together no thats shud nt happen.. ok cumin to ua story it s really movin very very interesting.. plz update daily.. thnx fr ua pm n also do pm me wen u update😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#96
one more thing make it a long one nxt tym.. this z my kind request plz😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97
That was really good!Could imagine myself in the scenario myself due to your descriptive writing...very articulately written👏.
Edited by shaz2009 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: BrunoMars


Well, actually I like, no, love the twist...

Virat really loves, but the kind of person he
is, you can't blame Maanvi for what she does.
She just does not want to get hurt, and hates
Virat, and has a very good reason or it.
Love how you made her feel some kind
of connection, and make her think of him
the whole time.
But Virat is being really mean, how could he
do that to her? I think he desered this, he still
had a chance... But wasted it, I mean he caused
her getting back to her ex-boyfriend...
Love your update! As you see, your update has a
diffirent effect on me, I just can't stop talking!
Normally I get speechless, but today I talk to much,
Okay! I will stop now, don't worry...



Thanks for your beautiful words!, im really appreciating the fact u take tym out to like what i do! Thanks agen xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
#99
omg why maanvi?? tooo good kimmy pm me!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh No dilip and Manvi Together Never Ever Guna Happen Jeevika And ViRAT please dont let that happen and that dilip is a dog face he left mamvi while
She was too weak saying that he couldn keep on worrying about her what a tramp
But i loved how virat had that devilish grin but im waiting to see virat's reaction one over the dilip truth and second that dilip amd manvi are getting back together
Awesome update
Continue asap amd pm me

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