Dancing Queen! CHAPTER 25 part 2 !! hello again.!

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shona v p

@Shona1907

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Posted: 13 years ago

#101

Nooo!! Manvi can not get bac with tat creep... Tat too jst to keep virat away 4m her... She is highly mistaken tat dis is gona help... Virat dude is gona fight 4 his girl... Da twist is really really really very interesting... Cud u make da updates longer plz plz plz:) continue soon n thanx 4 da pm:) w8ing 4 da nxt part soon, naturally expecting chap 9 since its weekend

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-bonbon-

@-bonbon-

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#102

OMG this is so interesting!

Loved the last sentence of the update!

Thanks for the PM and please do continue soon 😊

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guluna

@guluna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#103

mind blowing yr u r such a genius seriously i love this jealousy track amazing story😃

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Aysha

@aysha1989

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#104

Virat made a smart move and got everything out from Jeevika... But why did Mannu say that she is going back to Dilip...? Oh that was a bad move dear...
Thank you so much for the pm...

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virman2012

@virman2012

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Posted: 13 years ago

#105

Please write more.. and PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PM me...

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Nivedita

@NivFemirist

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Posted: 13 years ago

#106

hey thanx for the pm😊. If not for ur pm then i would have missed ur story😊 Its awesome. wow this story is even suitable for title EHMMBH after reading so many posts abt lack of jeeman😆 bcoz ur FF has the jeeman element too.😃 plz continue asap and pm me😊

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Fizza

@Rose_Tandon

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#107

Omg the story is getting more and more nice at evry update ...plz continue soon

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Kanwal_chohan

@Kanwal_chohan

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#108

OMG I loved it I'm lost for words if it wasn't for u
I wouldny have read this story I love it please pm
When u update and please remove this dilip guy the
Moment His name was mentioned I hated him

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Eleanor

@ElenaElenor

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+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#109

That was really good, your story is really nice. I am loving the concept. You describe the events beautifully, detailed and depth. I would love to find out more about the background story and insight of Dilip and Maanvi. I am hoping Virat gets his act together and shows her he is just not a 'rockstar' but someone she can have a relationship with. Their chemistry is brilliant! I am not liking Dilip! He sounds like a douche leaving her when she needed him the most. Hoping to read more...Elena