Dancing Queen! CHAPTER 25 part 2 !! hello again.!

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@wanderlust09

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

first of all...a big sorry for not commenting on the previous update...😃

well bth wer absolutely fabulous...👏

as much as i luvd to c a third party in virman ls...it actually hurts to c virat in such a condition😔

n hw dare did dat creep dilip warn virat...😡

wid each update m just falling more n more in luv wid ur work...

beautiful potrayal of viratz emotions...

plzz cont soon n thnx a lot for those regular update n the pm tooo...😊

waiting for the next...😍

Edited by alicemath - 13 years ago

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Kimmy

@Kimmy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: BrunoMars

This was an... I don't know,
still a bit speechless about it,
I actually lost words to tell how good
it was, again...
It was just perfect!

Wish that there was a love button so i cud press it on ur comments!!

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missmystic

@missmystic

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

awesome :D :D

great update and thanx for the pm

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Inquisitive_mind

@HmmBrazen

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#74

wow...!! it was too good.. virats anger n helplessness at seeing his manvi in another man's... wow wht love.. i m reading it again n again.. do pm me.
i m buddying n yes cont. soon
love yaa

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nishi12345

@nishi12345

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#75

oh wow

virat's possessiveness

i ma loving it

fab yaar

loved it sooo much

cont soon an dpm me

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deepika03

@deepika03

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Posted: 13 years ago

#76

intense and emotional...great progress...i just wish virat punches out that jerk...lolz...do continue soon n pm me :)

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lafiza

@lafiza

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Posted: 13 years ago

#77

suprb👏 do contine n don frgt to pm me.. thnx fr ua pm nw 😊

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ARRI

@arri-spy06

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Posted: 13 years ago

#78

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isha.raj_98

@isha.raj_98

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Posted: 13 years ago

#79

amazing update especially the last few lines and the whole virman scene...too good...pm me!!!

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Hooria

@hooriaa

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#80

So interesting i loved how virat jus went straight and forward and asked manvi about the guy
Im glad virat didnt give up nor will he give up he will find out
Thts the spirit of Virat
Awesome but too short please update longer
Continue asap and pm me please