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Nidsubh007

@Nidsubh007

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#241

Really looking forward to the next part. Started rereading some parts.

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Bubblii

@Bubblii

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#242

Meh... that's how I feel about this chapter... 15 pages on word ms and it still doesn't feel right...btw this story was only meant to be 40 chapters long..got a bit carried away... oopsy!

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#243

9000 word of perfection loved the update beautifully loved how he was nor rude to the blonde yet he was firm khushi and kannan friends ship is perfect loved how she was missing him and him her that b***h coming on him think she could be khushi disgusting loved the update hope kannan gets his girl and snake trying to talk to khushi she should at least told kannan loved thw update thanks for the pm

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zafi

@zafi

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#244

Superb Story.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Loved it.

Why isn't Khushi telling them about Snake and her nightmare because of what he did?

The kangan scene was beautiful.

Love the evergrowing bond between Kanaan and Khushi.

Very well written.

Looking forward to the next part.

Continue soon.

Thanks.😃

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s-576

@s-576

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#245

its beautifully written...I know you feel "Meh" about this chapter ...but I found it grand...it was very important to make the story flow from one stage to the next...and I loved every bit of it...and 9000 words!!! ...WOW...you surely have outdone yourself... and thank you...thank you...thank you ...verry very very much that you wrote such a long update

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#246

AWESOME UPDATE LOVED IT 9000 WORDS OF PERFECTION LOVED THE UPDATE LOVE KHUSHI N KANNAN N HOPE KANNAN GET ANJALI HOPE KHUSHI TELL THEM ABOUT SHYAM CONTINUE SOON THANKS FOR THE PM

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yusam

@yusam

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#247

KOOOL... MENAKA N PSYCHO SHYAM SCARE MEE... IMM SOOO ELATED FOR THE END N SOOO RELIEVED.. PHEW... ARNAV IS HOMEE.. YAYY..

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fhussain237

@fhussain237

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#248

Amazing update hun
Im both scared n excited to see arnav decision about meneka
Shyam the creep is getting more creepier I do hope arnav kicks him out soon
Kannan n anjali are so cute together.i wonder how khushi will confront kannan about his feeling for anjali
Aww arnav was so happy to see the bangles on khushis wrists
Continue soon n thanks for the pm

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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#249

beautiful update... finally he is back.. and she is in red.. hehehehehe.. can't wait for their moments in their own sanctuary his room..

kannan is a friend anyone would dream to have.. just perfect friend.. a brother in disguise.. i love khushi and kannan's relationship..