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Posted: 13 years ago
do teen din pehle masaum inta acha tha baarish bhi hui thi per phir se dhoop nikal aai hai update kab kar rahi hain jaldi karin na
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed



thanks dear..
oh okay... so u get it.. many cuming more..
sigh she knew it has alwasy been because of mayank always he has stood infront of her..
lolz... kya kero.. wrting alwasy lovestory has turned into a challeneg now... how many types of confession n celebrations i cna invent yaar.. next time samsay per 😆😆..
wasy i like ice crea per cnadle and than cheers
hmmm..lets see ..tum kitni thik ho


I m 1000% sure janni that Tai jaan is puppet and some one else is pulling her strings.Even u will agree with with me.😉
Its none other theeennn...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed



thanks dear..
oh okay... so u get it.. many cuming more..
sigh she knew it has alwasy been because of mayank always he has stood infront of her..
lolz... kya kero.. wrting alwasy lovestory has turned into a challeneg now... how many types of confession n celebrations i cna invent yaar.. next time samsay per 😆😆..
wasy i like ice crea per cnadle and than cheers
hmmm..lets see ..tum kitni thik ho

I m 1000% sure that TAI Jan is puppet and some one else is pulling her strings.Even u will agree with me.
That person is none other then bt...😉
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Sorry double post.
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Present mein past ko na bhool jana comments mein… rplyd to u all…

Chapter: 23

Present( haal)

Mayank: kahin nhi jaraha hoon bus abhi ata hoon…hm.

He hold placed his hand on her cheek n asure her…

Tai jaan: tum kahin nhi jarahy hoo..aj tu tumahara yaha rahna buhat zaorri hai…

Mayank: ap yaha kya ker rahi hain….mayank has already hit the button to call the doctor knowing she is in fear again the way she was holding his hand so tightly…

Tai jaan: nupur k bayan (words) layna hai inspector sehbah ko..

Mayank: nupur is waqt is position mein nhi hai k woh is kism ki kis bhi chees k samana keray..apk samhj kyun nhi ati hai yeah baat

Tai jaan: acha woh tum sab k sath baat kerny mein tumahray sath bina kisi talluq k rehny k halat mein hai… yeah kyun nhi khaty k tum yeah chahty hi nhi hoo…

Samrat and gunjan were dumb fold…this will cum and they both have to face it, this was desitine to be… yet so early ..it was just few days they have spend together and now there mother is here to separate them…and this time forever…and this time no one can help…no one… the damges done in past ..now they have to pay for that..

Dr.Nadir: dekhy mein ny apko ijazaat di thi isk matlab yeah nhi k ab yaha pora majma lagya..pls…yaha se aplog kam hon…yeah hospital hai itna shoor nhi keray

Mayank: apny permission di ??..

Dr.Nadir: I have to mayank…. Un k pass legal notice hai

Tai jaan smirk with proudness …Samrat n gunjan left the room with tai jaan mayank and inspector in room…with nupur…dr Nadir for precaution was there too if any how nupur reacts negatively

Samrat: ami ek din bhi intezar nhi kersati nah…aj sab khatam hojay ga…. He sat on the chair dipping his head in his hand

Gunjan: maagar ami ko bataya kis ny…jab hum dono ny nhi tu…

Samrat: us se kya farak parta hai … ab nupur sab sach kah day gi aur mayank yaha se bahar..nupur abhi itni stable nhi hoi hai gunjan…. Ab k tu mjhy dar hai hum nupur k sath mayank ko bhi kho day gay..

Gunjan: as tu maat kaho Samrat… kuch nhi hoga pata nhi mera dil kahta hai…mayank kuch nhi hony day ga

Samrat: tum zaroorat se zayda atebar ker rahi hoo us per…woh pehly bhi ek namukin ker chukka hai jis k natija hum sab dekh rahy hain…is baat ko nhi bholay ja sakta k is sab ki zaemdari mayank ki hai…sara kiya tu us k hi hai

Gunjan: samrat… tum phir se aj… kitny khudghariz ho tum sab… koi mayank k baray mein nhi sochata

Samrat: oh really… us ny meri behan ko apny faiday k liyan tallaq day di… woh mar rahi thi.. aur mein us k baray mein socho…wah…

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Past:( Mazzi)

Yeah mosam yeah mast nazary ..pyar kero tu in se kero…

Kertay hain yeah tum koisharay pyar kero tu in se kero..

Mayank was siting on the terrace railing enjoying the whether it was raining and it was such a pleasant sight, and he was enjoying it singing songs, yet he was missing someone so much..he came back home early as knowing traffic will be hell in evening if rain continues to pore so its better to cum home and enjoy this romanitc whether with ur beloved….

Ya beloved…he pretty well know he is love with his wife and he can see the feeling doubled returning from her side to….yet today following dr nadir's instructions he let her go out on her own, to market..but than Samrat accompany her, yet knowing Samrat will never go in mall and she will alone face the world he was glad she didn't have troubles in it…

Mosam hai ishaqna aay dil kahin se unko asay mein dhoond lana…

Mayank smiled at gunjan who came in humming this song

Mayank: kya baat hai bhabi… Samrat ko phone kero…koi ishiqana mood mein hai…us ko tu nikal pari…

She blushed and slaped on his arm..passing him tea..

Gunjan: devar ji yeah hum ap k liya gaa rahy thy..kya baat hai koi ksi ko itna miss ker rah ahi…

Mayank: itn acha mosam horaha hai aur dekho in dono ko humain chor ker long drive per gay hain..

Gunjan: is mosam mein long drive sir k dard hojaygi… wasy woh kam se gay hain

Mayank: janta hoon us k kam.. wasy harat hai aj tak usko mera birthday gift layn mein itna waqt nhi laga tu aj kyun lag rah a hai…

Gunjan: KYA..tumhain pata hai woh islyn gai hai…

Mayank: he chukled… ofcource pata hai.. hum ek dosray ko zaoroat se zayda achy treeqay se janty hai…

Gunjna: sach mein…per khabi bora nhi lagta u cant suprise each other…

Mayank: strange hai but we do surprise each other…kahbi kuch baato se..kahbi kuch moments se…khabi asy hi…life khud itny surprises dayti hai ko un mein sath dayna ek surprise hi hojata hai….

Gunjan: aha….i see.. tum tu bulkily love sick lag rahy hoo..

Mayank: chai achi hai…

Gunjan: han thik hai janti hoon apki biwi se zayda nhi…. Ajeeb nhi lagta nupur k liyan ek dam se itni sari feelings… she asked him with smiled and he return it…

Mayank: shoro mein laga tha.. I mean mjhy buhat jadli lag tha k mein ys k liyan itna sab kasay feel kersakta hoo..choti choti baato k kyun notice ker raha hoon.. ek dam se mein pagal hoagay hoon… yet phir sochny k bachy unko enjoy kerna shoro kya tu…life mein is se better aur kuch nhi laga…

He was looking at the rain drops and was telling her all so dreamingly

Gunjan: god u love her so much nah..

Mayank: yes I do… yaar ab mjhy fikar horahi hai ..yeah ullu tu car mein bhaita hoga pata nhi mall mein kya horaha ga..

Samrat: itni hi fikar hai tu apni biwi ko khud lya lerjata nah….

Mayank: finally…ap k kadam ghar per parahy…. Wah wah aur tum akelay akelay bheeg ker aai hoo…. Aur hum dono yaha dewaro se baatein ker rahy thy….he said dramatically with fake tears…

Gujan: kya hai mayank tum ny mjhy dewar kaha… nhi….

Samrat: pls tum dono… reham kero…kitnay drama kerty ho…

Mayank: aray hatho tum dono ki life ki wahid entertainment hai hum….warna ap dono… aur tum yeah pakro.. he gave her the cup having tea…and turned her around…chalo ja ker change kero warna acho acho k line lagjay gi…

He dragged her to their room…

Chai peelo..garam hai acha lagy ga… aur tini dair kyun ki…

Nupur: mjhy kam tha na…siping the tea she placed the cup…

Mayank: nupur.. tumhain mera gift layany mein 15 min zayda se zayda 30 mins lagty hain..aj 2 ghate lagy hain….

Nupur droped her jaw and then pout..

Kya…oops sorry…surprise break kerdiya…ab kya kero…apko lagta hai mjhy nhi pata

Nupur: pata hai tumhin pata hai….per mjhy kuch layna tha…

Mayank: aray phir bhi…

Nupur: aray kya bhi…meri marzi lagao jitna chay time…mjhy kuch special layna tha…. Meri shohor k birthday hai dost k nhi…huh….

She was about to move away, when he pulled her back to colloide with him..he encircle his arms around her waist…pulling her close..

Mayank: hmm..point hai..wasy mein tu apna special gift khud hi lay lo ga..donot u worry……so kya liya…

Nupur: tumhara birthday kal hai ….

Mayank: tu… bata do nah pls… hamesha tu bata dayti hoo..pls nah….itna sabr nhi hota mjh se…

Nupur: no way.. she broke the chain..and went away….

Nupur….no…pls nah..no no no….fine…

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Nupur: abhi tak barish horahi hai rukh hi nhi rahi hai..she was scared …

he came behind her and hugged her from back…it was chilling out side due to the rain and the wind…suddenly the whole whether from so warm turned to be so pleasant, yet wht she felt now was a bliss warm protectively wrapped around her….these gestures and closeness that has now adays cuming pretty frequently form him was giving both of them a sense of belonging and completeness…

Mayank: tu kya hua kahbi khabi tu baraish hoti hai hony do…

Nupur: acha hum tu ghar mein hai jo bahr hain unko kinti muskil horahi hogi ….dahand bhi hogai hai….

He griped her more close…

Mayank: hmm…..

He has not much to say to her..he was having the best moment, the clock was turning to strt new day and he wants to be as close as possible to her, this year of his life should began with her love surrounding him, promising many more together..plus the past year has gave him her..with all the rights and all of her.. he wants to hold her..

As soon as the bell rung to tell its time, she tried to turn ..yet he didn't allowed to…closing his eyes he has placed hi chin on her shoulder making her loss her all sense…

Mayank : kya hai… asa he wish kerdo…hilna zaroori hai..

Nupur: happy birthday…gift nhi chaiy..

He broke apart

Mayank: jaldi lao…she chuckled and he smiled through the way she left to bring it….

She forward a velvet box with a ribbon and he took it and open it.. to find a platinum band in it..

Mayank: aha… tu knees per bhait ker do asay kasay…

Nupur: mein kyun bhaito..larky kerty hai yeah sab… jo tum ny nhi kiya

Mayank: huh.. tai jaan ko kerna chaiy tha technically tu… lol…

He took it and as soon as he did he looked inside and there her exprsion get worried…engrevd inside was there names.. and he was so pleasantly surprise with it.. and amazed to… he looked at with a amuse expresson and she smile sheepishly forwarding his hand he asked her to do so…

Mayank: asa lag raha hai role reversal hogaya hai

Nupur: very funny…

Mayank: he smiled and looked at her…who was watching his every expressions so closely… thanku….grinningly he said to her…wasy mjhy nhi pata tha diya waly waqiay k baad tum yeah kero gi…

Nupur: mayank…mein ny yeah us wajah se nhi kiya…

Mayank: janta hoo…but this amazing and extremely surprising to… as kuch mein ny nhi socha tha….she smiled too… wasy mjhy ek gift uar chaiy apni pasand k… he said encircling his arms around her waist…

Nupur: kya…batao…mein lado gi…

Mayank: nah…mein khud hi lay lo ga… lay lo…he was looking at her intently and smilingly his eyes were so fixed on her making her bit nervous….

Nupur: han…no matter how much she tried to sound normal her voice cam displaced..

Mayank didn't left her eyes nor the slight smile left him…yet nupur breath got stuck in her thorat..she can see the way he was decrease the space between them and she was felling so many butterflies in her stomach…

She closed her eyes not being able to take the way he was looking at her….he smiled at the way her cheeks turn red, and she was trembling and the way her hands crawl up to hold his shoulder… she was so so nervous…

He moved forward and press his lips on her forehead and she clutch him more tightly…as much has he kept the on her skin…moving a bit away from her he looked her flickering closed eyes and softly kissed them..Earning a sigh from her…

She didn't expected him a to kiss on forhead she thought The kiss, yet it relaxed her, but then the way he repeated it again …she wasn't prepared for tht.. she wonder wht it is cuming next….but than when he didn't for sumtime she slightly opened her eyes….the blush was turning into the deepest shade of red..lowering her eyes a smile playing on her lips she tried to move away but he caught her…again tried and he didn't let her go..

So ultimately she has to meet his smiling eyes..the moment he was awaiting for..he wants to see her, what she felt, the ectasy he felt, does she felt so too….did it effect her the same way as it does him, and above all do he has her persimmon for this.. as soon as there eeys might and the way he saw the glitter is in her eyes and then again her esyes lower it wamred him so much so so much…but then it pulled him to….he leaned more close to her and she now can feel his breath on her face looking at her so closely was treat and he have it has mush as he wants.. until she has to look back in his eyes, who has oozing passion n love for her..and that evry moment he make her eyes closed again , as he leaned and kissed her at the corner of her lips… she gasp and as he moved away a bit..she hugged him abruptly trying to calm her nerves…

He tightly wrapped his arms around her hiding himself in her hairs…today it was more about him, he knew was demanding yet he wants to, he wants to have all her love, all her feelings all her confessions… he wants to have her and feel the bliss..whispered a thanks in her ear, making her shuddered a bit, he kept her in his arms for more than long, it was the best the start of his years…

Just than a knock on the door made them cum out of there wonder land…and he moved away from her, and remove her hairs from her face..and let her go…

Samrat: kya hai cake cut na hai k nhi….kaha hai mayank

Mayank: kyun cheek raha hai yahin hoon…

Gunjan: happy birthday dever ji…hum ny socha ap log thora arms se wish ker lain phir hum aay…wasy disturb tu nhi kiya…

Nupur cant turn more red …and though maynk looked at her and couldn't help to hide the smiled yet he covered it

Mayank: ab tu kerdiya… us ko tu kuch nhi hosakta nah….bolo….thanks bhabi….'

Shilpa: happy birthday beta.. she hugged his son lovingly..pholo palo abaad raho….

Mayank: maa…he said dramatically and hugged her,, and she slaped him slightly on head…

Cuting the cake he took a pieces out, thinking whom to offer first..

Shilpa: khelado biwi ko aj pehly kheldo hum bulkily bora nhi manay gay

Mayank: mein soch raha hoon khud pehly khaoo…. Mera birthday hai….he said placing the cake near his mouth….

Nupur: bulkily thik baat hia…she smashed the cake on his face..as she hit his hand with her…

Mayank: nupurrr….yeah kya hai…

Samrat: aray wah …yeah lay mayank meri taraf se and another pieces was smashed on his face covering his whole face..

Gunjan: kya hai thori jaga tu chorna chaiy thi nah…ab mein kaha wish ker gi…

Mayank: kahbardar… yar yeah kya hai… he wiped off the cake from his face..

Gunjan: thanku dever ji…and again she made it covered with cake…

He frown with irritation ..and they were laughing..

Mayank: tum logo ko mein choro ga nah…

Nupur: nhi meray kamray mein cake fight nhi bahar ja kero mein saaf nhi kerna wali raat bhar bhait ker…pls….

Gunjan: thik tu tum raat bhar bhait ker jo chahy kero…hum sunay ja rahy hain….good nite..happy birthday once again…she winked to nupur..

The left leaving frowning mayank having a piece in his hand..

Mayank: nupur mayank ahmed yeah ap ny bulkily acha nhi kiya…ab tumhain kaun bachy ga….

Nupur: mayank nhi na pls….plss no…

Mayank: acha cake tu kha lo… he ask her to eat and she smilingly did it..but than the evil mayank was back and the remaing piece was on her face… hahah…that's look better…ab hum dono ek jasay lag rahy hain na…life partners jasay…

Nupur: very funny..ahhh..mayank….stop it..

Present:

Inspector: I am sorry mayank per mjhy yeah kerna hai.mein zayda waqt nhi lo ga…. Nupur ji humain ap se kuch sawal kerny hain….

Nupur weakly nooded in yes and mayank hold her hand more tighly….

Inspector: kya mayank ny apko zabardasti apny sath rekh raha hai….

Nupur: nhi….

Inspector: maagr apki aur mayank ki tu talluq hochuki hai ….apki valida yeahi kahti hain..

Nupur: ji???... asa tu kuch nhi hai…woh meray shohor hain…

The earth beneath tai jaan's feet was pulled so abruptly that she was shaken , she just cant believe wht she is hearing …this can't be true nupur lying that so much… nupur can never stay with him like this noway… and how can she lie…no …

Inspector: ji?

Tai jaan: inspector sehba yeah jhot kah rahi hai mayank ny is ko majboor kiya hai…

Mayank: mein ny tu ab tak ek lafz nhi kaha tai jaan…he smirk

Tai jan was dumbfold wht to do wht not to..she doesn't know wht has gone into nupur that she is even agreeing on a sin and want to live with mayank without any relationship..it can be true …what the hell he has done and what he has planned so much tht even nupur is in all this game ..they them self said nupur said ..nupur's condition showed it all tht mayank left… he never return back ..wht the hell it can be true..nupur even didn't contacted her with his phone…ya she was observing it too…

Tai jaan: tum ny khud kaha tha k tumahri talluq hoi hai

Nupur: unhony she pointed to tai jaan …mjhy majboor kerny ki khosih ki thi k mein mayank se khola lay lo…. Aur yeah sab yeah islyn ker rahi hain … unhony jhoot kaha

She breath heavily and this was it..

Mayank: inspector sehbah pls…aur nhi apko jo jawab chaiy tha mil gaya hai…aur ab mein bardhast nhi kero ga k aur koi bhi bar bar humain pershan keray…agar mein apk sath co-operate ker raha hoon tu is k yeah matlab nhi… ainda asa hona nhi chaiy warna ab mein case kero ga..

Inspector: I m sorry mayank sehab… ab asa nhi hoga

Inspector left …so Samrat entered

Tai jaan don't know how to react or what to do, if only she was allowed she would have killed mayank right here, she was feeling like its so much…he can do tht…he can do that…she was going mad… mad in anger…

Tai jann: tum kya samjhty hoo tum jeet gay…

Mayank: nhi abhi tu aur buhat kuch jeetna baqi hai….yeah tu sirf shorrat hai…

Tai jaan: aur tum kero zina ( na jiaza rishta) kero..gunaha(sin) hai yeah shadi k baghir apny is k sath rahna …zara bhi sharm nhi aai tum ko

Nupur: apko nhi aai jab ap yeah sab khel khel rahi thi…shadi se lay ker aj tak… apk liyan tu sab khel tha…. aur yeah koi gunha(sin) nhi hai..maynk aj bhi mera shoohar hai ..apny ek chal chali thi hum ny bhi ek aur us k jawab chali ….bus….

Tai jaan: asa mein hony nhi doon gi mayank khbi nhi….tum asa khud ko jeeta hua maat smajho… abhi buaht kuch meray hat mein hai…sab se bari chees meray hath mein abhi bhi hai

Mayank: thik hai tu ap ab nai chal chaly.. mein intezar ker raha hoon.

Tai jaan: yaad rekhna Nupur mein tab bhi kaha tha aj bhi kah rahi hoon… mjhy dohka dayna k anjam tumhary liyan acha nhi hoga…. Ab tu aur bhi bora hoga tum dono k sath…. Tumhain tu beti samhj k mein ny chor rekha tha magar ab

Nupur: BETI…. Ap ny mjhy khabi kuch nhi samjha

Nupur was breathing heavily, the anger, the pain, and the fear, plus her health she hasn't recovered fully she is still evry weak, and now all this …mayank was holding her and rubbing her hairs to calm her down…

Mayank: bus buhat hogaya …ek min aur nhi….ap jarahi hai ya mein security ko bolao..

She left the place and mayank set beside her..holding her hand….and kissed her palm… She smiled looking at him..

Nupur: it worked…

Mayank: it has too..per tum ny acha nhi kiya nupur…relaz.. aram se thora rest kero..

Nupur was slowly drifting to sleep as dr injected her relaxant to calm her down and make her rest

Samrat: tum dono bolay gay yeah sab ho kya raha hai…asa kasay hoskata hai ….akhir sach hai kya

Gunjan: mjhy pata tha asa hoi nhi sakta…mayank smiled at gunjan…mein ny kah tha us ki ek bar baat tu sun lo…mayank nupur k sath as kasay kersakta hai

Mayank: yeah kis ny nhi socha k mein asa kerskta hon k nhi,…tu ab us per saafi kyun man rahy hoo..han hum ny jhoot kaha tha humari divorce hogi hai….is k elwa humaray pass koi rasta hi nhi tha… aur humain waqt chaiy tha sab thik kerny k liyan… Mein ny tu tuhjy batna bhi chaha tha tu nhi suna..aur tu aur gunjan ny baat kern chaiy tu bhi tu ny nhi kerny di…mhjy is k kayal rekhny ki baat tujhy email mein kerni pari…

Samrat was lost of words…it was true so ture he never once though that how mayank did it, can maynk do it…all he thought was wht happen to his sister..he accused him and didn't talk to him once, and was actually one of those who asked him not to ever return to the house again…. And threw him out

Samrat: tu kay tu ny

Mayank: han mein ny nupur ko khabi talluq di hi nhi..kehal tha woh bus

Samrat: per tu ny asa kyun kiya

Mayank: woh sab mjhy ab tujhy nhi batana… tum log ghar jao…kafi takh gay hoo nupur bhi thak gai hai… it was big for her….buhat dino se akealy bardhasht ker rahi hai… ab tu sukoon mila hai …

Samrat can't argue to him to tell him anything, he is right Samrat has lost the right to question him, he didn't trusted him neither tried to find the truth nor ever thought how mayank is where he is, he was acused of certain legal offenses too, he has to leave country even that Samrat never tried to help him in his case…neither he thought about him once…nobody actually did.. so now when he has not done the biggest sin they all though he did, he has no right to know why he did so …when he was telling them trying to make them understand they weren't listening…..

Even his parents asked him not to show his face ever n didn't listen to him, courtesy Samrat who told them all before mayank could explain.. sumwhere Samrat unknowingly helped his mother to make things worse for mayank

But to hell with wht they did with him..the best part is they still are together…it seems to be a miracle…it seems everything is now as perfect as always…. he can only thank god and mayank who didn't did wht he was asked to do..rather he still stood with his sister…. It felt like everything was a bad dream and now things what so ever are… they will fix it as they are together…

Mayank sat beside her and sigh in relief, this wasn't the thing that he was worried he is relief as now, nupur has faced the only thing she has to face.. whatever is there now he will handle and he meant to make things extremely worse for her mother…

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So finally cuming to a point where the major mystery or thing tht is troubling is moving away…

huge applause to Parul ..who actually linked the thought between both Ardhangini and parichey…. About the marriage n divorce ..thnks dear… its so good to see so intelligent readers among mine.. last daafa k water cooler valiyah aur I think ashu k tha.. this time u to it…rofl…

Updates won't be to to quick…. Depends upon I m being able to write or not

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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update API...
i loved it sooo very much...hayeee
as i said m just sooo happy with this part with both Past n Present
loved it to BITS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
u know jab Gunjan ne kaha na ke she felt ke kuch accha hi hoga toh even i was feeling the same...n yaaayyy!!!! we were right!! 😳 😆
OMG!!!!!!!!! this past part was sooo Damn Cute, Adorable n Romantic...
i loved it sooo much!!!!!!!!
Awww...Mayank was waiting for her n even knowing she went to get a gift for him...Gosh!!
this two knew each other sooo well!!
loved it lodsss 😳
OMG!!!!!!! 😲 Mayank again hugged her this time Romantically...hayeee
Gosh!!!!!!!! the wishing n gift part was Heavenly!!!!!!!!
loved it to BITS!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😳
Lolzzz!!!!!! i agree Tai jaan ko hi inko propose karna chahiye tha...🤣
that was damn hilarious!! 🤣😆🤣
Awww...Nupur ka gift was sooo nice bt i love what Mayank himself give him n her too...😉😆
🤣 uff!!! kabab mein haddisss...bt i love dos haddisss...😆
n cake part was awesomeee...pata hain iss update parhne ke agle din hi Uni mein hamare ek frnd ka B'day tha bt usmein B'day boy ke alawa sabko cake lagaya gaya...arhhh n for the 1st time meri baat kisi ne nhi mani n mujhe bhi lagaya... 😆🤣 bt i had lotsss of Fun...😳
n OMG!!!!!! OMG!!!! OMG!!!!!! 😲
yayyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i loved it sooo much!!!!!!!! yes!!!!!!!! They are not divorced yay!!!!!! i love u lodsss API...🤗🤗🤗
bt i want to know ke phir Nupur bimar kyun huyi n uski asi halat!!! 😔
chalo jo bhi ho m sooo happy now!!!!! hayeee
loved it lodsss
love u lodsss API...🤗🤗🤗
Edited by -Anila- - 13 years ago
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fab update again FIZA .

m loving d past .specialy d terrace scene was so cute .n denm the intimacy between mayur .its fab .

n coming to past ...

mayur ka divorce nahi hua!!!!!!!! dats gr8 ...👏
i loved d way nupur handled police n tai jan strongly .
but nupur calld her TAI JAN ...use edit kar .

par is she her real mother? isitialy she seemd to me over protective or too much business oriented but now ...😕
Edited by kheya-mayur - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
heyy awsm update present & past both were amazing Lvd Nupur's gift
and the way she replied to tai jannn awsm yarr jst awsm
But plzz dn't make samrat or Gunjan negative i m lvng their bond as wel :)
Thanxx for Pm .

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