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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: --Sanchu--

this was such a cute update...the past was so terrific...and coming to the present...well its scaring me more and more...
Fiza please kuch toh bata do...akhir hua kya hai???




thansk alot Sanchu..
glad u liked it
jani mein present kholo gi bus in ki shadi hojay.. with that tum loog relate ker pao gay present ko past se... aur bus phir present will strt opening



Originally posted by: Auroni.92

That ws amazing part dii...
Laughing at mayank's condition..lol
And mayank with his maa-dad scene ws so adorable..perfect family..
Loved it..
Cont soon..




thanks alot dear
lol... im glad u r enjoying it so much...
kisi k tu parents achy hony chaiy nah...
will cont very soon



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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -SupriyaluvsMN-

aww... nyc update!
sab kuch Happy Shappy!~😃




thanks alot
lol..han abhi tu sab happy n shappy...
😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice part
loved it
thnx for d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago


thnku

Originally posted by: .Divya.

Nice update Fiza.. 😊



thanks alot


Originally posted by: Sweety.Arjun

Nice part
loved it
thnx for d pm




thanks alot dear



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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Irum.

First of all u were in happy mood when u update and Meri Allah se dua hai k wo tumain hamesha khush rakhe.

Now coming to update .Present had hope as Nupur ws trying to get her conscious back.Ab dekhna yeh hai k Mayank jis war ki baat kr raha hai wo kya hai?
Past ws very beautiful.Ek hi ghar main ,ek hi chaat taale do extremes.Ek taraf Mayank k parents jo itne loving,affectionate,caring and concerned hain and doosri taraf poor Nupur and samrat.I liked Mayank's bonding with his father.It ws friendly.I ws continuously smilimg when he ws teasing his mother and late on he ws teased by his father for gift.It s very beautiful. Mayank was always by Nupur's side to fulfill her every wish whether it ws card made by her or her wedding dress colour.
U played the imagery so well.It ws like I m standing there and watching every thing wit my own eyes,especially wo Salman,Mayan and Nupur wala part.




thanks alot dear...thanks for all ur prayers thts wht u need the most
yup present is not turning to positivity...it will after two parts get sum grip
thanks alot
hmm so tu hai.opposites hain dono taraf..
hey thanks alot
glad u liked it n enjoyed it
thnks alot
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Posted: 13 years ago
rplyd to u all...thanku...may sound as filler.. next will be hopfully on sunday night

Chapter: 15

All the pre wedding things were done quite perfectly and with all the fun, it was more of fun for Samrat and gunjan rather than mayank n nupur, though they did enjoyed it, but the more days were cuming more nervousness was getting into them, more than nervousness there was confusion ..though mayank did got his moment of enjoyment as he pretty well knew wht he is doing..but nupur neither knew why he is doing nor why she is doing so…

Wedding was grant, to grand that he was annoyed with the fact, everything was horribly posh and lavish, pretty clasy.

Mayank was strangely called at the study and as he reached he was shocked to see all the elders there with weird expression, he tried to ask his father threw eyes wht, and he said cum in …

Mayank: ji ap logo ny humain bolaya..

Tai jaan: apny mehaar k baray mein kya socha hai…

Mehaaar is alimony.. but in islam its like an amount husband give as security to wife..even if divorce has not been done..he has to give it

Mayank: mein ny kya socha ny hai is baray mein… ap logo decide kerlain.. mjhy koi atieraz nhi hai…

Salaman: tai jaan ki baat bori sun lay pehly app…

Mayank: ji?

Tai jaan: hum chaht hain ap apny shares nupur ko mehaar mein day dain…

Mayank: WHT>… tai jaan… …

Tai jaan: is mein masla kya hai.. ap k kayal hai k nupur apk shares kha jay gi kya… dekhay mayank hum apni beti k mustaqabil(future) ko asay hi nhi chor saktay.. koi tu security chaiy humain…ap aagr yeah kersakty hain tu thik hai warna…

Mayank: WARNA???,…oh tu yaha koi wanra bhi hai…

Shilpa: mayank beta …. She tried to relax him…

Mayank: thik hai hum shares boray k boray un k naam kerday ga… magar mehaar –e-moqida mein… hum woh shares Nupur faraz ahmed k naam nhi keray ga…. Nupur Mayank k naam kerayga.. akar ap ko manzoor hai tu thik hai warnaa…. Fasala keraly ..hum jay ab

Tai jaan fumed with anger.. he was already fuming with it …so finally she showed wht she wanted ..his part of shares..but she forgot he knew it pretty well and was actually waiting for her this demand…mayank is the major share holder of the company as he is only son of shlipa n salman… yet Nupur n Samrat has divided ones … so now if mayank gave his shares to Nupur..she will be kinda owner of whole bussines

Tia jaan: thik hai….

Salman: ap kaha jarahy hai…papers dekhlay..

Mayank: baba hum yaha rekh ker aj k din apna mood nhi karab kerna chahty… aur papers ab mera lawyer khud bany ga…aur taseeli ( conformation) k liyan ek copy apko mil jay gi tai jaan….aur apko zayda fikar ki zaroorat nhi hai…kyun k humain kafi achy se andaza tha is baat ka..tu papers ready hain…per milay gay apko aj nhi….kal valimay k bad hum apko day dain ga…aur agar phir apko check kerna hai tu ….company k lawyer se call ker k confirm kerly

He left the place… knowing if he get to hear any more of her nonsense he is gona rply her in pretty bad tone.. tai jaan was taken a little back, she has to be very perfect at her moves, he is watching evrystep quite keenly…

She thought in all the awkwardness and all the feeling of new relationship he will not notice her moves..but he did..he very well knew all …he knew it from the start and was actually waiting for her to say it loud n clear…salamn smiled at his son… he isn't to easy to get trapped in his bhabi's plans..

It was day of there wedding he was trying to get ready, the decorum of his room was already making him hell nervous, why people have to remind again n again about all THOSE things….huh…

Mayank: koi masla nhi hai mayank… ap nupur se shadi ker rahy hain… na hi ap un se na hi woh ap se yeah sab ki umeed rekhti hai… hain na??...err.. haan I m confident on this part… aur wasy tu yeah na mumkin hai k nupur hum se is kiism ki koi umeed rekhy but zahir se baat hai us ko bhi yeah sab pershan ker raha hooga… so kuch nhi kerna sirf us se baat kerni hai… aram se..relax….

Shilpa: hum andar aay kya..

Nupur: aay choti ami.. ap asay kyun poch rahi hain..

Gunjan: anty addat daal rahi hai ..ab se tumahry kamray mein poch ker hi ana paray ga…

Nupur: gunjannn…..

Shilpa: aj meri beti ko koi tang nhi keray ga.. mayank ko bhi ijazat nhi hai….

Gunjan: aay hay anty ap ny us k armano per pani pair diya…

Shilpa: gunjaan…

Gunjan: okay okay… hum zara apni saasu maa ko dekh ker aaty hain…

Shilpa: is baat mein tu hamian zara bhi shak nhi tha k ap aj buhat khubsorrat laagy gi… pata hai mein hamesha sochti thi k patni kis se ap ki shadi hogi.. kasa hoga… acha bhi hoag k nhi… ap khush bhi hogi us din ya nhi… ya khush nhi tu kam se kam poor sukoon tu ho… aur jab bhi mayank k samny asai koi baat kerti thi.. tu kahta tha arams se hum sab hai na..kuch nhi hoga…. Per khabi yeah nhi socha tha k ap mayank ki biwi banay gi…. Nupur beta dil mein koi uljhan tu nhi hai nah… apko zabardsti tu nhi lag raha na aj..

Nupur: choti ami… meray dil mein koi uljhan nhi hai.. aur shayd itna sukoon tu apni zindagi k ksis fasaly mein mjhy nhi mehsoos hoa… magar mayank k kya..

Shilpa : she chuckled and cupped her face… us ko yeah fikar hai k tum sukoon se rah sako..aur tumhain yeah k woh… tu aur tu shayd tum dono k humsafar se hum mang bhi nhi saktay thay… yeah jo ek dosray ki khushi ki chah hai na hemsha se tum dono mein…. Yeah tumahry rishty ki sab se bari taqaat hai….

Ap janti hain maaynk inta muskil insaan nhi hai… han per kuch zayda hi seedhi seedhi moo per baat kah dayta hai… woh dost ko bori nhi lag sakti han sahyd khabi biwi ko lag jay…

Nupur yeah rishta ek larki baanti hai aur larkay sirf nibhata(follow) hai…. Aur mayank wohi keray ga jo usko mehsoos hoga… aur ap woh nhi kerti jo ap mehsoos kerti hai.. mjhy mayank ki fikar nhi hai.. woh kha day ga sab..per ap nhi kah pay gi…. Per is rishty mein..jab bhi job hi mehssoos kero.. kah dayna… mang layna.. nhi tu izahr kerny k alfaz k elawa bhi bht se tareeky hoty hain… aur apko samjhy nhi mein woh galti nhi kery ga..woh apko parhna janta hai

Taqreer(speech) kafi lambhi hogi haina..

She nodded in no….

Shilpa: wasy ek baat bato.. mayank bulkily shoohr(hubby) k role mein agaya hai… kafi behas ki hai us ny… Mrs wasrsi Valima mein kyun invited hai… mjhy woh aur in k beta dono nhi chaiy …

She couldn't help to blush and giggle…

Aba ny bari muskil se manaya hai janab ko… per aj ap ko dekh rahi hoon tu lag bhi rha hai.. itni khubsroorat lag rahin hai ap.. Adhiraj roay ga apni kismet per….

She smiled more and lower her head to hold her blush….

Shilpa kissed her forehead ….and bless her and left to se what her soon is upto…

……..

Shilpa: mayank ap taiyar hogay k nhi..

Mayank: ji ami hum tu taiyar hai.. chaly….

She came in and put hand on his cheek…

Shilpa: khush rahy…aur us ko bhi hamehsa khush rahy… humain ap per pora behroosa hai… wasy aj kafi sari larkiyon k armanao per pani pihrany wala hai… wah wah..

She was looking at him with admiration…he smiled..

Mayank: amii.. apk beta hon..thora buhat tu asar aay ga nah….

Shilpa: han bulkily.. magr phir bhi ..ap humari beti ko competition nhi day sakty ..aj us k din hai… aur woh sach mein haseen lag rahi hai..

Mayank: yeah kya baat hoi shadi meri bhi hai.. tu sirf us ko din kyun hai… ab chaly ya yahin rahna hai..

Samrat: itni jaldi kya hai… arams se chaltay hain nah….

Shilpa chuckled and left the two friends to tease each other…

Samrat: tu taiyari kasi hai…

Mayank: mein kya ksis jang per jaraha hoon jo taiyari kerk jao ga…

Samrat: khaty hain k a man become hero aur zero at his first night… so wht are u planning….

Mayank: agr apko pata nhi hai tu mein dobara bata doon..k mein already hero ho us k liyan…. Aur yeah wasy detail mein bato gay zara tum… tumahri shadi ko tu abhi ek week ha nah….abhi se kitni research ki hai tum ny

Samrat: mjhy maat char aj tera waqt hai,… chal chal… aur meri behan k kayal rekhna..

Mayank: nhi rekho ga… had hai yaar…sab k sab s k kayl rekhan us k kayal rekhna… pehly nhi rekhta tha kya… aur us ko ksis ny bola mayank k kayal rekhna… meri tu koi side per hi nhi hai had hai..

Samrat: teri side per sirf ek hi insaan hota hai..

Mayank: sach mein ..aj mein apni best friend ko kitna miss ker raha hoon…

….

Tai jaan: nupur… yeah kuch papers hain in per sign keray nikah k liyan chaiy honag..apk mehar mein mayank kuch transferee kerna hai

They were set of blank stamp papers..

Tai jaan: dekh kya rahi hai app…sign kerain..waqt nhi hai humaray pass zayda..

Sumwhere she was reluctant yet she signed it .. and tai jaan left the place.. and took her too the venue…

………

Ritual were performed smoothly and they were now tied in the most scared bond..and that was now given then Goosebumps… so all that was planned needs to get executions and they actually donot know wht is the plan…

Taking wishes from everyone he meet them, he moved down the stage to meet his mom,

Shilpa: khush raho hamesha.. she hugged him patting his back…

Tai jaan was standing beside her, he smirk and moved to her to n bow down his head… for the first time in life she actually spread her hand on his head… and wished him…

Samrat: kya baat hai saaly ami ny tujhy Mubarak baad di…

Mayank: hota hai haota.. aur correction mr.saala tu hai mera ab…

Samrat: wasy tu tu mjhy villan lag raha hai…

Mayank: kyun,…

Samrat: agr achanak ap k yeah gayal na ata tu aj meri shadi horahi hoti…

Mayank: uff… kitna bora hua na teray sath…

Samrat: tu hamehsa asa hi kerta hai ,.meri maa bulkily thik kahti hai…

Mayank: Samrat sahab tameez se baat kero, tumahri behan k shoohor hoon…

Samrat: tu..oye hello…meri behan ko zara bhi tang kiya nah tu..he pointed his finger…

And he slapped the finger away

Mayank: thora tu kero ga,… I m not changing with my friend… no ways…

Samrat: lay agai..teri friend kam, biwi….

He turned to look at his back, and smiled a bit, the old shy hesitant all in thoughts person arrived…yet she was his wife now…the added relationship make him took a deep breath..

Gunjan bring her to the stage, after a huge session of calming her nerves..

Nupur: stage per jana zaroori kyun hota hai..

Gunjan: lol… lay pori duniya abhi tak baht kyun wait ker rahi hai… un ko aghir dulhan dekhni hai… wasy tu kissi aur ko bhi tu dekhna ho ga nah… hm…

Nupur: dekho gunjan plss… mjhy tang maat kero..pls…

Gunjan: kya hua hai nupur… jaanaa tu hai na ..asa kasa..aur kuch nhi hoga just relax… sab thik rahy ga..ab utho aur chalo…

Tia jaan: ap dono bahar kyun nhi arahy hain..

Gunjan: anty bus us k dress thik ker rahi thi chalein.. chalo is se pehly ami tumhain lay ker jay …

Standing there waiting for him to accompanying him, there were so many weird things he can feel, it was nervousness, tht he can actually read on her face to, there was strange aura…the more she ws caming towards him the more he was feeling tht lifes new chapter has began bring many more things they will get known to…

She came and sat beside him, and now things were appearing more n more difficult, though they were not alone, people were cuming to congratulate them, but things seems to be so change, the person beside whom she always find so comfort all of a sudden it was so uncomfortable or rather weird,…even he couldn't cum up with anything right now to say or do,.

But than he deicided to break the ice, they cant live like this live long…and that so diproved of her smile…

Mayank: he whispered…tumhain pata hai aj itna kamal k waqiqaya(story) hoa hai….

He waited for her to ask him wht… and did heard

Nupur: kya… she whispered in an extreme non audible voice…

Mayank: tumhari ma ny mjhy aj galay lagaya .. woh bhi kuch had tak pyar se

She stunningly looked at him and he looked at her back, though she moved her eyes back away n chukled a bit, but he kept looking for few more moments before he joined her to in giggles…

The sight was different, looking at her so closely after so long was ..was..amzing, the added attraction was the way she was looking, and the most satisfying thing was the way her eyes looked in his, seems nothing has changed..

Yet they both knew just this few second eye lock made them realize life has changed, feelings has changed, maybe expectations are changed, they way they look each other has changed, yet what hasn't change is the need to of each other in there lifes…the content feeling of having eachother beside, it gave them strange peace, this are changing yet for the betterment…just one look made them realize tht they are beside each other so nothing to fear..n one look made them realize this too..they are now husband n wife. .. the friendship is now a slight back seated.. they now can see mayb expectations, hopes.. plans, imaginations thatwhat the life is holding from now and that so with togther..




Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
edited.

its been long time ... pheww finally i hv commented on this ff.

i really dnt knw wht to say abt this woman ... selfish is very small word for her ... wht an woman...apni beti ko hi mohra banaya shares lene k liye

how disgusting!! how can a mother stoop so low??

i like mayank's common sense, that he was aware of her plan... n took a right decison for her n for them.

shilpa-nupur scene was so nice.

its more like a mother-daughter convo ... when nupur's own mother is an opportunist!!

mayur scene was also very nice ... mayank took a right step before entering their new life ... new life with old realtion ... nice step!!

bt i really worry for nupur ... why taijaan took her signature on blank paper ... it ll be very bad for future. is this woman her biological mother?? i doubt.

continue soon.

love ya...



Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update API...
Sigh!!!!!!!! Beautifully written...
aj toh official ho gaya i just hateee this woman To the COREEE of my heart n to the Extreme of my Hatred...Huh!!!!!!!!!
kitniii jyada ghatiya aurat hain...Ma hain ya nhi...arhhh
i LOATHE Her to BITS...Arhhh
iss aurat ko toh main...arhhh
YA ALLAH!!!!!!!! main kabhi soch bhi nhi sakti ke iske dimaag mein yeh sab ho sakta hain...
i mean mujhe yeh tha ke han woh Nupur ki shadi Mayank se issiliye liye karwa rahi hain ke isse Nupur ko bhi hissa milega Mayank ki property mein n dis way Nupur ke paas jyada hoga bt maine asa kabhi nhi socha ke woh ghatiya aurat Mehaar mein Mayank ki sare shares hi mang lengi...HUH!!!!!!!
dekho toh!!!! arhhh i hate her i juat simply Loathe that woman...arhhh
Wow!!!!! i loveee Mayank here...he is just sooo smart han!
par kya fayda phir bhi woh uske chaal mein a ahi gaya na akhir mein...Sigh!
hayeee hayeee uss aurat ne blank papers par Nupur ki sign le li...😲
m toh sure MN ke alag hone mein sab se important role iss Blank paper ka hi hoga...
hayeee...kitni giri huyi hain yeh aurat!!!!!! arhhh officially i LOATHE her now...Huh!!!! *hmph*

hayeee...mere MayUr ki akhir shadi ho hi gayi...Wow!😍
ufff!!!!!! API!!!!!!! ap thakti nhi na mujh se tareef karwa karwa kar...hayeee plzzz mat thaka karo yaar...lolzzz ase hi alwaysss AwesomestTT writings likha karo aur mujhe aur... aur... aurrr tareef e karne ka mauka diya karo...hayeee
i sooo loved d way u alwaysss Explain this Sacred Relationship of Hubby n wifey...Sigh!
loved d way Shilpa Aunty explained everything sooo Beautifully!! n for sure credit goes to my API...so...
Hatsss off to u API...
m sooo Proud of myself that i cam across such a Brilliant writer like u n blessed to get such a Gr8 API like u...MA!
i m sooo Eagerly waiting for the next part...hayeee
Super excited to see this Pure bonding to blossom more...Sigh!
loved lodsss
loved it to BITS...
love u to d coreee API...🤗🤗🤗
May ALLAH alwaysss bless u n give u all the Success n happiness u Deserve...IA!...Ameen...Summa Ameen.😳
Edited by -Anila- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Anila-

Leee...mujhe pehle bataya kyun nhi API..

main abhi un-ress karne hi a rahi thi... :(



OMG

sorry jani mein ajitn athak gai thi k mein nh sirf update uthi aur daal di..dekha hi nhi k unres kiya k nhi kiya ..
sorry
but humain apk comment chaiy han pls...apko pata hai its important
aur hum rply bhi keray gay


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Posted: 13 years ago
tai jaan is very clever..


well all in all liked it..

will comment..
fully afterwards

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