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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Mini4

beautifully writen update Fiza!!!!!🤗

d best part abt dis story is d kind f relationship mayank n nupur r sharing!!❤️
A friendship beyond all other relations in life,loving each othr more dan self!! it s truely wonderful when ur life partner loves u n knows u better dan anyone else in dis world!! 👍🏼
Fiza u hav written dis chaptr n d 12th chapter really beautifully!!!👏
waiting to read how their relationship evolves n progresses further😍!!
thanx fr d pm!!🤗
continue soon!!




thanks alot dear
im so glad u liked it
im so glad u highlighted this aspect as this is basically wht connects Parichey to Ardhangini
that the point between them..
thanku so much dear
will cont soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
i am in a wonderful mood after hearing such a grt news... so pardon errors as i cant conc...rpld to u all

Chapter: 14

Present:

Mayank: is ny abhi ankhein kholi thi… aur dobara bhi kholi thi…

He was standing near her, with his hand on her hairs and doctor was checking her, wht actually made the doctor smile was the slight moment of her head still…

Dr. Nadir: he smile… yeah dekh rahy hoo…

Mayank: haan… yeah tu do teen din se hai.. asi moments..

Dr. Nadir: aur tum mjhy ab bata rahy hoo…. It's a very very positive sign mayank….. woh na sirf ankhein khol ker rekh pa rahi hai per apni body ko bhi apny deemagh ko synchronize ker pa rahi hai….

Mayank: is k matlab …

Dr. Nadir: not to far from coming back…abhi shayd woh ankein kholay bhi rekhti bus us ki kamzori ko cover kerna hai … wasy bhi us k stable vitals ki wajha se hum us TPN kafi had sahi se day pa rahy hain……she will be back very soon... He patted his shoulder and left the room…

Mayank sat down beside her and took a deep breath… atleast something positive he heard after so long..

Mayank: jaldi se wapas jao… buhat tang kerny lagi ho aj kal…. Agay ek mehaz(war) humra intezar ker raha hai aur woh mein akealy nhi lar sakta.. pls wapis ajao…

He took her hand in her grip and was leaning to kiss her forehead but than just stoped in mid way… he closed his eyes and move away no matter wht he say to others reality is sumthing even he knew…… the moment he left the house, things were so normal, not so normal yet atleast they were… and she isn't that kinda person who will get into such position just because what they decided for there relation, and if sumthing that big was happening why she didn't inform him, or she wasn't able to inform him…

whatever the reason is soon he will get to know, she is cuming back and someone needs to know that…

Mayank: Samrat… ek achi khabar hai.. tumhari behan waps arahi hai

Samrat: tu sach kah raha hai…. Ya khuda yeah tu waqi buhat achi kahabr hai

Mayank: maagr yeah hum teen k beech hi rahy Samrat…. Apki valida ko na pata chaly..is baat k kayal rekhna hai….

Samrat: hmm thik hai… tu thori dair k liyan tu ghar aja…. Ya yaha nhi ana hai tu hotel ja ker thora tu arm kerly .. mein ya gunjan rukh jay gay

Mayank: nhi .. mein yahin thik hoon… tumhari maa per atually mjhy itna sa bhi behroosa nhi hai…kisis per

………….

Past:

Salman: ji burkhudar( yes son) ..apki shadi mein 20 din bachy hain aur jab se ap yaha aay hain mein ny apko nupur se baat kerty nhi dekha ..kya baat hai

Mayank: koi baat nhi hai… aur asa kuch nhi hai… hum baat kertay hain… abhi bhi tu ker rahy thy

Salman: kam k silsilay mein…. Khabi personally baat nhi kertay dekha… han ab yeah bhi hosakta hai k ap privately kertay hoon….ohh..yeah tu hum ny socha nhi…

Mayank: baba… ap na… dekhy pehly baat asa tu kuch nhi jo humaray beechy personal hoo..baba I know her too well..

Salman: tu is k matlab hai k kya shadi k bad ap dono baat nhi keray gay..yeah soch ker k u know her to well..he mimics his tone…. Yeah kya baat hoi… mayank ap us ko ek dost ki hasiyat(role) se jaanty thy…biwi ki nhi

Mayank: haan tu wohi tu kah raha hoon… jab biwi bany gi tu wasy bhi jaan lo ga….

Salman: mayank… yeah kya baat hoi… yahin apki ami thik hain ap bhag rahy hain…

Mayank: aray ab is mein bhagna kah se agaya…. Baba ap nupur ko buhat achy se janty hain…. Us se zayda baat ki tu ajeeb hi sochy gi, aur mjhy nhi pata..baat simple se hai..yeah sab mein bad mein handle ker lo ga na…. ap dono ko hoa kya hai…

Salman: mayank mjhy sirf nupur ki fikar hai kyun k hum sab janty hain us ko… ap handle kerly ga janty hain… magar…

Mayank: baba kya hogaya hai…. Is mein agar magar kaha se agaya… yeah baat hum kitny ko samjhy ami ko, Samrat ko apko… humny yeah fasal ksis dabao mein nhi liya hai.. I know wht I am doing…. Aur ap log tu asay bool rahy hoo jasay yeah proposal mein ny aur nupur ny diya tha… mjhy per itna pressure kyun hai..

Salman: yeah baat…. Yeah baat nhi suna chahta mein… k yeah jo kuch horaha hai hum sab chahty thy islayn horaha hai..

Mayank: sigh… han manta hoo yeah sab ap log chahty hain hum ny socha…. Magar hum khud is baat ko moqa dayna chahty hain …. Islayn yeah horaha hai ….bus

Salamn: thik hai tu phir humain ap se jo umeed hai… humain yqaeen hai ap pora keray gay….

Mayank: sari umeeday mjhy se hi rekhna… us se maat rekhna ap log… meri life k kya hoga kisi ko fikar nhi hai…. Had hai…

Salman: chukled… jo arhi hai nah woh tumahri life kafi achy se set kerday gi….

Mayank: aur us k sath yeah meray beechy hath paao dooh ker pari hain…..aray yaar ab yeah kyun phone ker rahi hain….he said irritated

His father sneak to view his cell flashing the name of Tai…

Salman: tu uthao na daar kiss baat kaha hai..saasu maa k phone hai

Mayank: mein ny koi 20 lakh k suit nhi behna bus…. Itna kyun zayda kerti hai yeah ..kisi qareeb ko hi day dain…..

Salman: tu ek kam kero light house se ja ker kisi maray hoa angeriz k kapray lay lo…woh pehan layna…. ( light house is place were old cloths are sell)

Mayanak: baba… taya jaan ko kya sochi thi jo in se shadi ki…

Salman: isqh andha hota hai beta…

Mayank: yaqeen hogaya hai … phew… I need to handle her… hello salam tai jaan

Tai jaan: walkium asalm ..shukar hai phone uthany ki zahmaat(takleef) tu ki apny..humain lag aj bhi nhi nhi uthy gay

Mayank: ji woh hum kal meeting mein thay aur phir baad mein ap logo k hisab se raat horahi thi tu…

Tai jan: ji.. hum ny ap se kaha tha ap apni reception k dress final ker k humain bata dain

Mayank: tai jaan mein soch raha tha… mein yahin se lay lo ga… as woh try bhi ker pao ga.. waha jan tak mein aao ga kafi late hochuka hoga….

Tai jaan: thik nupur k liyan hum blue final kiya hai tu ap bhi us hi hisab se layna…Allah hafiz

Mayank: BLUE.. aur nupur…. Yaar is Hitler ny us se pocha bhi nhi hoga… uff.. kya kero mein is larki ka…bolay gi nhi…. Aur yeah Samrat k bacha kya ker raha hai….

Salman: yeah sab ko mil ker galiyan kyun day rahy hoo

Mayank: apki bhabi jaan kafi hai logo ki Zindagi ki kuch khushiyon k bhi majbori bana k liyan

Salman: yaar tum abhi se apni saas k itni boriayna( bad mouthing) kerty ho..shadi k baad kya kero gay

Mayank: shadi k baad woh yeah keray gi.. as in sab mein ek baad tu unhony sochi nhi hai… jo un ki bussines deal ko up side down kerday gi

Salman: aur woh kya

Mayank: woh Nupur per se huq chaly ny k haq khoday gi…. Yeah mein apni biwi per bardasht nhi kero ga…

Salman: good kerna bhi nhi chaiy..

Mayank: abhi tu mein Samrat ahmed ko hilao….

He piced phone and dail his number….

Samrat: heloo.. sleepy voice came from there

Mayank: saaly tu sota rahy.. tujhy mein waha itni bari instruction list day ker aya tha… phir bhi tu soatay(sleep) rahy

Samrat: abay ab kya hua…. Mein pak gaya hoon yaha sab dekhty dekhty… teri shadi meri ma… kasam se …kisi ko yaad bhi hai k meri bhi shadi hai…..ab kya hua….

Mayank: nupur k valima k dress blue kasay decide hoa….

Samrat: hain yeah kab hoa

Mayank: jab tu apan valima khawab mein attend ker raha tha na jab…. Tujh se ek kam nhi hota… tujhy pata hai us ko nafrat hai blue se….

Samrat: ab kya keray…..

Mayank yeah bhi mein bataoo…. Kuch tu soch… kuch kertna paray ga… tumhari behan na… khabi jo bolay…

Samrat: aray yaar ab tu woh bulkily hi nhi bool rahi hai…choti ami se bhi bolty hoay full confuse hai.. k saas ki tarha baat kero ya chachi ki tarha….. abhi tu mehndi per hi kafi hungama hojta..woh gunjan ny sambhal liya….

Mayank: kyun kya hua…

Samrat: tai jaan ny koi expert hire ki thi mehndi lagny k liyan… woh jo kah rahi thi nah woh tu soch soch ker hi ajeeb lag raha tha… I mean mehndi mein stoned kaun lagta hai yaar …

Mayank: kya hogaya hai…

Samrat: tujhy pata hai nupur ko chesay simple aur un ki tarah pasand hai.. us ny sirf kaah tha k mjhy yeah acha nhi laga aur bus hogaay kam….woh tu gunjan ny kaha k humaray rasm hai k bhabi mehndi lagwati hai tu ami chup hogai.. aur us ny bulkily tery style mein designer wali mehndi ki baat ki aur woh maan gai…

Mayank: shukar meray peechy koi tu aqalmand(intelligent) hai waha… hmm per gunjan dobara kuch nhi keray gi warna tum dono problem mein ajao ga…. Per is blue k kuch kero…. Samrat ek kam ker us designer ko manay ki try maar….

Samrat: kasay

Mayank: kuch bhi ker… woh tera masala hai per yeah kam tu keray ga… and now bye ..mjhy buhat kam hai

Samrat: aby sun…. mar gaya mein…

…………..

Gunjan: yaar yeah buhat simple hai..

Nupur: tu.. she frown… mjhy koi extra ordinary nhi chaiy..simple aur classy ho bus…she said with smile

Gunjan: aay haay…smile tu dekho dulhan ki….she blushed …. tumahri maa k kya hoga…

Nupur: she pouted….hmm.. pata nhi woh mjhy yeah kerny bhi day gi k nhi….

Just than her cel rung and she droped the pen in her hand…

Gunjan: kya hua

Nupur: mayank …is waqt..waha tu raat k 2 baj rahy hogay

Gunjan: haan tu good nite khany ko phone kiya hoga us ko neend nhi arahi hoogi..

Nupur: gunjanaa….tang maat ker…

Gunjan: acha tum baat kero…mein yeah Samrat ko dekhti hoon…

Nupur: helloo…

Mayank: kya ker rahi ho

She was thinking wht to anwer, she cant say she was designing her wedding card… common it feel awkward.. yet wht to say

Nupur: am..kuch nhi woh gunjan aai hai nah tu us k sath….

Mayank: us k sath kya….. wasy gunjan se kahao itna na aay…. Tai jaan ko bora lagay ana tu ek aur musibat hojay gi

Nupur: nhi aj hi tu aai hai woh bhi mein ny bolaya tha.. woh mjhy samjh nhi araha tha aur card design…

She said in ago and than hit her head realizing she said it…. He smiled at the opposite side.. gosh life is going a complete change and it sumhow is giving him to nervous…

Mayank: okay…. Waha sab thik hai..

Nupur: han sab thik hai… tum abhi tak jag rahy hoo..

She can hear tiredness in his voice…the similar one when he will be dying with headache due to lack of sleep

Mayank: bus sony hi jaraha hoon… abhi aya tha office..aur training Se..khir us ko choro..woh actually… chalo choro mein rekhta hoon ..thak gaya hoon

Nupur: mm… koi baat hai..

Mayank: m … nhi… Allah hafiz

Nupur: Allah hafiz

Mayank: suno…. Woh …. Samrat se khana woh card taya jaan ko dekhay… woh approve kerday ga…tai jaan print nhi hony day gi..AH..

Nupur: hmm..AH…

Mayank called to console on her the drees matter, and here he wasn't even was able to bring the talk of there valima in between them…. Nupur smiled at the idea.. he is right and the fact he can be her savior always n now hopefully for the rest fo there lifes…

………..

It was the two days in eid and the day when mayank was finally arriving back to his home… nupur was now restricted to go out and to meet any of her in laws, but still she has Shilpa with her….

Mayank wasn't cuming alone his father was accompanying him too, as only 4 days were left for marriage..

It was indeed a prestigious occasion not for them but also for the business world, and the fact that there will be plus thousand people all around her was making her more n more nervous. The time that he gave her to sink in the feeling turn to be making her more n more confused about, wht kinda relationship she should expect and what he will be demanding. No matter how much she knew him and his never demanding nature, she also knew this relation means a lot, a lot to him, not from now but from always… he kinda person who was loyal to his wife even when he hasn't ever meet or thought of whom he will get married, by not being into girls and fun….he always has thought of starting his live life with marriage…he respect this relationship the most..maybe because the fact they way his parents are, so much in love n so much respect to each other..

Meting everyone he was now lying in her mother's lap in there room, and was discussing his trip all..

Shilpa: ap kal shoping jarahy hain… uski mo dekhi k liyan kuch laynay

Mayank: lo yeah kya baat hoi.. hum ny us ko moo itni daafa dekha hua hai…

Shilpa: mayank….she slapped hi slightly …tum na.. sharafat (tameez) se gift lay aoo

Mayank: ek tu ap logo ko yeah sharafaat buhat pasand hai… us se k pass kyun hai mera gift…

Shilpa slammed his arm…sharaafat is ther wired neigbhour's son…salman laughed ..

Shilpa: ap bhi hass lay.. mayank hum sanjeeda hain

Salman: kya baat ker rahi hain ap… hum 30 saal se samjh rahy hain ap shilpa hai

The both laughed again…

Mayank: baba ap k sath dohka hua hai…

Shilpa: ap dono baab betay k kuch nhi hosakta... mayank ap kal jarahy hain bus..

Mayank: aray ami..usko lay jao ga bad mein khudi lay ly gi jo chiay…

Salman: shilpa ap k beta kafi unromantic hai… miya khud ja ker lo

Mayank: kya mein ny aj tak us ko birthday gift pehly la kern hi diya hemsha khud hi layti hai woh… tu phir…

Shilpa: yeah birthday nhi hai jo har saal ati hoo.. shadi hai zindagi mein ek hi baar hoti hai…samjhy.. ap kal jarahy hai….

Mayank: kay baat ker rahi ho ami.. abhi hum sirf ek ker rhy hain… 3 baqi hain…

(islam mein 4 marriges are allowed)

Shilpa: Mayanakkk…

Mayank: oky fine…

Salman: wasy card waqi buhat acha hai..he passed it to mayank and he took it , looked at him smiled and closed his eyes again….

Yeah expressions kuch samhj nhi aya

Mayank: samjhy bhi maat…

Salman: acha tu yeah kya ksis k liyan maqsoos(reserved) hain ..oh….

Shilpa: aur tum ny bhabai se lari layana shoro kerdi hai… drees tum ny change keraya

Mayank: han tu.. unki shadi hai kya jo blue dress… pata hai beti ko nafrat his is rang se per nhi…per pata kasay hoga beti se khabi baat ki tu hona

Shilpa: classy hai nah..she said playing along

Mayank: aray yaar..choray ami.. un se kaho kaala(black) baan lay aur bhi classy hai..

Shilpa: nahosaat( bad luck) hoti hai kaal rang shadi mein

Mayank; aur jo tai jaan chalti phirti hongi woh kuch nhi..(referring tai jaan as nahosaat)

Shilpa: mayankkk…. Khuda k vasata shadi tak khamsoh rahy app plss….

Salman: acha chalo apny kamray mein rawan(go) hojaoo

He smirks and got up to leave

Mayank: oh sorry aplog pehly bol daytay ..apiki privacy mein bhang nhi dalta…

Salman: han addat dal 4-5 din mein zarro pary gi tujhy bhi privacy ki…

Mayank: haan aur ap ko tu abhi….. he smiled and left running hearing shilpa's voice..

Shilpa: bulkily ap per gaya hai

Salman: nhi mein is kafi zayda romantic hoon..haina

Shilpa: salman betay ki shadi horahi hai..sudhar jay

Salman: kyun sudhorr…beta shadi ker k bigrany ki soch raha hai aur ap hunain sudharny ko bool rahi hain,...aray had hai bhala….

………..

He has to bought gift for her, but how… nobody was in help to her, Samrat said no, gunjan said she can help but wont chose…so wht to do..evry body is playing with him…finaly he thought sumthing with a smirk. the only true caring person in his life..

He was typing an sms without knowing his father was standing just behind him poking wht he is texting

Mayank: exactly kya likho… pori khata (story) nhi likhni hai to the point baat ker…pata nhi kya kya soch raha hai

Salman hold his laugh at his son's condition, sumwhere it was wonderful to see him so dependent on her…n sumwhere so confuse how to handle it all yet he is doing best and he was so proud of him

" nupur mayank here..

Mayank: ab yeah kya us k pass tera no hai…he removed it..

" nupur tumhain pata hai yeah gift laina meray bus ki baat nhi hai pls bata do tumhain kya gift chaiy.. koi help nhi ker raha hai.."

Salman: yeah cheating

Mayank literally got scared and droped his cell, wch was taken by his father…

Baba..yeha kya hai…pls ceel doo na…

His father was trying to remove the text yet half due to snatching it got sned…

Nupur on other hand was trying to read it..

"nupur tumhain pata hai yeah gift bus ki baa"

Salman: abhi teri maa ko pata hoo..bulkil nupur ko hi bolta hoo…nupur…

She came out of the room and mayank who was standing with his father trying to stop him to call her, was thrown back in room…

Salman: anadar jao apko dekhna allowed nhi hai…nupur beta is k kisi sms k jawab daynay ki zarorat ni hai yeah cheating ker raha hai..

Nupur turn beetroot..she wasn't expecting chacho to know all this…

Mayank: koi cheating nhi hai ..cheating ap ker rahy hoo..

Salman: chup kero ek itna sa kam nhi hota tum se… had kertay ho..

He tried to opend the door yet salamn again closed it on his face…

Salman: kahana allowed nhi hai

Mayank: baba mera cell do na… aur yeah koi cheating nhi hai cheating meray sath horhi hai…koi meri help nhi ker raha hai…. aur yeah kya hai ajeeb laga raha hai deevawr se batein kerna….

Salaman: nupur promise is k sms k jawab maat dayna shadi tak..

She nooded shyly in yes…and salman gave back the cell to fuming mayank…

Salman: ap jo kerna hai khud ker…

Mayank: fine… kerlo ga

Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aj agar update mil raha hain den me on...

RESS😍

n agar nhi den...🤔

i want an update plzzz😳😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Anila-

Aj agar update mil raha hain den me on...


RESS😍

n agar nhi den...🤔

i want an update plzzz😳😆



updated dear
aj tu jo mein full mood mein ho...have got such a lovely news abt AB
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: drmaha

wht news u heard dear :)?



u dont know😲

AB will be back in short film at star plus...chk MJHT forum

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed



u dont know😲

AB will be back in short film at star plus...chk MJHT forum



really ? wow 😃

whn whn ??
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Posted: 13 years ago
mayank's dad is so cool. lovely updtae
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: drmaha



really ? wow 😃

whn whn ??



teri meri love stories mein ek short film uski bhi hai...
and as per strt plus TML is strting from 11 august sat suday 9 pm...n i think first tu uski nhi hogi n i even donot want k frst uski hoo ..shot is going on now adays...n he is a topori in tht
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Posted: 13 years ago
That was fantastic update,really beautifully written
i loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hmm.. now I can connect more with the story, Fiza.. the more I read about the past, I am able to understand the future...

Nicely written, Fiza 😊

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