Arhi FF: Dhoom Again ON HOLD

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So here's my new ff Dhoom Again its based on dhoom 2 except its with arnav and khushi. hope you guys like it and please comment😊
by the way this is star i'm the older one and my sister's name is rainbow we were both silent readers but you're guys work really inspired us to write. you guys might have heard of rainbow's ff called help and if you havent you guys should read it. well enough introductions here's the first part

Dhoom Again

Chapter 1: The Queen's Crown

"Happy Birthday, happy birthday, happy birthday to you!!! blow out the candles Tommy." said an old lady in her late 60's.

"Grandma can I be the thief this time? Please?" Charlie asked his grandma.

"Of course you can Charlie." She said while smiling, "But be warned Tommy and I will catch you real soon"

like that both her grandchildren ran off chasing each other. Their grandmother ran after them as fast as she could and her guards were positioned at every possible place for protection. The Kids raced into the room where the crown was held. Charlie was pretending to steal the crown when Tommy pointed the fake gun to his face.

"You're a really bad thief you got caught." Tommy yelled.

"Ha-ha!" The grandmother laughed at her grandkids

"Granny can I be the thief next?" Tommy asked eagerly.

"Of course but first you need to cut the cake. let's go!" said the grandmother. After the kids left she looked out the window and told the guards to draw the curtains.

One of the guards said, "Your Majesty with all due respect we are in the middle of the dessert there is no one around us for miles no one's going to steal the crown."

"If I can see outside then anyone can see inside." The queen answered

"Ok You Majesty we will draw the curtains." the other guard said.

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(Imagine this picture for the next part

https://articles.timesofindia.indiatimes.com/2012-05-12/tv/31670154_1_iss-pyaar-barun-sobti-show

the Queen had been right there was someone in this desert apart from themselves. just as the curtains were being drawn a man had just jumped from a plane and was about to land on the top of the train. he pulled off his masked and revealed a handsome face.

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The queen came again to visit her crown and the guards let her in. but a few minutes later they saw the queen running after her grandchildren, "Oh I promise you these kids are going to be the death of me!" the Queen said laughing.

"Y..you'your Majesty you were just inside!" Said a bewildered Guard. they opened the door to the crown room and saw the crown was missing and in its place an A. (https://www.zedge.net/wallpaper/6021444/) "Hurry and find that person! HE can't have gotten far! Now go!!!" the queen shouted. the guards did as they were told and found the thief on top of the train. the guards tried to shoot him but he was too fast and dodged the bullet. while the thief was busy dodging the bullet another guard tried to punch him but then the thief pushed him off the train. the guard feel off the moving train and instantly his crimson red blood stained the dessert sand. 3 more guards tried to hold him still while the lead guard shot him but the thief was too fast and skilled he quickly ducked and the bullet hit the guard that was behind him and then he kicked to two others with his feet off the train. that just left him and the lead guard. behind his sunglasses he could see that the guard was getting nervous he used that opportunity and tried to jump off the train to get to safety. but then he felt a hook grab onto his backpack the rope which helped the guard remain safe and still catch the thief circle around his neck. the thief turned around and put up his hands in surrender. the guard smiled a victorious smile and said, "See you are no match for the queen's guards now hand me back the crown and maybe the queen will be merciful when giving you your punishment."

"Oh I'm sorry but I don't intend on getting punished." with that said the thief did a back flip off the train therefore realizing the rope from his neck and started to slide on the railroad tracks on his red snow board. the guard tried to shoot him and missed. and then the impossible happened, the thief jumped back on the train with his board and hit the guard and killed him. his mission was a success and now to make his escape. He started to board down the hills to his hideout. later in the day he would return to one of his many homes in Europe and plan his next move.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice yaar awsome pls continue
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orignaly posted by cutepuppy:nice yaar awsome pls continue
Thanx a lot i'll try to update soon im really happy you liked it i wasn't sure if anyone would lyk it but thanx again
INDEX:
PART 1: PAGE 1
PART 2: PAGE 1
PART 2 CONT: PAGE 2
PART 3: PAGE 3
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Hey guys sorry it took so long for me to update i was really stuck on what to do but here's part 2 well part of part 2 anyway. Hope you guys like it and don't forget to comment and like. And when you comment please tell me what i could do to make the story more intresting for you guys. 😉

Arnav:https://articles.timesofindia.indiatimes.com/2012-05-15/tv/31702134_1_barun-sobti-female-fans-tv-actor

Khushi: https://www.fanpop.com/spots/sanaya-irani/images/24332275/title/sanaya-irani-photoshoot-photo

Aakash: https://www.deccanchronicle.com/channels/showbiz/tv-guide/akshay%E2%80%99s-omelettes-are-super-hit-662

Payal:https://indian-celebrity-gallery.blogspot.com/2011/12/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon-payal.html

NK:https://www.metromasti.com/tv/gossip/Iss-Pyaar-Ko-Kya-Naam-Doon-Karan-Godwanis-character-NK-to-end/15929

Lavanya: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon/2910898/sana-khan-in-top-five

Anjali: https://www.metromasti.com/tv/gossip/Star-plus-IPKKNDs-Daljeet-Bhanot-happy-with-her-married-life-/14333

Chapter 2

It was a calm and peaceful day. The sun was shining and the sky was so blue it was almost clear. Nobody would have to expect anything bad to happen today but little did they know. Out at sea there was a battle for life and death.

"You lied to us NK! You went and joined the police!! Who the hell did you turn into? We leave for 2 months and you turn into a police officer? I'm disgusted with you!" Shouted Shayme

"No! I was forced to! I would never voluntarily join the police force. But it was either that or go to jail. Aur mein mummy ko promise kya tha that I'll never go to jail." NK said.

"Oh shut up!" Shayme yelled as he pointed a gun towards NK's forehead.

"Someone please save me!!!!!!!!!!!!" NK yelled. Just then Aakash emerges out from under the water and lands on the boat. Shayme got scarred and jumped off the boat and drowned. And the others that were on the boat were shot dead.

"Omg! Thank you so much Aakash!" NK said relived.

"Every time NK! Every fu**ing time I have to come save your ass and let the bad guys get away!"Aakash said in seething fury. NK was about to answer when a bullet broke his handcuffs. Aakash and NK looked at each other and pulled out their guns and started shooting the other gang members on the other boat. They were behind NK's bike dodging all the bullets when Aakash's phone rang.

"Hello?" He said while sighing clearly annoyed.

"Oye! Don't you dare use that tone with me Aakash!" answered a furious reply.

"Payal?" Aakash asked confused.

"Oh so now you recognize your wife's voice huh?" Came Payal's reply

"Payal sweetie right now is not really a good time." Aakash said in his most sweetest voice. (Well as sweet as you can be when you dodging bullets.)

"You listen to me right now Aakash! I want dark forest cake right now!" Payal demanded.

"Payal I can't really talk to you right now!" Aakash tried to reason with his wife.

"I don't care what you do Aakash but I'm giving you a fu**ing hour and if I don't get black forest cake by then you'll regret it!!!!!" Screamed Payal and hung up, and went back to finding something sweet to eat.

Just then NK started laughing. "Aww Aakash Bhai is does your ear hurt now? I could her Bhabi yelling from here."

"NK SHUT UP!!!!!!" Aakash roared with fury.

"Sorry." NK said instantly shutting up. Just then NK's phone rang.

"Hello?" NK said confused he didn't recognize the number. And in the next instant there was a huge smile on NK's face. But just as NK opened his mouth to reply back a bullet barely passed by his head, he dropped his phone and both him and Aakash stood up and gave each other the look that said "ok enough trying to be good cops and not kill the people let's just kill them and get this over with." They both smirked and turned to the goons...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice thank u for pm me waiting for next one
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Originally posted by: ASR6262

very nice thank u for pm me waiting for next one

aww thanx soo much ill try to get the second part of part 2 up by tomorrow
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Different and very interesting star..can't wait to read more rainbow
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Nice! Loved how you fit in all the characters!(:
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Originally posted by: Arina_R

Nice! Loved how you fit in all the characters!(:

aww thank you soo much😊
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Originally posted by: hiddenpearl

Different and very interesting star..can't wait to read more rainbow

thanx glad you liked it😊

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