SwaRon OS: Our Little World (Part 3 Page 24)

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shiv_sis_square

@shiv_sis_square

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: pratik54000
wow double blush to first time dekha girls...

😆 hum do hai isiliye double

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pratik vyas

@pratik54000

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

ok double power ho na tum dono vo to bhul hi gaya mai...

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Sawyer_Tom

@Sawyer_Tom

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#83

That was sooo cute!!!! And I would like to mention that, according to me, this part was more well written than the last one. I especially loved the way you guys started it and adored the way you ended it. And I also loved the fact that this time you wrote from Swayam's point of view. You have a sweetness in your writing that makes me smile heartily. Do keep writing. It's absolutely delightful to read. 😊

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Madhura

@Madhura..

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#84

shiv sis beautifully written!!

The 1st OS was adorable and lovely way swayam cooks and the family..

The 2nd was cute and innocent and shar too like tanya...Lovely writing!! Small and sweet!!

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aish5395

@aish5395

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#85

swaron family is extremely cute!!and your os is beautiful!!👍🏼keep writing more...thanks for the pm!😊

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#86

Awesome, sweet wonderful, by far the cutest. Haila guys aise he likkthe raheyo, tho then what else can we ask for. Well done both of you. Loved it to the core.

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karankritz4lyf

@karankritz4lyf

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Posted: 13 years ago

#87

😃awsum thnx 4 d pm... keep writing more

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Don't even know anymore

@Death_Memories

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Posted: 13 years ago

#88

I was like awww while reading the entire os
short sweet and perfect loved it
do write more
ps why their daughtef in each ss os or ff is named tanya
pps do write more

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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#89

That was just cute. The Sekhawats really make a great family.

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#90

The second one was even more cuter 😊 luvd how u showed Sharon & Tanya in Swayam's eyes as being the same - I mean big & small versions ...luvd the way he pampers them ...the geniality in ur writing is awsum guys...u made my day with ur writings

Edited by meevee - 13 years ago