SwaRon OS: Our Little World (Part 3 Page 24)

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kool kanz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#101

superb and awesome updates...both d parts...luved dem...plz keep writing more like dese...

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roshnithediva

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Posted: 13 years ago

#102

aweosme update 😊
it was short but sweet
thanx for the pm .

Edited by roshnithediva - 13 years ago

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manasi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#103

aaawww the second one is equally cute...

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purplepixie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#104

lovely!!😊 its so awesum dat i hav becum greedy...cnt wait for u to continue!!

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Neeti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#105

hey dat was quite pretty short & shweet!!

i lovd d lil gal Tanya aww she's swaron's daughtr!!

Beautiful world"Mr. & Mrs. Shekhawat wid junior shekhawat"...

Gud job done by both of u !!1👏

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517072

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Posted: 13 years ago

#106

So sorry for da late reply!!! Both the updates were just perfect!! Out of the world!!😍 Shekhawat family rocks!!! 👏 Thanx for da pm dearies!! Keep up da good work! 🤗

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Shweta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#107

aww...the cute shekhawat family moments are really a treat to read...damn adorable update dear!!!!

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Roger

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Posted: 13 years ago

#108

It was really cute
Sweet shekhawat family
Loved it

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shiv_sis_square

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Posted: 13 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: Sawyer_Tom
That was sooo cute!!!! And I would like to mention that, according to me, this part was more well written than the last one. I especially loved the way you guys started it and adored the way you ended it. And I also loved the fact that this time you wrote from Swayam's point of view. You have a sweetness in your writing that makes me smile heartily. Do keep writing. It's absolutely delightful to read. 😊

Thank you soo much Nidhi..Its a pleasure reading your comments..And yes even we feel that this one was better...Thanks again thank you very much..😊

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shiv_sis_square

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Posted: 13 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: Madhura..
shiv sis beautifully written!!
The 1st OS was adorable and lovely way swayam cooks and the family..

The 2nd was cute and innocent and shar too like tanya...Lovely writing!! Small and sweet!!

Thank you so much Madz 😊