Pati Patni aur Woh:KriYaansh OS *Part4 Pg 25 - Page 14

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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update😊

luvd it very much😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing update bt rey ko kria ko support karna chahiye tha.. Update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part... plz update fast...
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb...


hated when rey did not support her...


kria's crying was justified...


then the dance scene was awesoem...


loved it to the core...


update asap/...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome
finally rey ne mna hi lia apni batcutter ko
aww dey are soo sweet
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: asmaju

Credits

Title: Abshu

Concept: Nams

Banner: Nams

Special thanks to Khushi😳


Uhm so I was adding the OS to gallery link so it can be moved to FF forum. I want to know.. Is this special thanks to me or some other Khushi? 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
Update plz it been a long time u haven't update
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Posted: 13 years ago
Khushi the special thanks for for u.
U can pm me anytime to ask the reason.

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Rey asked Kria to wat and went to get the jacket.

He brought the jacket and made Kria were them.

Just then Kria saw a small child crying and walking alone.

She was touched.She showed Rey the kid and went to her. Beta apka nam kya hai.

Child:Crying Sindi.

Kria:App ke mummy papa kaha hai?

Child:Pata nahi.

She just saw a police nearby and told them about the child.

The parents were found in few minutes and they thanked Kriyaansh.

The child hugged Kria and pecked on her cheek.

Kria loved it.

Rey was enjoying this scene and he wabted to huig Kria.

Later both went on for their rides in manali.

The first one was snow skatting which both enjoyed it a lot.

Next they went on a ride which was for some time.

after dat dey went on a roller coaster ride kria was scared rey said dun wry..

when dey went to deir seat swaron were already sitting der facing each oder..

kria:mai yaha nahi bhetungi..

sharon:tum..! yahan kya kar rahi ho..?

Ride controller :sry mam we dun have any seat left..

rey:kria aisa karo ill sit wid sharon tum swayam ke saath bhet jao..

swayam:yeh kria cum on..

kria:fine..

sharon and swayam were facing each oder kria and rey were facing each oder..

ride started..

Kria:OMG.EEE..

Sharon:my hairs..

swayam:sharon chill..

rey touched kria's foot wid his ..kria stared at him

kria:areyy.. reyy..

sharon:behanji plxx chup bheto...

Sharon:aaahhh...

sharon falls on rey..

Rey:u okay sharon?/

Sharon:yup...

kria jaling jaling...

Kria also falls on swayam jaan ke..:Pto make sharon jealous.. but sharon key saath hamara romeo bhi jal jaata..:P

kriya was on top of swayam and rey sharon on top of reyy

all 4 were jealous of their partners after a while they alll moved away

rey was really angry cuz he knew kriya had dne it by purposee after the ride came to the end they all

came out and rey helped sharon come out and swayam helped kriya

kriya : am sorry swayam i feel on u between the ride woh it was by mistake

swayamk : no kriya its fyn u looked kinda scared on this ride

kriya : yeh i wass chale rey

rey just gave her a look and went off

kriya : bye swayam ab isse kya hua itna guuse mein kyun hai

she was calling rey fro behind but rey wasnt listening

kriya : rey kya hua wats ronng holding his arm

rey : wat!

Kria Didnt know what to do.

She never knew Rey was angry at her.

The both went back to their room.Rey was in no mood of sight seeing.

Kria tried to spek during their return but Rey didnt let her.He just said hum room mai jakar baat karte hai.

Kria was quite now.

The reached the room.

Rey went to washroom got freshened up and returned back and lied on bed.

Kria again tried to speak but Rey closed his eyes.

She went freshened up and returned wearing a simple sari

She went and sat next to Rey.Rey sensed her but didnt open his eyes.

She took Rey's head and placed it in her lap and Caresed his head slowly.Rey was touched by this act.

He holded her waist below her sari.

She cuped him and asked Kya hua aap gusa kyu ho.

Rey didnt say anything.

She pleaded him to say but Rey kept quite.

Unknowingly her eyes became filled.Rey sensed the change and saw her.She was in a verge of

crying.Rey now spoke out.

Tum swayam par kyu giri.mujhe pata hai ki tum ne jan buj kar yeah sab kiya.Kya tume Sharon itna effect

karti hai ki tum mere bare bhi nahi socha ki mujhe kaise lagega.

Kria could not utter a word she just said sorry Rey and moved to the balcony Starring at the trees.

Rey came behind her and stood beside her.

She was still staring at something.

rey:Kya hua jaan?

Kria:I'm sorry rey mujhe pata nahi tha ki aap ko itna bura lagega.mujhe acha nahi laga jab...

Rey:He placed his finger on his lip shh mai janta hu.

Kria just hugged Rey back, and both were in each others embrace.


'rey mei bahut tag gyi.. come lets sleep..'

rey frowns.. 'huh ?'

'what ??'

'tag gyi ?? i mean tonite.. hum..'

she yawns.. 'rey kal baat kare ???'

he slaps his face in his mind hahahahhaah

'okay jaan..'

the drift off to sleep.. while kria slowly smiles sleeping on his chest..

nxt day mrng..

rey tosses his bed.. the sun rays was disturbing him..

he moans a lil and turns and pulls his blanket up.. cuddels and sleeps like a baby ( embryo position )

kria comes out of washroom wipping her wet her.. she stares at him..

he cuddles closer and tries to put his arms around her.. unfortuanetely she wasnt in bed ( kria toh rey ko stare kar rhi hai )

rey frowns and moves his hands around to trace her.. he frowns and again not wanting to open his eyes he was abt to call hr name..

she comes and sits beside him before he cud say sumthn.. he smiles.. she slowly careses his face..

he catches her hand and pulls her upon him..

she was taken aback wid his sudden act..

her wet her traced on his cheeks.. wid few drops falling on his face..
her lips wer inches apart his..

he slowly opens his eyes

look look hawa hawa ..

he pins her hair behind her ears.. now suns rays directly falling on her cheeks making it glow more.. and it

was turning crimson red due to the proximity they wer sharin..

he smiled..

and crushed her closer to him..

her body against his chest flatening her curves.. her breaths rate increased eventually..

he cupped her face and aimed at her lips..

he came closer to close the gap bw their lips..

she lowerd her eyes lashes and shut her eyes in anticipation...

he came still closer.. his breaths ws hitting her lips..

eventually his lips touched her trembeling glossy lips..

but before they cud continue further.. KABAB MEI HADDI HAZIR

*knock knock*

kria jerked back blushing.. she got up from bed..

rey cursed his stars and got up from bed..

'mei dekta hoon baatcutter .. ' he said gritting his teeth all set to strangle the person on the other side..

waiter was standing grinning his teeth wide on door steps..

rey glared at him.. how he wished to snap out all his ( waiter's ) teeth at one go..!!

'WHAT' he asked seriously..

kria came from behind.. and stood next to him 'koun hai rey..'

waiter : 'ummm sir ( scared loking at rey ) aapne tracking ke liye kaha tha..'

'haan toh '

'umm sir woo guide agaya hai..'

'itni jaldi ??'

'y yyee yees sir wo.. loutne mei late hogayi toh raat mei wapas ana mushkil hai i i iss isliye sir..'

rey glares at him ' kabab mei haddi' he says under his breath.. rey : 'FINE'

kria giggles .. 'bahiyaa aap jao hum abi breakfast karke aate hai..'

'okay ma'am'

and waiter leaves..

rey slams the door and wraps his arms around kria's waist ( kria facing him )

'REY!!!!'

'ummm..'

'CHODO!!!! tracking pe nhi jana ?'

'NO!!'

'REYY!!'

'kaha na nhi jana!! muje tracking se zyada yeh pasand hai' staring at her lips leaning forward..

she moves back still in his grip..

he slowly touches her lips wid his fingers .. her lips shudders.. at once kria gets distracted.. she took a

deep breath and slapped his hand playfully.. rey took back his hand 'ouch'

'REY JAAO AUR TAYAAR HOJAO! muje book lagi hai..'

'muje b..' leans foward to kiss her..

she pushes him and glares at him..

'okay okay im going baby..'

he moves towards washroom but suddenly gives on peck on her lips and runs .. kria jaws dropped

down

rey finishes his bath and comes out...wrapped in a towel

kria is in a beautiful saree

kria looks at rey his six packs and starts staring at him and starts blushing also

Kriyaansh had der breakfast..and left for treking..

Rey:jaan im not feeling well lets go back to our room..

Kria:rey stop it enuf of ur excuses..!

Rey:honeymoon enjoy karne ke liya hota hai..!

Kria:tum hum enjoy nahi kar rahe kya?

Rey:yeh koi enjoyment hai faltu mai mountains pe chado duhh..kria plzzz...

Kria:REY..

Rey:fine chalo..

just den der guide enters..(der r 4 couples usme se swaron bhi hai)

Guide:gud morninng ladies and gentlements..so let us climb the mountain..

guide is young man and is a big flirt..:P

Rey:kamina lagta hai shakal se to...

Kria:rey kya bol rahe ho..

Rey:u knw wat kria its not at all fun..

rey goes forward leaving kria..kria was finding it hard to climb the mountain so guide lends kria his hand and say's may I..?

kria forwards her hand and rey saw dis he rushes towards dem And b4 kria could hold guides hand rey caught kria frm her waist and dragged her towards him..

Kria:thx rey..

Rey:no prob sweet heart..kisses her hand and gives a smirk to guide..:P

rey smirks at the guard and says: ill help her shes my wife no prob

guard: ok as u wish and he goes away

rey : mumbled idiot

rey takes kriya hand in his and strts climbing the mountain

kriya : maza arha hai

rey : hmm

kriy a: kya hua rey tum yaha nahi ana chte the

rey : nahi kriya esa kuch nahi hai as long as i am getting tym to spend with yu

kriya awww and she hugs him but suddenly she slips a bit rey quikly takes hold of her waist and pulls her

towards him nd there llhh starts rey is moving closer and closer aiming for her lips

kriya : umm rey yeh tym nahi hai romance ke liye chalo

rey : han pata hai mujhe and they both strt to climb the mountain again

After sum tym guide 'said dat now we all can have sum rest..he went towards kria and offered her sum

water..kria smiled and took d bottle from his hand..

Kria:thnk u..

Guide:any time..:)

Rey:kria im very thirsty..

Kria:rey aap pilo den..

Rey intentionally drops d bottle frm his hand and saara paani gir jaata...

Rey:ohh im so sry..

Guide:no prob mr singhania..miss kria aap juice lo gi??

Rey:frstly it no miss kria..she is Mrs kria reyaansh singhania..and itni thand mai she will get fever if she will drink cold juice..

Guide:i just asked her mr..

Rey in his mind..mujhe yahan se jaana hoga or else yeh to kria ke upar try maarta rahega son of B***h...just den rey ko kahin door jungle dikhta..

Rey/.;kria ek min idhar aaona..

Kria:haan rey w8

rey @ kriya jaldi aana pllzz

kriyaa: rey m cumng yaar ek minute

kriya was bizi talking to the guide and rey wasnt liking it he jus went and sat down after a min kriya cme 2 him

kriya: rey kya huaa kyun bularahe the mujhe

rey : baat karli usse ya aur bhii baat karni he?

kriya : huh? yeh tum kya bolrahe ho siiting down next to him

rey : kuch nahi chodoai rey

kriya: accha batao y wre u calling me

rey was pointing towards a jungle : wahan chale

kriya: lekin woh toh ek jungle hai rey

Sorry for delay in update.
Next update ke liye Nams ko tang karo.
Next part is ready.uska next part Nams has towrite it.So if she sends i can update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update
is update m to jelous jelous game chal raha tha
thankx 4 d pm
update soon

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