Pati Patni aur Woh:KriYaansh OS *Part4 Pg 25 - Page 12

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesm update pm me next time plz
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Posted: 13 years ago
Heyy .,,i'm soo sorry i didn't know i havn't commented yet...:S
sooorryy ...:S
bit reallly talking boutt updatee ...
tooo cutee ..
Aaawwiee Poor ReYam...n
this OS reminds me of the D3 we used to see everyday...:)
wid KriSha fightss...
aaawww luvlyy updatee...:)
update sooon thanxx fo PM...
n again sorry..:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
sorry 4 the late comment...
loved the update...
it was awesome...
krisha fighting for the campaign bottle.. 😆
update soon 😊
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Part 3:


rey : kya hua darling

kriya : dekho na rey aap ne yeh bottle mangayi thi aur sharon ne bhi lekin waiter ne hamein pehle bottle

di thi ab sharon ko yahi bottle chahiye

sharon: haan mujhe chaiye i want this bottle

kriya : par mein nahi dena chati

swayam : sharon well juss get another one its k babe let them take this one

sharon : nahi mujhe yeh bottle chahiye

kriy a: par mein nahi dungi cause i got it first

rey: kriya isse yeh bottle de do hum doosri mangalete hai plz

kriya : but rey

rey : de do isse ill order another one

kriya gives the bottle to her and goes back inside the room and bangs the door shut

sharon : thnx rey

rey just smiles and sharon goes back into her room

rey : plz will u get us another bottle

waiter: sure sir ill jus bring it nw

the waiter goes and reyam talk...

rey calls waiter and ask him to bring scotch instead of champagne.. *poor waiter*

rey receives d scotch and goes back to d room..

kria is fuming wid anger frstly becoz of sharon and now rey..!

rey:kria?

Kria:...

Rey:jaan im sry..

Kria: ...

rey:baby kuch bolo na..

Kria:kya bolu kuch rehgaya bolne ko?? u knw wat rey i dun wanna talk to u..!!

rey:im sry kria dekho maine champagne ki jagah scotch mangwayi hai u like it na.../?

kria:i dun care yeh scotch hai yeh water..! mujhe tumse baat nahi karni jao apni uss best frnd

sharon ke paas..i hate u...!

rey:baby aise mat bolo..i love you..

kria:rey im goin mai doosre room mao so rahi hu i dun wanna sleep wid u..

rey:arey kria meri baat to suno im sryyy...

kria:uhh..bye rey..

Rey:kria scotch kaun piyega??

kria:tum hi peeyo..BYEE..!!

she goes to another room and shuts d door..!

Kria is very upset.She doesnt know know why she is angry is it cause of sharon ya because Rey didnt support her.

She didnt know what to do.

Tears were flowing down./

Rey was knowing the door nut she didnt open it.

He was worried now as she didnt even reply to her.

He got an idea So jumped into Her room as it was beside him from the balcony.

He went in slowly and saw her crying badly.

He went and hugged her but she just went out of the hug and moved away.

Rey tried to consol her .He went and cuped her face but she was on her own roll.

Later after nearly an hour she hugged Rey back and cried very much.

Rey was literally broken down into pieces seeing her cry this much.

this was definitely not the ego with KriSha had but she was actually sad cause Rey had not supported her there.

kriya was crying alot rey chest was nearly wet rey didnt know wat to do he took her face in his and

cupped her face

rey : bas karo kruya tum itna kyun rorahi ho

kriya : am sorry rey i dnt knw mein bina waja aap par gussa hogayi am reaaly lekin aapne sharon ki side li

isliye..

rey : common kriya i jus didnt want u to get in another fght wid her dats y i told u to give it 2 her u know i

dont lyk all this arguments and everythng

kriya jus nodded her head and sed sorry

rey : ab rona band karo and he wiped her tears hum yahaan honey moon bananekeliye aye the aur yaha

meri baat cutter rorahi hai aur apna honneymoon mein rona dosent lok nyc

kriya : matlab

rey : matlab hes moving close to her and closerr

she kept thinking wt was going on..

soon lights went off..

she startled..

rey placed his hands on her shoulders she sighed in relief and hugged her..

soon a very dim lights onned..

a slow music started playing.

she looked up..

he smiled..

soon they wer slow dancing.. and having a lil scotch in bw ..

'rey im sorry.. meine saari mood karab kardi..'

'ssshhh!! dont b..! its okay.. we here fr few more days.. bahut enjoy karenge okay ??' and 'sorry to muje maangna chahiye im sorry baatucutter..'

she placed her finger on his lips smiled and moved towards the balcony..

he came behind her..

wrapped his hands around her waist hugging her from behind..

he placed his chin on her shoulders and looked up.. she was staring at the moon..

'im so happy today.. im really lucky to have a husband like u.. muje kabhi mat chodna rey..'

'kabhi nhi.. promise!! destiny kabhi humei alag nhi hone degi..'

she hugged him..

'muje thodi der aur dance karna hai..'

he smiled and agreed..

they kept swayaing around on the beats fr sum more time..

soon he felt her heavy on his chests.. he moved her head up.. she had drifted to sleep..

he sighed..

he lifted her in his arms and placed her on the bed.. off the lights and music and hopped next to her..

seeing her sleeping peacefully he smiled but then he thought 'in dono ki jagde ki wajah se meri honeymoon ka satyanash hogya!! i just find some remedy for dis! warna pura honeymoon rutne manane ke chakkar mei chala jayega!! universejjiii *pout*'

he kissed and forehead and slept.. she cuddeled on his arms and both slept peacefully..

after all dat disasters dat happened last night...it was tym for evry one to wake up..

cold fresh breeze , birds chriping,soothing sound of water fall,it was a beautiful morning..!

prince and princess were laying on der bed..kria opened her eyes and saw rey sleeping cutely like a small baby his hand encircled her waist .. she placed a soft kiss on his face he smiled

rey:good morning baby.. *his eyes were still closed..*

kria:good morning *brushed his hairs..*

kria:jaan go get ready we have to go out..

rey:hmm..

kria:rey? cum on wake up..

rey:yeh w8..

kria:ok get ready fast im goin to fresh up...!

After 1 hour later when dey had der breakfast dey left for site seeing..

rey and kriya left their rooms to go sight seeing kriya was wearing a really cute dress and rey was wearing

his normal shirt and jeans with a black jaket o top bt he still didnt look himelf for some reasonn as soon as

they came out teh room sworon came out from the oppiste room

before kriya and sharon could strt fighting again

reY: common kriya lets goo we wont be able to have fun then

kriy a: smiled at him and went off rey turned bk and smiled at swayam and was thinking bachgayye warna

yeh dono phir se shuru hojati

kriya : wiase rey hum jaa kahaan rahe hein

rey : you will see trust me its so beautiful ull loved dat place

kriya : reaaly ok now i cant wait to see it hugging rey from the side rey just smiled and took her hand and

walked out to show her the best place

kriyaansh reached der it was such a beautiful place mountains everywhere and beautiful scenery here

and there

kriya couldnt utter a word but dnally da only word that came out her mouth was : WOW

The place was wonderful.

It was filled with lovely mountains.covered with snow

there were lot of fun sports to play but u had a rule to get jacket(lending ones)before u go in.

Rey asked Kria to wat and went to get the jacket.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing update

wen will sharon n kriya stop fitein...ye fite ki vaje se reyam phas rahe hai

update soon
Edited by dildostidance01 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

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Awesome..


Loved it...


Even I was angry on Rey when he told her to give it...


I loved Kriya for giving..


N den d angry was acceptable...she wanted rey to support her.


Rey found a way to her room.


All Kriyaansh scenes were superb n amazing..


Sight seeing...hoping to see a KriSha fight!!😉😆

Edited by snigdha_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update and pm me wen u update d next part cant wait to read further
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update


thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow amazing update thanks a lot for the pm
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woww awsomme yaar totaaly cool mindblowing mann asma plz chk the spelling b4 u post it

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