but i will do it cuz this is i think my first comment on any of ur work.
first of all, lemme tell u.. i had 'reserved' aftr the second part but when i came to edit it, i found out that u hav also updated the third part so ima nw leave a long combined comment here. dat other 'res' thingy will also stay cuz i hav no idea how to delete a post once posted!
okay. so now that thats done, here goes the comment!
omg! what the hell was that? i almost fell off my chair in shock when i read it! i mean i LOVE the way you write but unfortunately i cant say the same for the storyline!
i mean i want arnav to regret and repent for every single cruel heartless thing he did to khushi. i definitely do. and in the show they arent show any redemptioin track, apprently khushi has frgten all of it n is goin to jus accept him. but it looks like u r makin up for the lack of regret shown on the show by making him suffer extra extra here!
and payal! well well! now thats a completely different personality of payal we are getting to c here! i mean she is actually usin her tongue for the purpose nature ahs given it - for speakin up in more than monosyllables! haha! i defo LOVE this twist!
and NK! well, im confusd.
on one side, i absolutely adore and his respect his character as a friend! i mean he is robably the kind of friend we all desire! i mean ready to keep a wife away from her husband, ready to wage a war against the man that no one even dares to look at defiantly! and all of that because his friend, the wife of that man, his khushi wants it! the loyalty, courage and the fierceness - something all of want in our friends.
on the other side, as much as i love him as a friend character, i will personally kill him if he tries to get romantically involved with kushi (which apprently he is already dreamin of)! he shud understand that khushi is in a state of shock - a shock induced by the cruel, heartless, emotionless behavior of her husband - n in that situation, she will take kindly to anyone that shows her love, caring, sympathy. everything her husband dint show.
she is not in a clear state of mind. and she might start thinkin she loves that person, who here, happens to be NK. but, thats not true! she may love him, but she is not 'in love' with him! NK has to understand that. she is thinkin she has a future with NK but she isnt thinkin with a clear mind now! NK should not lead her on. he has to differentiate between bein a frnd and bein a misleadin influence. khushi loves, like really LOVES, only one person. arnav, arnav and only arnav!
oh! hw do i even xpress all that i m feelin in here!
but, all this aside, i do like the story and would really like to see how it unfolds. even if not in line with my imagination!
excellent job!
P.S.: ver is ur blog? wordpress? blogger.com? cuz u PLEASE PM me just the link of ur blog? i dont wanna waste ur time. only a one liner PM. but i really wanna follow this story! so Please? pretty please? THANX!
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