FF : I Am...FREE (Part 12 cont. Thread 2)

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smithasrk

@smithasrk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#91

Likwed ur concept but i am 99.99% sure that there is not going to be any more MU

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Samana Dahar

@samana

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#92

Read last 3 chapters together.
Nice story.
Unique concept.
Thanks for the PM.

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rupzloveu

@rupzloveu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#93

awesome updates...

loved the concept..

doo continue soon...

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.x-bumblebee-x.

@.x-bumblebee-x.

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#94

Excellent ..arnav despair and khushis new feelings for nk but why do I think that the heart beat was to tell her arnav is in danger ..:/ as their hearts are one Nah? Lool.. update sooon!!!

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peepli

@peepli

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#95

this is good..

arnav needs to suffer !!... but im sure they ll be back together

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Sarah

@Desi-

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#96

Hey all...I may not post this story here anymore...this FF of mine seems to be causing upset with some of my readers...

I'm not going to stop writing it though.

I will post one or two more updates but after that, I'll only post this story on my blog.

Edited by Desi- - 13 years ago

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RNArnav93

@RNArnav93

Beginner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#97

OMG i love this FF !
Can't wait for the next update ;)

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

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Posted: 13 years ago

#98

thank you for the pm, Sarah... loved the concept... though, as someone so used to seeing khushi and arnav together, the thought of nk and khushi as a couple doesn't gell well 😕! but willing to give this story a chance 😊

read the prologue and parts 1 and 2, together... truly loved seeing khushi ignoring arnav and turning to nk for support... nk is a true friend who knows that an important ingredient of love is trust, which he has ample stores of when it comes to khushi!

arnav's reaction reeked of sheer jealousy and a 'dog in the manger' attitude! he really doesn't deserve khushi! thank god she felt so free and wasn't afraid to tell him so! about arnav, didn't like you making him go down on his knees to nk, even if it was a strategic move, can't imagine arnav kneeling before anyone... hurting and remorseful, yes, but kneeling down before anyone [except, probably, khushi]?! just can't see it!

even in the midst of her own sorrow khushi is so selfless as to think of anjali and payal and their sorrow... nicely done!

loved the part where arnav turned to anjali for comfort... this line was so poignant, yet beautiful: her mind in tatters over the missing life within her...

khushi trying to rebuild her life with nk's help will be a treat to read about... loved nk trying to overcome his desire for khushi and treating her with the respect due to her; he is truly a gentleman: "I care for you Khushiji...but I won't besmirch your name any further...I am here for you as a friend...until the time comes where we may be more..."

the concluding lines were just beautiful and filled with a ray of hope: And as she lifted her hand to her chest, she felt a familiar beat, one that she never thought would play in her heart again... Their eyes locked again as their friendship birthed trust... 🤗