kriyansh ss-once upon a time in mumbai update pg15 - Page 11

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Posted: 13 years ago
res😃
unres😃

chpt4
amazingg update,,,,,,,

luv it vry much,,,,,,
Edited by kuhu_Arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome story...loved it allot
it was very sweet and cute love story of kriyansh
awesome
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Posted: 13 years ago

:Res:

::Unres::


First of all, Cholly for the late comments and also if I hadnt commented before...but Im here to comment on d SS I liked so far bt didnt comment properly...I love dis SS and hope you will write many more...last part..uwahh uwahh!! Its ok...start another SS soon...waiting for it...Coming for the update...Gosh!! When will these mom start understanding the girls yaar...Kriya's mom arranged her marriage without knowledge and Kriya agreed bcoz she cudnt reject her mom or speak against her...and the way she didnt want to hurt rey was amazing...loved her feelings and the way u explained it...Kriya call and her way of telling Rey and when Rey told ur love means everything to me made me so emotional and the dialogue i will always love you was superb...Sharon I liked her...the way she arranged the meeting with SwIcky and Neha and thinking of Kriya's marriage was brilliant...Poor Rey I felt bad for him...Kriya will obviously look beautiful in a lehenga and when she is with Rey it adds extra beauty...the way she was pretending to be happy though she is sad was highly good and mostly all the girls do the same I guess...I belong to dat category too!! Rey came for seeing her for the last time...and messaged from Swayam's cell to meet in the room...and their love was well shown...finally Arjun saw Kriya crying and Kriya's mom realised she didnt pay for her daughter feelings...Kriyaansh together...me loving it!!...present scene was awesome!!! Freaking n Amazing update...loved it tons!! Hope my dis long n no cheating comment brings a big wala smile on ur face...😃😃...Love you Anki<333

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Posted: 13 years ago
r u serious??
itna melodrama ke baad
i hope u r not going to end it...
the update was awesome...

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Posted: 13 years ago
such a sweet update di..

loved it...

sach mein filmy end tha...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Full on filmy update...
But all's well dat ends well...
Thank god arjun ne sun li kriyaansh ki baat...nai to wo dono saint bankar sacrifice kr hi dete...
Loved d update...
Happy ending...filmon ki tarah...
Thnx fr d pm...:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsommee anki totally cool finally kriyaansh 2geder really cool update aww wish u would have carried on loved how kriyaansh were sacrifising
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Posted: 13 years ago
Any this was a fab one.

Finally kriyaansh mil gaye.
ek doubt lkoi apne bacho ko aise kahani sunatha hai kya???????


Thanks for pm.

Do write more
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Posted: 13 years ago
Arre waah fully filmi style 🥳

I just love drama 😃

kriya ki mom ko uski feelings me koi interest hi nhi hai 😲

coz vo to unke ehsaano ke tale dabi hui hai 😆

achha hua kriya ne rey ko bata diya 😊

gang want to unite them 👍🏼

i'm glad that rey talked to her alone & arjun overheard dat 😛

finally dulha change & kriyaansh got married

all thanx to arjun 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
haye anki mere saath b same to same hi ho rha hey is liye scoh rhi ho ki apna work discon. kar doo ... kyu ki apna b time wast karna or bakiyo ka b . to better main b schor do

nd main always comment karti hoo yaar don't b like this
nd ss was superb or it jaldi last kar diya thats not fare ha ...


nd it megical
choo cute

kya baat kya baat kya baat

keep it up

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