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RebeccaDaphne

@RebeccaDaphne

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Maddy1270
an amazing start... loved how realistically you have incorporated instances from the show in your os... that will is a pain in the neck 😕 just hate how shyam always manages to get khushi in trouble... thank god nk seems to have some evidence to prove khushi's innocence... now am interested to know what khushi's reaction will be on being released from jail

Thanks!😊

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RebeccaDaphne

@RebeccaDaphne

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: mohabbatgirl
Woww.. loved it.. He's done it again.. Will this guy ever learn? 😕everytime he's doubted her, it's come back to bite him.. Glad you brought NK in.. Please update soon.. 😊

Thanks! I'm not updating, it's just one shot but you everyone can imagine the rest...😃

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sarra0

@sarra0

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Nice os, felt sorry 4Khushi, he does it again.

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SanzBarbie

@SanzBarbie

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

dear its very interesting.. pls continue..
felt like crying for poor khushi..

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Sunara

@princessunara

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

aww..it is so so sad!! feel so bad for her!

if he ever did this to her n later got to know! he'll never forgive himself! but beautifully written..i haven't seen this concept before!!

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unforgetable112

@unforgetable112

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

fantabulous os...

asr, khushi n shyam u wrote all characterz spot on...

really nyc

dis new MU dat u hv created, cv sud adopt it frm u lolx😃

i read ur nt continuing it?????????

well datz sheer cruelty to us readers

em already half way to become a fan ov ur writing skillz...

plz do continue n gv dis a happy ending urslfwud luv to read anythng u put out

n if u do plan to continue it [plz do pm me

thxz

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tina_1234

@tina_1234

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

nycc os..do think of conti it

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coralblue

@coralblue

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Like your approach towards clearing the miss understanding. I really cant believe that he got her arrested.😲

That was a great start, please continue soon.

😊

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Please continue, you mentioned NK at the end . I hope you just don't leave it hanging, at least bring Khushi out of prison.

Edited by coralblue - 13 years ago

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RebeccaDaphne

@RebeccaDaphne

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Doc_Manaal
dear its very interesting.. pls continue..
felt like crying for poor khushi..

Thanks! Don't think I'm going to continue but love all the encouragement!😃

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RebeccaDaphne

@RebeccaDaphne

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Posted: 13 years ago

#30

Like your approach towards clearing the miss understanding. I really cant believe that he got her arrested.😲

That was a great start, please continue soon.

😊

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Please continue, you mentioned NK at the end . I hope you just don't leave it hanging, at least bring Khushi out of prison.

[/QUOTEThank you! I feel so happy everyone wants me to continue, its my first OS and i'll try and write some more, i guess i always thought i'm not a good writer as some of the other stories on the forum are brilliant, but i feel so appreciated now!😃

I'm supposed to be studying but i just couldn't get this idea about Khushi's phone out of my head, hence the story, but will try and write more when course is over😊

i do have some ideas on how Arnav should get his lady love back, but i have some studying to do too for my course,😔

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