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Downhill

@Downhill

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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

am i dreaming...am i dreaming...
me squealing...yippie a new ff...i m gonna die of happiness...

a very promising start...😳

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waterunder11

@waterunder11

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#82

AHHH first of all I love you!!! This was an awesome surprise! Your stories can never be enough, sighhh. But I truly appreciate whatever I get. Yesss a new fanfic!!

- dude gpa is a sensitive topic ;'(. I totally understand akash. The worst thing to do is compare to others.

- manorma arnav's mother? If the real arnav had this then he would for sure have completed what the :p

- I hate how our culture has authoritarian parenting style. On top of that the dad doesn't care about his mother? Ugh not enough respect for women. Gosh men!

- okay so does the dad not show emotions at all or is just in front on his kids? I felt bad for manorma when he just blows her off and leaves. Will the boys be as hard as their father? Atleast they didn't like the concept of her standing while they ate. Nobody does that! That said they are normal.

-So the stupid tradition will stop only when a bahu comes in. Oh then will manorma be a 'saas' to make her bahu go through what she went through? I hope not!

Cant wait till the next chapter! :D

Feels good to get out of that dusty, bloody, scary btlss town. I still love it though, just sayin…!

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ChocoBloc_12

@ChocoBloc_12

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#83

Oh Yesss another FF.. you really do know how to spoil us readers lol

And it's gonna have some heavy shit? That's it i'm hooked already ;)

No really on a serious note, you tackle issues that are so common but just not talked about, (taboo subjects)... you shed light on issues that some may not know even exist... and i love you for it :) Its like learning something new everyday :)

And this first update sounds really good... completely different atmosphere...Hmmm a Bahu? Sounds very exciting..looking forward it :)

Thanks for the PM :)

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littlemoi

@littlemoi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#84

New FF!! Yay!!

Arnav and Akash seem to normal-ish.. but are they really as normal as they seem... cannot wait to find out!!

Please continue soon!!

Thanks for the pm!!

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Preeti.

@-LiveMyLife-

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#85

Interesting start 😃

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Sarah

@Crazy_1001

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#86

It sounds awesome! Cant wait to read more!

Interesting stuff, wondering if you will incorporate the other characters or exclude them especially anjali,

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Tahreem

@Angel-Girl

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#87

So much trust Arnav?!?!

The beginning is interesting ( :

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Vika

@vikadesigirl

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#88

Ahhh Thank you for the wonderful PM.. if I haven't said so before Munchy.. Love reading ur FF's they are the most captivating, original and creative concepts out there.. LOVE IT!!

The FF.. yipee..what a concept... truly.. Manoroma the mother.. and what.. he is not the owner, but a mere employee.. looking forward to reading more...

-Vika😊

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Saba

@n091505

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#89

This Arnav is such a cutie pie...so different from your other FFs that I did a double take... & now I'm getting scared coz I'm waiting for u to pull the rug out from underneath us in the next update where u just might turn him into Mr. Hyde!!!!! LOL. I'm just preparing myself so that a zoor ka jhatka dheere se lage🤣.

Edited by n091505 - 13 years ago