A Walk On The Beach #9|Note: Page 60 (09.01.2015) - Page 7

Originally posted by: Mr_Mrs.KSG

I just luvd the total part. I mean the leap is amazing. U've put it in an amazing way. i luv ur writing style. You portray ur ideas in a amazing way, ofcours many of them would hav told you that. I am kind of i luv with this armaan. I really dont want to read any AR fights, it just puts me in a bad mood plus the uni isn't helping much either. It was amazing to read such a wonderful part after a rough day. I wish you would update like really fast, an installment atleast. Please do not feel like i am bugging you. Its just the reader's addiction. I really want to read more AR close romantic moments. I miss them too much. Looks like I will be getting them soon😳.

I dont know why Armaan was angry at Ridz for not letting him close, I mean You know what I mean. Its just a new different side of Armaan, of course he is a human.☺️

I loved the patchup btw Mindy and Ridz. It was kind of awkward, reading them like pulling each other's hair

And at last, hope You didnt get bored. These were just the thoughts that I put here

Will Be waiting for an update, and plz do update BTHE too. I just luv it. I read it in the blog too. I want to read some more of it. Reader's addiction, as I call it🤔

Continue Super soon😆

Rumzi😃

heyy...
the update was amazing...
firstly about the whole ff... from where you started.. the flashbacks munchkin had was just an innovative way to start... and right from there... to thread 9.. the innovation was always there.
my personal fav. scenes.. the midnight maggi.. chocolate cupcakes whenever she needed.. 😉 .. armaan filling up the criteria for ridz's dream boy... ridz goin talli.. the confession was mindblowing...
and there are a lot more... these all I can remember at the moment.
I'll have to read the whole ff again for othr encapturing moments.. which btw I wudnt mind... but then time wudnt cooperate.. 😕
yeah... remembered one more moment... M n P's day out was adorable too... it made go.. aww...

Now finally coming to this update... it really was lovely...
armaan talkin about riddhima's unbiased opinions... the mindy cat fight... and then the reconciliation... woww...
armaan's exhibits and though it was a bit saddening with that fight... but then all turned out well...
truthfully, I cudnt guess that leap of 2 years... but then after getting to know about it, I found it a nice way for defining the leap.
about your drabbles, they were absolutely wow... i many a times save such excerpts .. my frnd does dat too... heyy but there's no plaigarism involved.. its just to motivate myself and feel good.. there would be no way I cud take credit for such beautiful thoughts...
neways... i hav to go now.. as much as I wish to write more... m goin to get scoldings from mum if i dont stop now..
and yeah do update soon...!!
will b lookin forward to it.

I can never be angry with you Shru nor with this story.. I am sorry:( but then life was stressful and busy, that was the only reason... I am free now, so you'll see me here 🤗

Congrats for the new thread.
I am behind one part actually 🤢😳
So i will quickly run through both the part and come back with comments...

comment edited on pg 7... :)

Hey Shru!

Hey,
I am new on IF...though i have been reading AWOTB since quite some time...i found it on blogspot.com first and then later i found it here on IF..
AWOTB is one of my favourite FF's and i really love this story and the way you have portrayed Armaan and Riddhima's characters...and ofcourse, i simply adore the names Peanuts and Munchkin..:)
You write really well..and most of the times...the narrative flows...! I also like Behind those hazel eyes..although i'd like you to update it more often...but lets talk abt AWOTB here..
So..i love the story..but if i were to make a list of moments/scenes which i hv liked..then it would include...
1- The prelude..i simply loved the way you started..
2- And all the hot chocolates and midni8 maggi scenes...and ofcourse the cupcakes..
3- The farewell party..and all the emotions displayed in that part..
4-The entire Armaan-Andrea engagement drama..and Armaan dropping hints..
5- The confession...and Armaan's entire explanation...coz it showed his POV...and his emotional turmoil...
6- Riddhima turning Romeo...
7- AR's picture perfect date...which had a lil sad ending... but still it ws nice..
and there are many others...but right now time stops me..
To be continued..
P.S- The leap section was also nice...and well i could guess its a leap...:)

Originally posted by: Aanya.

Hey Shru!

Sorry for getting back to this so late, I haven't checked PMs since ages :/

I loved the writing style in this part, it suits the story :D And this part gave major hints to what's going to come, right?

Btw, if Armaan is done studying photography and if he'd taken photography for PG, I assume its been a year or two? So there's been a leap then?

There's a certain maturity in ARs interaction although they're still childish at times haha :D I love how you've done that!

Great update :)

xoxo

P.S - I'm sorry, this comment sucks, but I'm so tired all the time I don't feel like writing at all :/

-edit-

I just read the note, it cleared things up, thanks! Although I gathered there had been a leap, it wasn't perfectly clear :)

Originally posted by: Passing_Breeze

Hey,
I am new on IF...though i have been reading AWOTB since quite some time...i found it on blogspot.com first and then later i found it here on IF..
AWOTB is one of my favourite FF's and i really love this story and the way you have portrayed Armaan and Riddhima's characters...and ofcourse, i simply adore the names Peanuts and Munchkin..:)
You write really well..and most of the times...the narrative flows...! I also like Behind those hazel eyes..although i'd like you to update it more often...but lets talk abt AWOTB here..
So..i love the story..but if i were to make a list of moments/scenes which i hv liked..then it would include...
1- The prelude..i simply loved the way you started..
2- And all the hot chocolates and midni8 maggi scenes...and ofcourse the cupcakes..
3- The farewell party..and all the emotions displayed in that part..
4-The entire Armaan-Andrea engagement drama..and Armaan dropping hints..
5- The confession...and Armaan's entire explanation...coz it showed his POV...and his emotional turmoil...
6- Riddhima turning Romeo...
7- AR's picture perfect date...which had a lil sad ending... but still it ws nice..
and there are many others...but right now time stops me..
To be continued..
P.S- The leap section was also nice...and well i could guess its a leap...:)