A Walk On The Beach #9|Note: Page 60 (09.01.2015)

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Rumz_12

@Rumz_12

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#41

I just luvd the total part. I mean the leap is amazing. U've put it in an amazing way. i luv ur writing style. You portray ur ideas in a amazing way, ofcours many of them would hav told you that. I am kind of i luv with this armaan. I really dont want to read any AR fights, it just puts me in a bad mood plus the uni isn't helping much either. It was amazing to read such a wonderful part after a rough day. I wish you would update like really fast, an installment atleast. Please do not feel like i am bugging you. Its just the reader's addiction. I really want to read more AR close romantic moments. I miss them too much. Looks like I will be getting them soon😳.

I dont know why Armaan was angry at Ridz for not letting him close, I mean You know what I mean. Its just a new different side of Armaan, of course he is a human.☺️

I loved the patchup btw Mindy and Ridz. It was kind of awkward, reading them like pulling each other's hair

And at last, hope You didnt get bored. These were just the thoughts that I put here

Will Be waiting for an update, and plz do update BTHE too. I just luv it. I read it in the blog too. I want to read some more of it. Reader's addiction, as I call it🤔

Continue Super soon😆

Rumzi😃

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-Saumya-

@-Saumya-

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Thanks for reserving for me <3 Will edit it in a day or two :)

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AMOON

@Amoon.88

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

amazing update...as usual...faaab...

looobely...

hw u write each part soo beautifully n nicely...:)

thx 4 da pm sweets..

AMOON

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jannat4ever

@jannat4ever

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Hey Dear
How r u??
well cuming to d update...
LEAP??? i was so shocked reading the leap word...but but i must say it was a nice surprise...
starting from the titles and subtitles I just luved this update ...the way u named every scene was amazing...m so eager to read future updates...
the whole office cat fight was fun to read and the argument u showed b/w AR abt the intimacy...i loved it coz it was so damn real...It was so amazing to read such a wonderful part...please yar requesting u to write some AR romantic moments...I really want to read AR close romantic moments...and yeah the patchup btw Mindy and Riddhima was shocking... It was kind of funny, awkward, reading them like pulling each other's hair...dat was a actual cat fight...hope this Will would fall in love with Mindy..i dnt want him near AR...sachiii...exhibition scene was very nice...i like d way the handle each other...their love, childishness, they luk so cute...u did a great job...wrote it so beautifully...

Will Be waiting for an update

Continue Super soon

Lots of love
Jannat

Edited by jannat4ever - 13 years ago

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shristi

@shristi sarda

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

awsm update...
loved it a lot...
d catfight was awsm... :P
thnks for the pm n update asap...

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ARKJ_4EVER

@ARKJ_4EVER

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Hey Shruuu!!!!🤗

Congratulations!!!! 🥳🥳WOW 9th thread...n along with it a so wonderful surprise...The Leap, The decision...everything is beautifully written...

I'm sooo sorry for late comment but been really busy these days...exams coming up, so sorry!!!!

The update...It feels like a dream as well as that touch of reality!! These 2 years seem to have brought a stillness in their relationship, i don't know but that maturity in them, together with that understanding yet they have not lost that charm or naughtiness , them being always there for each other...It like their love seems to be conquering all ;)

every moment of theirs is so special, whether them Riddhima trying to help Armaan with that exhibit, their love, sharing their problems or Armaan trying to control his jungli billi omg that was a treat to read the cat fight with Mindy!!!! n then at home Armaan laughing at her...it was so funny indeed , can' help laughing that whole time n them Riddhima- the drama queen, that was ROFL...

"That doesn't matter! You promised to be with me in good times and bad, in sickness and in health until death do us part. And this is death for me." I whined.

"Uh, we're not married yet." He rolled his eyes.

But great Mindy n Riddhima has finally patch-up things... :)

Then the exhibition n Armaan's speech that was ...so beautiful whatever he said...so simple yet heart-touching!!!! His parents n Riddhima n Rhea are all very proud...hmmm..well the ending of that perfect night was..like we can't blame either of them...as much as Riddhima's opinions n decision matter , Armaan also isn't wrong ...like it's been always like open in their relationship , them living in , them it's been like more than 2 years, n they've grown up to be like really mature n sure of that relationship...

n the decision...i think it's been a really important n defining moment...like it's his career n his future...the way Armaan said it's his dad's dream but now his dream...love how he talked to Riddhima n in the end chose what he loves the most now...he loves both but he now knows better what he can see himself doing :)) Photography as a hobby is really nice n how he said that Riddhima would be mad like by his choice but she doesn't n love how she handles that , actually both of them...like always...

i love the update so much, n looking forward for more..!!!

Love AWOTB n Peanuts & Munchkins...

P.S :i'm so sorry for commenting late n will be surely the same for some times now n sorry in advance but will surely find some time to read the updates!! now AWOTB is so addictive

Cont soonish

Take care

Muahhh

🤗

Pranishta

Edited by ARKJ_4EVER - 13 years ago

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MidnightMusings

@MidnightMusings

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Hey , first of all

Awesome Idea for a leap..

"You're not counted. Its my rights as your fiance to be mad at you at all times. It's a tactic to be pampered forever!" I grinned. This was 🤣, I actually second her here😆.

I was literally🤣 when Mindy and Riddhima was fighting like Kids😆.. The Party was so beautifully described, every bit was actually, but there I could so well imaging Mindy apologizing, Riddhima's expressions, Armaan's entry... Too much to mention..

So Riddhima meets armaan's mum and Dad, the scene at the exhibit was lovely.. Awesome AR- scenes. AR's individual anger so well justified in the room😳

Armaan is still going for medicine and not for photography.. Great!! I love their convos👍🏼

The last Sentences keep me😍

Great Part.. Been a treat to read this part!! Update soon..

Hugs and Kisses

Liashna

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koel.shah

@koel.shah

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Hi..

I don't comment much..

But for this part.. I thought there was a need to comment.

This part was amazing.. I totally loved it.

Yes u are ryt i dint notice the Leap of the two years till I was at least half way through the part.. after which i realized the connection of the part and the title name.

It is true that us readers always want everything ready.. but i promise u.. from now on i will notice all the details small and big.. so that the plot becomes clearer to me.. and So that it becomes easier to understand as well.

Thank you soo much. Your after note has helped a lot...

After reading the note.. i re-read the part which only made all of it clear to me.

Thank you..

And once again. Lovely part!

Just amazing...

Keep writing.

Continue soon.

Awaiting the next part with much more curiosity.

Love ya... :) :)

Update soon dear... plz...plz...plz..

LOVE,

KOEL

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Zirwa

@zirwa

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#49

hey...Congrats a ton for the new thread :D

i so loved the whole chapter...

the cat fight n then the party scene...too good :)

its nice that munchkin is his inspiration...:)

what didn't go well with me was that how did the scene shift? i didn't really understand...:/ one moment they are mad at each other n the hotel n then they're all lovey dovey in the next scene...i didn't really understand...

please clear me :)

everything else was perfect :D

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Geeta singh

@sweetdesire

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#50

Hey Shruu🤗...First of all toh a very Huge Congratulations for AWOTB # 9👏🥳...I am so happy for you...you And your writing truly deserve it.👏..I always love your writing and always looking forward to read more from you...And you know that right?😳...I know that in the journey of AWOTB I may not be your fav Reader but you and this FF always remain in My fav list😊...I accept that sometimes I was late in commenting but I always read ur updates and try to Comment As soon as possible😳...Ok enough of my blabbing and back to business...THE UPDATE..Simply loved it👍🏼...Love the way you divide this update into sub sections...So thoughtful yaar...I enjoyed this part like anything...So Ridzy and Mandy solve their differences...But I love their cat-fights yaar🤔...Now I am going to miss them😆...Completely understood Armaan's frustration on that matter...After all he is a man ...But I know he will not force Ridzy for anything for sure...Now Armaan is clear on medicine part...Love the way you describe Exhibit part..beautifully written...AR relationship is growing with time...2 years..A lot happens in these two years...Lets see what will happen next... waiting to read more So do try to continue soon...Thanks for the PM.

Take care

Edited by sweetdesire - 13 years ago