A Walk On The Beach #9|Note: Page 60 (09.01.2015)

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Simran

@kajenarshianya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

congrats on the new thread :) cant wait to read more

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KSGforever08

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

where is my pm???????? i am sad!!!! anyway congrats 4 the new thread... nd luved the part

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Coffee

@coffee_beans

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Gratulations for another one! 🤗

--Edited--

Err, so from where do I begin? You know when I first skimmed through this update, I was surprised and a tad bit confused as to what exactly are these drabbles about.. Now, that I have read it whole I actually understand the delay and the anxiety u were facing for this particular update since long.

The whole idea, to me, seems so thoughtful. First the leap makes a lot sense considering how many things are coming up for us all. AR bond seems to be stronger (if thats possible!). Mindy show down and the way it turned ahead was so not expected but then its nice that Ridz could see where Mindy was coming from! The cat fight though amusing to me,as much to Armaan (:P), had to come to an end already. Glad it did! Nevertheless, I dont think Ridz reaction to her comments was wrong. Mindy should have known better than to mess with Ridz. 😆

As for the post-exhibit scene b/w AR, I think u brought that out really well. A guy, how much ever good he is, is bound to have always some issues regarding intimacy (Guys are guys after all! Sigh! 😳) The fact I particularly loved is how Ridz handled it. The difference of opinion might require compromises sometimes but not always and this situation was one of those! Its not like I mean to say, they cant be intimate, but well I feel, such arguments should not be the force for it!

And lastly the part where Armaan has to make a choice.. The phase he is gonna get through is usual. Majority of the people go through it where they're confused with their career choices and take their own time to settle their thoughts. Its great that he now can see what he wants to do eventually! Photography can always be his passion, his hobby whereas medicine can be his career - so apt. He has made his choice accordingly - thats what matters in the end! 😊

In short, the whole leap thing fascinated me. I'm looking forward to it as so much awaits us :D I'm intrigued, excited and already tapping my fingers for next update 😳

love
-V-

Edited by Ethereal-Path - 13 years ago

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mehak_mangi

@mehak_mangi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Thank god u updated!!! i missed my peanuts and munchkin sooo much!! i thought this ff has been abandoned..thank god it isn't!

coming to the chapter,as usual it was brilliant!! i loved the starting where u hav explained a new perspective about "the leap"..The leap brought a different level of maturity in their relationship.

the cat fight b/w mindy and munchkin was wild though! but everything got settled for good...

I loved armaan's introductory speech..can feel what moment of achievement meant for him..

his outburst was not expected though! but i hav full faith in my peanuts and munchkin..they won't let such issues distrurb their relationship in any way..

so now ammy is clear about his career plans! it is gud to hav a clear vision..i wish him all d best!!

A big thank you to you for continuing this ff!! i love u for this!! keep writing always..update soon..

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bushrayou

@bushrayou

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

yayayayayay!!!

so excited to read !!
congrats on another well deserved thread!!

have missed this FF sooo much!!!

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Munchkin.

@Munchkin.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

-note-

Hello! I forgot to post the after-note this time, since I was in a hurry yesterday.. Anyway, yea, so here's the part. By the comments I received till now, I don't think people paid any attention to detail. The point of this whole part - is that its not a chapter of the actual story, but its more a sort of a prelude of what all is going to follow in the next chapters. Plus, if you guys noticed at all - this part has been a sort of collection of drabbles to show a shift in time - in this case: of 2 years. The story has taken a leap of a good 2 years, and as much as I would have loved a reaction to that, none of you'll have pointed that out yet. Maybe the part didn't come out as perfect as I wanted it, after all. Anyhow, readers who haven't commented yet, since you'll have read this note now - please let me know what you think about this! Thanks!

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JhakaasAccio

@JhakaasAccio

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Hey!
I just started reading FF's and I love AWOTB!
I can read it so many times!I love munchkin and peanuts!
I usually don't comment but your writing skills made me comment!:P

PS-In this chapter, if you would have written after 1 year or so-it would've been more clear!You don'T me telling you that,right?:@
Nevertheless I love this FF!:D

Ps-I am new here...so I don't know what to call you!:)

Edited by Accio_kajen - 12 years ago

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pinderdd

@pinderdd

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

amazing update! can't wait to read more, update soon

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Munchkin.

@Munchkin.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: shikhi
Hey!
I just started reading FF's and I love AWOTB!
I can read it so many times!I love munchkin and peanuts!
I usually don't comment but your writing skills made me comment!:P

PS-In this chapter, if you would have written after 1 year or so-it would've been more clear!You don'T me telling you that,right?:@
Nevertheless I love this FF!:D

Ps-I am new here...so I don't know what to call you!:)

Um, hey there, and thanks for reading and commenting :)

I know I could have written '2 Years Later..', but the main point of the part was NOT to write that. It was a gradual description of the 2 years, actually. It started with a few months ahead of where I ended the last part, with Armaan's very first exhibit, and ended at 2 years later, with Armaan's LAST exhibit nearing up close.. I wrote it like this with the intention of letting everyone know what conspired in those 2 years, and how they are basic bread-crumbs for the story ahead. My other option was - as you pointed out - to show 2 years later, and immediately bump off to the present and show all of this as flashback. But that was way too cliched, and I just wanted to try out something new. It was also my attempt at finding out if I actually give my readers something to think about, if they ponder over what the part consisted, pay attention to detail and actually speak out what the part was for - a leap of 2 years, just to show that AR have been going strong for 2 years now. It was right there in the title.

Well, I don't really think I was successful in that attempt, LOL! But its done, so I'll just count my failure as a learning point :)

Thanks again! :)

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zyanah

@zyanah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#30

wooohooo party time...finally u updated!!

dear shru...loved every bit of it...but all i dont understand is that why are you not writing this story for yourself instead of writing it for others???

why do comments always measures an authors talent????

i m also a silent reader and dont comment on most of the ffs but still i do give a damn to it and i love this ff to the core and idont the writer of this wonderful ff to feel bad.ok...so i think i made my point and never leave ur story in middle