eyes that mesmerized(AK).on hold till may

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

superb update

they meet again...waiting to read ehat happens next

thanks for pm

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glossyglassy

@glossyglassy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Lovely update...

Btw can i suggest something if u dont mind? Can u use some kind of break line to show scene change...i got a bit confused while reading...

Thx for Pm

Waiting for 15th

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Sadia

@SaDiA_IqBaLkHaN

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Wow im already in to it :) continue soon x

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Palika Arora

@aroramaina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Speechless ,Awesome part.Cant wait to read the next part

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monika

@monikaseth

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

wow they meet love it awesome part

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Jesmin

@...Jes...

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

awesome update...plz do continue soon...😊

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zainab03

@zainab03

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Amazing update thank you for it :)

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Maria

@JRia

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

nice part

loved the way u described Angad and Kripa

do continue soon

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517072

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Awesome start!! Plz pm me whenever u update! 😳

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Faiza

@*F^a^i^z^a*

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#30

Like last time, amazing job. Really like your writing. So they finally meet again. I like the way they have names for each other archangel and green eyes. Great part. Looking forward to more

Faiza

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