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Posted: 13 years ago
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Good intro, waiting for next part. What part of india is Kripa from cause I've never heard kappa being used in any indian serials, I'm assuming kappa means grandfather p.s I'm not Indian hence the need for clarification
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Good intro, really liked the way you started the story. Another angad kripa fanfiction so definately looking forward to reading more. Keep writing. Looking forward to more

Faiza

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awsum update luvd da concept
Plzz cont soon x
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: aroramaina

Awesome Update. Sparks fly in very first meeting

thnx, its ur idea so i guess it will be good.

Originally posted by: monikaseth

wow amazing great start please conti soon

thnx for reading

Originally posted by: angadkripakyphh

Mindblowing, awesome part!
cont soon n next time PM me dear
PS- thanks aroramaina for the PM

thnx. yup i will pm you.

Originally posted by: Anyah

WE WANT KAISA YEH PYAR HAI SEASON 2 WITH THE SAME CAST!! I'm missing them soo much :'(

we all miss them:)

Originally posted by: glossyglassy

Great start...love your writing style

Plz PM me from next time
Cont soon..

thnx for reading and the compliment:)

Originally posted by: spvd

nice...
cont soon dear...

thnx for reading

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Posted: 13 years ago
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thnx for reading:)

Originally posted by: griffy.fz

Awesum
jst loved the part
perfect for intro plz msg me when u update
ak magic never goes
rock on
cheers

thnx. yup ak magic is forever, thats why i cant help but base my characters on them:)

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

brilliant start cant wait

thnx or reading:)

Originally posted by: flowers4u

an ff on one of my most fav couple...loved the starting...continue soon...

they are my fav too. thnx for reading.

Originally posted by: ashwini_k

introduction was nice, Pl add me to ur PM list

thnx for reading, yup i will pm u when i update next:)


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Angel-Jot.

Aww, this is such a wonderful story. Please do continue it and PM me whenever you update. =)

-jot.

thnx for reading, i hope u like the story more and more as it progresses:)

Originally posted by: ShellyB

Good intro, waiting for next part. What part of india is Kripa from cause I've never heard kappa being used in any indian serials, I'm assuming kappa means grandfather p.s I'm not Indian hence the need for clarification

Kappa is the name given by Yuvi to their grandfather when he was young, since then it stuck. Yuvi is Kripa's brother. Kappa comes Appa.

Originally posted by: *F^a^i^z^a*

Good intro, really liked the way you started the story. Another angad kripa fanfiction so definately looking forward to reading more. Keep writing. Looking forward to more


Faiza

hey thnx for reading:)

Originally posted by: soni4eva

Awsum update luvd da concept
Plzz cont soon x

thnx. i will be posting the nxt part soon:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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New Alliances

6 months later

Angad was at a party to celebrate the 25th anniversary of the Agarwal Enterprises, at his mentor's home. Mehen Agarwal was the one person who had trusted in him, and gave him his initial capital to establish an HR consultancy firm, Khanna Consultancy now known worldwide for its services. Mishty Agarwal, Mehen sir's daughter was giving him meaningful glances. Though she was a nice enough girl, but he was not interested. He went out with only those women who wouldn't have any expectations of marriage and a happily ever after. Mishty wasn't one of them; therefore she was out of league. But her eyes reminded her of those pretty greenish gold eyes that he cannot forget about.

Someone touched his shoulder, he looked around to find Mehen sir standing there looking up at him expectantly, at his side stood a gentleman, he had seen for the first time. "Angad, meet Viven Sharma, one of my oldest friends." Mehen sir said.

Mehen sir also mentioned that Mr. Sharma has just returned from London after wrapping up his business of providing business solutions there. He was looking for a partner to open up the same here in India. Kappa Solutions were known for its honest practices and solutions that turned around businesses which were suffering major losses. Angad had wanted to approach the owner for a long time, but due to time constraints he was not able to do so. They had a nice chat, and agreed to meet at a later date soon after exchanging their cards.

Kripa was having trouble. Bhai had dropped her off at an exclusive ethnic wear showroom to select a dress for the small celebration organized on the opening of Kappa-Khanna Solutions. She had never worn a dress in her 25 years of life. T- Shirts and shorts were party were her modus operandi. Though the saleswoman was helpful but Kripa was thoroughly confused. For the first time in her life she wanted to look like a woman. She had this feeling that something was going to happen this evening. She tried endless dresses ranging from salwar suits to lightly embroidered lenga but nothing seemed just right. That instant recognition when we just know this dress was meant for me was missing.

A woman was observing Kripa's growing frustration. The girl didn't know what suited her and what didn't. Until now she had just chosen dresses that didn't. Finally she took pity on her and gave her a green gold kalidaar chudidaar suit to try. She looked mystified, as if she has never been helped by a stranger, but finally took the dress.

Kripa looked at herself in the mirror, and thought that's what I was looking for. But just to be sure, she went out to find the kind lady standing there waiting for her. When she looked at Kripa, she gave her a smile and thumbs up. Decision made Kripa thanked the lady for helping and bought the dress.

Kripa sighed at the bell which has rung umpteen times today. With all the preparations for the celebration that evening, many people were coming and going. Kripa has taken the responsibility of preparing for the celebration, since she wanted to contribute in some small way on this big day. When she opened the door, it was to find her archangel standing on the threshold. Today he looked different. His dark eyes were alert, his hair was cropped short, they were combed away from the forehead unlike all those months ago, but his smile was still mesmerizing. When she was able to snap her gaze away from his, her brain started functioning again. She wondered what he was doing on her door step. Before she could voice the question, he asked, "Aren't you going to invite me in?"

Bhai came to investigate the abrupt silence. As soon as he looked at Angad, he gave him a brief hug and invited him in. Angad was still smiling, at green eyes. Yuvraj has mentioned about his sister, but Angad would never have guessed she would be his green eyes. He had told her she had finished her MBA and was looking to establish her PR business. That implied she was at least 23, but she still looked like a teenager. She was wearing those awful glasses, but Delhi's heat has forced her to wear shorts. He admired her legs as much as he could with her brother standing there.

"Angad, meet my sister Kripa," Yuvraj said, "Kripa, meet Mr. Angad Khanna. He is our new business partner."


Hello,

thnx for the wonderful response. i hope you all like this part too. next update will be around 15th.

Happy Reading:)

Love,

Anshu

Edited by ...anshu... - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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yay me 1st
awsum update totally luvd it
cnt w8 4 da nxt part plzz cont soon x
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Posted: 13 years ago
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cute part
whose the mysterious stranger ?!!!!
plz cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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fantastic they meet again...can't wait for the firewrks...keep on writting.

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