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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#61

This is written so beautifully :)

I think you know, but still, you are one of the most brilliant writers on this forum, really :D

This OS was nothing short of perfect. For starters, the conflicting emotions going through Khushi's mind, is written so perfectly.

And then the way she contrasts the right with the wrong, the dark with the light, its heart-wrenching :)

Great, great piece :D

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Srijanee

@luvflicksgirl

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#62

loved the ending... a perfect one

thnx for the pm

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ilive2laugh

@ilive2laugh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#63

typical arnav but i like it!

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medha

@medha16

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#64

beautiful OS...u really understand n bring arnavs compklex character to the fore...n the last 2 paragraph had apt descriptions 4 their relationship...cudnt have put it better!

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purplekid

@purplekid

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Babes, that was perfect! And you know I kill for a dark Arnav! Love you :D

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Sowmya Ramachandran

@sowms1395

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#66

Hey Haffie

That was Lovely

Good luck with your exams

Hope to read on the 13th

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Mira

@kyunki_iloveu

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#67

yayy another os..i luv how khushi said that as much as she wants to go away from him..she feels complete with only him...it is sooo true..:)

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#68

interesting and frightening at the same time
the way you portrayed this dark arnav was excellent suits his character
does anyone else think so

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#69

Brilliantly written OS felt sorry for Khushi she seemed so confused

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Aarti

@aartipartyy

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#70

I loved it Haffie!!

Good luck in your exams!! 😊

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