OS: Broken Wings.

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

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Posted: 13 years ago

#101

hi dear

nice, strange os😆

i liked it👍🏼

thanks for the pm

take care

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Banginbengali

@Banginbengali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#102

LOVED LOVED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😃Just like Khushi I couldn't get my feelings to stay the same, at one point I loved n then other part I felt like punchin the light outta him😕 lol!!!!!!!!!! But Eviffie...superb!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏

When he burned the contract I was like WTH???😲 n the way you wrote about the papers becomin ashes, n in her tears they cooled down,👏 it was just beautiful!! I don't have to tell how beautiful your writing is..it is out of this world great 😛, n the details you put in is just so nice!!

Poor Khushi, tryin to hide from him, n tryin to figure out her feelings!!😭 The way she wanted to be the star, n Arnav found her. The way he said not to scream n held her..uff I felt like punchin him!! 😡N then he said that he wanted t osleep with her 😳..awww! N how Khushi knew that he was angry, n the kiss, Khushi hittin his chest. N OMG I felt like hittin Arnav when he threw her on the bed, poor Khushi! 😡😭The way he ushered her to come close!! N my favorite part when she put her hand on his first n then intertwined them 👏..just beautiful, you cant hate him more then you love him...n the wings part was just beautiful!!!

Eviffie...purely beautiful!! ⭐️I just love it!! Missed you writing!! n sorry late as usual...new work killin me!!

Edited by Banginbengali - 13 years ago