OS: Broken Wings.

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Sexy Sobti

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Omg Haffie this is beautiful loved it...

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KaaminiJha

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Posted: 13 years ago

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me second!!

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strange Os.

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i liked it and i didnt.

i think reding your version of khushi has made me indecisive like her.

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thank u for pm.

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Finally I'm getting comment in the same page of an update! Isn't that an achievement??😉

I thought u vanished in some thin air and hence no updates or even no OS's. Thank God you are still alive!

And U r back with an OS.. Not that dark but sure not light😛

I loved reading it! How unwilling she was with him yet how she felt complete only with him!

Cold dark starless night.. And she was forced to sleep with him all night! But fore sure somewhere the 2 stars would be blinking to bless her now!

Thanks for the PM..

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Prakrithy

@Arya1991

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Posted: 13 years ago

wow.

well-written...

i especially loved the last para!

~Arya~

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sarra0

@sarra0

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Posted: 13 years ago

Fab os, r u planning on more than one part to this os? I wud love to read more

Good luck wit ur exams

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rashgirl000

@rashgirl000

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Posted: 13 years ago

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well that was equal part scary, sad, hopeful.

seeing this side of arnav is really scary.

sad for khushi. for not getting love. for what she went through

and hopeful coz in future all this can lead to happy ending if they trust each other.

lovely update. and thanks for the pm😊

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sRistee

@crazy44

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Posted: 13 years ago

He was the one who gave her wings, but in the end he was the one who tore them apart. The bird would never be able to fly away from her owner, thecage. this was heartwrenchIng!
and like you i have a thing for dark arnav!
awesome Os dear. loveD it !!

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Vishwa

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Posted: 13 years ago

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wwhoopp di doo!

this is d first OS of yours that i read. And i love the way you write!!

But i am confused .. about many things.

First, according to ur plot, has arnav confessed his feelings? has khushi confessed her feelings?

and y is arnav not repentant of all that he put her through? im referring to where he says he is not sorry for anything he did to her. does he still not know the truth?

and has he kept her with him mainly cuz he loves her or cuz he still doesnt knw the truth and thinks she is still a 'danger' to his di?

please do answer my questions whenevr ur free!! (cud u prob pm me? only if thats convenient to u).

oh but i loved the way u expressed the conflicting emotions on both of their parts!

awesum work mate!

keep it up

P.S.: all the very best for your exams! break a leg! n i hope they are gud cuz den u will be in a gud mood and give us fastr and happy updates! i knw im selfish! haha

adios

Edited by vish94 - 13 years ago