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ardis

@Mirza1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

wow, really liked it. Amazing

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kiran deep kaur

@sikhni_

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

wow loved it tht was awesome ,,,,plzz continue na 😃,,n thnks for pm 🤗

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MsCeylon

@MsCeylon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Awesome would be an understatement

take a bow from me

very well written 👏

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NaLeyton23

@NaLeyton23

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Really Nice!

Arnav was amazing and you had all the emotions pat down!

the starless night part was just heartbreaking!

😊

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achu_arshi

@achu_arshi

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

very strange os

i love it

so different

and arnav she is so hot

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starzyasha

@starzyasha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Beautifully written!!!👏

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KKG_ASR

@KKG_ASR

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

u should continue this OS i wanna read more ... its very short tooo...

thks 4D PM..

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peppygeek

@peppygeek

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

I clearly have a thing for dark Arnav,thanks to you.

The sadist in me actually liked it a lot. I didn't bad for Khushi.

Something is wrong with me right now. I have come back and re read sometime later.

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Yuks

@-Yuks-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Dark Arnav is the only Arnav for me too.

This was an excellent OS. I wish this was the tactic Arnav had used before as well. It doesnt mater who SHE loves. He loves her so she will be his.
When I read the article that Arnav is a dark character, this is what I expected, and the show failed my expectations.

I wanted that after the terrace scene, Arnav decide, it doesnt matter. He will deal with Shyam, the one who is actually treacherous, in his own way, and never let Khushi go.
I noticed that when the Raizadas brought Payal's rishta she wasn't consulted. The family simply said yes. So Arnav, while the wedding was progressing, would say to Anjali that he wishes to marry Khushi. And Anjali, seeing that Khushi also has feelings for Arnav, agrees.
She, that evening only, proposes to the Gupas.
Khushi is happy, but his behaviour has changed somewhat, which confuses her. He has changed.

I so desperately wanted to see that in the show. Unfortunately, the CVs were in a hurry and get them married in one go. Ridiculous.

I will write an OS on this someday.

Anyways, I loved loved your OS.

Yuks

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.Saraa.

@.Saraa.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#30

wow..its awsome very beautifully written..loved its every bit..

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