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Posted: 13 years ago
#91
hey guys so here i come again...i know tum kisi aur ss ye ff ki update ki wait kar rahe ho...par kya karoon ...waise guys mai na soch rahi hun ki kaise bhi karke sab stop kardun...i mean do teen update mei saare ss stop kardun...i dnt think tum sab ko acha lag raha hai ...so agar tum logon ko intrest nahi hai toh mai kyun likhun??? theek hai chalo cmnts chodo ...likes...bas 40??? mai toh 92 members ko pms bhej rahi hun...so baaki kaha hai????😡 i dnt know cmnts baad mei but agar meine 92 pms bheje hai toh then i want atleast 80 lyks ...tum logon ko agar ye demand laga toh kk im demanding ...agar lyk nahi karni toh just delete my pms id...just thats it...i m fed up...and haa pms se yaad aaya...guys mai saare readers ko kitni baar kahun??????pms keliye meri doosri id add kejiye...are mere signature mai bhi wahi ikha hai ...cant u guys just get that...plzz haat jhodti hun ...

agar pms chahiye toh add my another id to buddylist that is
abssd

plzzz samjha karo...jo bhi mere iss id ko request bhejte hai sabko pm kar kar ke thak chuki hun...plzz add my another id...*phew* pata nahi kehte kehte gir na jaun...

and haa guys another important note

guys agar iss update ki response achi aayi toh tabhi mai ache se update karoongi i mean wo story jo maine pehle socha hai nahi toh the next one will be the last part and meri baaki jo bhi ss hai sab ki bhi last parts hi honge...

and haa baatcutter update na karne ki wajah yahi hai ki mujhe dar lag raha hai ki agar aisi response aayi toh???? but guys trust me agar aisi aayi toh baat cutter bhi max of 5 updates mai khatam hojayega...and arsha ff ka last part hoga ...so guys baaki sab tum logon ki marzi...maine toh baatcutter keliye bohut kuch soch rakha hai ... i think nearly 20 more updates ka...par 20 ya 5 aapki response pe base hoga...

and let me clear u 20 se 5 banana mereliye bohut easy hai...if wanted mai 3 parts mai bhi khatam kar sakti hun...i know tum logon ko lag raha hoga ki jyaada bhav kha rahi hai ...par guys i think i deserve it...yes nah??? plzz agar aisa nahi hai toh bata dena...coz mai shayad apne aapke baare mei kuch jyaada hi sochne lagi...hmm...😔
par sorry guys i cant ...kyun ki bohut saare logon ko meri baatcutter ff pasand hai ...personally mujhe bhi... wo end karna ...u know how difficult it would be???? hmm...baaki aapki marzi...atleast lyk guys...and if possible atleast one word cmnts...khush hojaungi...but agar response nahi hoga toh i will think my writings are not worth reading😔...

i know bohut lamba bhashan tha...par kya karun...i just want to let myself out...

love u all 4r the love u give 😳

❤️deetha❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92
Deetha i can understand ur situation But plz plz plz plz apne FF end mat karo.

tum filmy queen ho aur we love reading it and love u too.
So plz mat end karo.
Hope u get ur likes.


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Posted: 13 years ago
#93
deetha...we love ur works alot...
plzz don't end it dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
#94
kriya Bhoot Hain Kya?😕

Suspenseful Update...
Just waiting for Next Update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#95
plzz don dc coz v r in luv wid ur ff...n i'm sure you'll get very gud response very soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#96
next day shilpa was near the breakfast table adjusting everything...kriya too helped her in this...
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all came to breakfast table...swaron kriyaansh and shilpa sat for breakfast...while eating sharon cracked some joke 4r which all laughed...kriya was laughing and rey got lost in her...everyone noticed this...they looked at kriya who was laughing and then at rey who was lost in her...sharon coughed which brought rey to eartha nd kriya stopped laughing...shilpa and sharon smiled on seeing them when swayam frowned...

agar sach mei rey ko isse khatra hai toh agar ye use pyaar karne laga toh uskeliye aur aasan hogi rey ko maarna...par mai aisa nahi hone dunga...

"kriya tumne kaha ki tum uncle ki room mei jaate hi wo tumhe dekh ke mar gaye par wo door toh tab locked tha ...toh tum jhoot bol rahi thi ri8???? kya kiya tumne uncle ke saath bolo..."swayam shouted...

everyone went silent...thats when everyone realised it...all looked at kriya...kriya looked at swayam for some time and then at all lyk dat...finally she gave a smile...then finally all came to senses...they felt as if they fainted...

"swayam tum kuch pooch rahe the,..."kriya asked innocently...

"mai??? mai kya pooch raha tha???? haan wo aaj naashte mei kya hai???"he said shaking his head as he felt it heavy...

"oh...aaj aloo parathe hai..."kriya said...

"wat??? not again mom..."rey said pouting...

" theek hai rey mai tumhareliye sandwich banake laati hun wait..."shilpa said and served parathas to every one she was abt to turn when swayam said...

"ummm...aunty wow...its heaven ...aaj aapke haat ki parathe kuch alag lag rahe hai..."swayam cmnted...

"swayam ye maine nahi kriya ne banaya"shilpa said and turned...

"mom!!!!! kaha jaa rahi ho
???"rey asked...

"arey tumhare liye sandwich banane keliye..." shilpa said...

"nahi mom...its ok...aap mereliye itna takleef kyun leti ho...aaj parathe se adjust karloonga..."rey said...


swaron and shilpa smiled...

"acha beta ...sach bata mom ki takleef ki padi ya kisiki haat ki khana khane ki padi??? "shilpa asked raising her eyebrows...

"haan bolo bolo"swaron teased him...kriya blushed and rey said..."aisa kuch nahi hai"

they had their breakfast and sharon said...

"mom...actually kriya ke paas koi kapde nahi hai...wo meri jaise kapde toh nahi pehnti...isiliye maine apne paas jo eklouta salwar hai use dediya..."sharonsaid

"theek hai beta toh aaj shopping keliye chalte hai...kyun swayam???"shilpa said...


"kya????shopping with ladis...wo bhi teen teen NAHI!!!!!!!!!!! "swayam said...

"arey chalte haina swayam ...akele thodi na jayenge wo log..."rey said...

"acha...tu kabse shoping keliye jaane mei intrested ho???"swayam asked...

"aisa kuch nahi ...bas chalo tayyar hoke aaja...in 15 mins..."rey said and went into his room...all smiled and left ...


in mall sharon selected dresses but kriya was never gonna wear those...finally shilpa handed kriya adress...kriya went into trial room...all were waiting ...finally she entered...rey was mesmerised...really he never liked those typical indian type girls but she seemed gorgeous...he said wow!!!!!!!!all looked at his gaze and followed it...really kriya looked cute...
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.so finally they completed...while gng back kriya excused herself 4r washroom...finally they reaced out...rey had parked the car beside the road as he didnt find any place ...rey went to the driver seat...kriya was looking at rey ...infact its apt to say she was glaring...swayam noticed this...he followed her gaze and found rey...again looked at her...now she was looking somewhere else...
he looked in that direction...he saw a truck rushing towards them they finally he got that its gonna hit rey...he in seconds pulled rey aside...rey was saved in secs...if not he would be no more...
swayam hugged rey tight and cried...he was hell feared...shilpa and sharon also came...after some tym swayam asked...kriya kahan hai...looking around...

"woh ab tak washroom se nahi aayi"sharon replied...

swayam had goosebumps...till now he was standing beside kriya...but she didnt return from washroom???? he was scared finalyy he noticed kriya coming out of the mall .she was smiling as she came near she sensed the situation as sharon was crying hugging rey...

"kya hua aunty???"she enquired...swayam was just looking at her...shilpa narrated the story...

"rey aap theek toh haina???"kriya asked concerned...

"haan im alright agar swayam na hota toh pata nahi kaha hota..."rey said as sharon hugged him more tight...

kriya smiled at swayam...swayam turned to rey and he from the side mirror found kriya glaring at him...when he turned she was not there she was on the other side with smriti...swayam was really feared...swayam was just disturbed...and days pased...one day sharon insisted swayam to take her out and shilpa went for some meeting...kriyaansh were single at home...in these days kriyaansh came very close to each other he thought that this was the ri8 tym to propose her...but he waited for a correct tym...he was watcing tv when he saw her gng to her room...he tought of following but felt nervouse...finally after a lot of struggle he entered her room she was struggling with her dori...no dupatta...rey gulped hard ...he slowly moved forward and took the dori and tied as kriya closed her eyes ...he slowly kissed her nape...he shivered...he slowly slid his hands onto her waist hugging her tight and started kissing...while kissing her neck he mumbled."i love u"

he got and instant reply"i love u too"...rey pulled back...thats when kriya realised what she told...he turned her to him and pulled her to him...she shivered...he slowly pulled her to bed and both fell on the bed...rey kissed her neck ...and her bare chest...and kissed on her lips..his hands found her dori and was abt to pull it when they heard a doorbell...rey cursed and went to opn as kriya made herself and came down...soon as rey opened the door swayam hugged him tight...sharon came in confused...

"swayam kya hua??? aaj itna weird kyun behave kar raha hai...na theek se shopping ki...na theek se khaya...aur ab rey ko aise gale laga rahe ho ki rey ko kuch hogaya..."sharon shouted out her frustration...

swayam slowly looked at kriya ...who was standing with a smirk...

rey asked what happened to which swayam answered nothing and pulled back...

"kriya tumne khana banaliya???"sharon asked...

"nahi sharon woh abhi banane wali thi ...bas/..."kriya was saying...

"arey nahi nahi...humne pack karke leaagaye..."sharon said...they had their lunch...







abhi bhi baaki hai doston...par mujhe bhook lagi hai...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97
unres next page pe ho gaya hai...

actually i forgot ki i had resd here and then i gave a normal comment again...

sorry
Edited by kriyansh24 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98
res

unres

ok first of all a big sorry deetha di for unresung it this late

was preoccupied!

Well coming to the update it was fabv as usual!


Edited by abhiyakreya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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res
unres...
updt toh awesome tha
but i'm very much confused...
kria bhoth toh nahi h... 😕
updt soon
Edited by Kriyansh_jaanu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
it was helll!!!!!!!!! scary deethu
mjhe to smjh hi ni aya jb swayam ne wo hospital wala ques put up kia uske baad sbko hua kya...n den all if dem behaving normally

n den kriya glaring at rey n den rey truck accident...n den she is coming 4m mall...gossshhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!! its tooo confusing

ya to dis jst imagination of swayam...or ya kriya is evil(which is nt possible)...or it may b some 1 other who is doing all dis

n u knw wht first tym...mera kriyaansh ke romance ne affect ni kia...coz my mind is jst thinking abt all dat

bt dey confessed dere love na...n den swayam behaving wierdly...goshhh!!!!!! dis is really confusing

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