JAANeman JAANeDO!!(KRSS)lastpart+epilouge pg56

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"hello,mr.rey...???"

"ji dr.singh mai hi bol raha hun ...aapne call kiya?? anything serious?"

"ji rey...i wish aap isi waqt yaha aaye...he is in critical condition"

"kya hua rey??? "sharon asked...

"ji dr mai abhi aata hun lekin hua kya??"

the doctor explained in short...rey was shocked but dragged sharon along with him and drove fast...on the way he explained everything to sharon..she burst into tears...in no tym sharon eyes got swollen due to crying...rey crying himself controlled sharon and finally reached the hospital...as soon as sharon got down she saw swayam and hugged him tight...

"swayam ..uncle...uncle ko kuch nahi hoga na"

"nothing sharon nothing at all...come lets go"

all were rushing in...suddenly while getting close to ICU rey banged into someone he asked sorry ...swayam looked back to see who it is...he saw a girl in a hurry and continuosly glaring at rey...swayam looked at rey and looked back but the girl vanished...he ignored the thought o searching her and headed to ICU...as soon as they came before ICU the doctor came out...

"woh kaise hai??? " rey asked...

"sorry rey but...he is no more"

rey's mom who was standing beside fainted as swaron caught her and rey cluthed the doctors collar...


"kaise??? kaise ho sakta hai ye??? aapne toh kaha tha ki rey chinta mat kijiye slight heart attack hai woh bhi pehli baar...so koi tension nahi??? toh phir ye hua kaise????"

rey's mom was taken 4r aid with sharon and swayam pulled rey back...

"rey samhalo apne aapko...kya kar raha hai??? woh tere dad ki frnd hai...infact best frnd...ur not meant to tak lyk dis...he is hurt too..."

rey got back to senses and appologised him...

"koi baat nahi rey...maine bhi expect nahi kiya...infact mai toh iskeliye davayiya lene gaya tha ki iske baad isko side effect bhi na ho...i still cant belive ki ye hua kaise??"doctor said

"wat do u mean by that doctor??"reyam asked in one tone...

"rey actually jab ise leke aaye the i treated him..and he is fine...bas 2-4 ghanton ka rest baaki thi...but achanak se jab mei bahar gaya aur wapis aake dekha toh he is no more and im sure its coz of heart attack and i guess usse bohut bhayankar cheez dekha ho isiliye heart attack aagayi..."dr said wiping a tear of his...

swayam looked back and side then he found that the room beside the icu is open he silently went into it when the dr was busy in consoling rey...

swayam looked around and found that it was some room consisting the tools used 4r operation...and a sall door lead into the icu...he slowly walked to it and stood near the door ( glass door)and saw the person who is were humble and very gentle lying on the bed ...tears rolled ...suddenly he tried to open the door when he felt some ones hand...
he turned around...

"beta tum yaha kya kar rahe ho??its restricted area and haa uss taraf se jao..ye door bas operation ke tym pe hi khulta hai..."dr said..

"hmm...ji" reyam went in to see reys dad...







ps: confused why is sharon crying.so let me tell u..rey's dad and sharon dad were best buddies just yk sharey...but sharon lost her parents in a flight accident when she was 16 and 4rm that second she lived with rey ...as his sibling...rey's dad never made her miss the love and care of her dad and so was with rey's mom...they accepted that they had a son and a daughter tooo...


koun thi woh ladki??? kya uski aur rey ke dad ke mauth ka kuch connection hai????





kuch alag laga??? kuch samaj aaya??? story ka theme???nahi???toh wait karo...:P



hint: title kaisa laga???


❤️deetha❤️



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Posted: 13 years ago
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Res
yippee first one to comment...
Shit kitne saare suspence hain
And kya woh ladki kriya hain nd agar hain tho uska kya rey ke dad ki death se related hain...
Oh mam main update keliye wait nahi kar sakti and ff acha hi hoga tumhaara jo hain aur haan baatcutter ff jaldi update karona it's quite intetesting ...
I would end by saying "din dinadin din din ke upar chak chak chakachak chak finchakkk I so loved the intro... Jaldi update karo aur plsss tadpana mat...
Aur haan u r the most romantic writer on IF... 👍🏼
Edited by suchitrabehera - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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m really confused...thinking about title of this...
let me guess...it may be..."Maut Ka RaaZ"...😆 jus kidding...
ur ff is really different...
pm me when u update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#4
Waiting for next part I love all your writings
Himu_arsha thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Pm me when update any of you FF
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i am little confused ...kya ho raha hai and who was she...

waiting eagerly for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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*Res*


**Unres**


Wow...!!!


Another fabulous work...


Loved it...


But a confusing one.


Rey takes Sharon along wid him...


Interesting one...


Updt soon n pm me:)


Love u tons Deetha..

Edited by snigdha_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesme work
sharon n rey r bro n sis
who is tat girl??????
its confusin the story n the title r opposite
plzzz update soon
Edited by dildostidance01 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i am a bit confused...
i guess the girl was Kria... its a wild guess... u can call it like "andhere mein teer chodne ki tarah hai" but still.. a weird guess...
or title toh samajh ke bahar hai... after reading this part...
itne saare mysteries de rakhe hain ss mein pata nahi kab tak sab clear hoga...
but i liked it..


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Posted: 13 years ago
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ye kya tha??
m too confused di..
plz update soon..
it was awesome but mujhe kuch samajh nhi aya...
plz do update fast
and thx for the PM
Edited by Dazzling_Smile - 13 years ago

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