MAANEET FF JAANE TU YA JAANE NA #5 LINK # 6 pg 140 - Page 4

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Edited by Gcs-girl - 13 years ago
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Thanks for your love and support dear friends.Here is the next update I hope each one of u will enjoy reading it
love-Piya
PART 29

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The Geet who was standing there right now was a new Geet; yes she was the girl who would now live her life on her own terms; she will be successful and would take care of only those people who deserve her love

For the selfish world she was now a stonehearted woman who knew very well how to crush the selfish people beneath her feet

Meanwhile,

Prem and Adi were getting worried

Adi: Prem hume Geet ko yun akele jaane nahi dena chahiye tha mujhe uski badi fikr ho rahi hai [We shouldn't have allowed Geet to go alone I am getting tensed now]

Prem: Fikr toh mujhe bhi ho rahi hai par mujhe apni Geet par pura bharosa hai wo kabhi bhi koi galat kadam nahi uthayegi [Even I am getting tensed now but I trust my Geet totally I am sure she will never take any wrong step]

Adi: Tu sahi keh raha hai par abhi tak toh usse laut aana chahiye tha rukh ek kaam karta hoon usse call karke dektha hoon [U r right but she should have returned back by now wait let me just call her and check]

Adi dials her number but there was no response

Prem: Kya hua? [What's the matter?]

Adi: Check the number u have dialed aisa jawab mil raha hai [Check the number u have dialed this is the response that I am getting]

Prem: Aisa kaise ho saktha hai? [How's that possible?]

Geet: Kyun nahi ho saktha? [Why can't it be possible?]

Prem and Adi breathe a sigh of relief after seeing Geet

They get up and hug Geet immediately; poor Geet got crushed in their caring embrace

Geet: Guys aap logh toh aise react kar rahe ho jaise k aap mujhe aaj k baad kabhi dekh hi nahi paayoge [Guys both of u r reacting as if none of u would be able to see me again]

Prem and Adi break the hug and gave her an angry look

Prem: Khabardaar Geet agar kuch bhi anap shanap baate mere saamne kitoh [Dare if u utter any wrong word in front of me]

Adi: Tu jaanti bhi hai hum kitna darr gaye the [Do u even realize what were we going through?]

Geet opened her mouth to give an answer but before she could speak anything Adi continued

Adi: Waise tu yun bina bataye kaha chali gayi thi? [By the way where did u go without informing us?]

Prem: Wo important nahi hai Adi ye zyada important hai k Geet ko itni der kyun lagi kahi wo presswalo ne Geet ko pareshan toh nahi kiyana agar aisa hai toh main abhi unhe sabak seekhatha hoon [That's not as important as this question Adi what took Geet so long? Was it because the media people tried to trouble her I swear if this is the reason then I am not going to leave that stupid media I will teach them a proper lesson]

Adi: Geet tu hume ek phone nahi kar sakthi thi hum kya tere liye itne paraye ho gaye hai jo tu hume apni musibat ka hissa nahi banana chahti [ Geet u should have given us a call atleast are we strangers for u that u can't make us a part of ur problems?]

Geet: Wo [Actually..]

Prem: Waise Madam ye tumhare phone ko kya ho gaya hai? Kabse call kar rahe hai par koi jawab hi nahi hum dono kitna darr gaye the [By the way Madam what's wrong with your mobile we r trying to contact u from such a long time but there is no response do u realize we were so scared?]

Adi: Sirf darr nahi gaye the humari toh saasein rukh gayi thi mera matlab hai' [Scared no this will be a wrong word infact we felt as if someone snatched our breaths away I mean']

Prem: Iska matlab hai hum toh maut k kadaar pe khade the [He means we were literally in the verge of death]

Prem and Adi went on and on without stopping

Geet was simply standing there and was listening to their talks silently

After few minutes she started smiling and this was enough to bring back Prem and Adi to their main question

Adi and Prem: Geet tum humare sawalo ka jawab kyun nahi de rahi tum thik toh hona? [Geet why aren't u answering our questions u r alright na?]

Both of them once again started approaching her and before they could once again protect her in their caring embrace Geet shouted

Geet: Statue

Both of them stopped

Geet: Kya keh rahe the aap dono k main jawab kyun nahi de rahi; are main jawab tab dungina jab aap dono apne train ki rafter ko kum karenge kabse dekh rahi hoon bolthe hi jaa rahe hai bolthe hi jaa rahe hai [How am I supposed to answer ur questions when both of u r not ready to slow down the pace of ur train? I am observing this from such a long time both of u r going on and on]

Geet: Waise Prem main tumhe batadu k tumhare rehte hue tumhari Geet koi musibat mein phas hi nahi sakthi jaante ho kyun? [By the way Prem let me tell u one thing as long as u r there with ur Geet no one can harm me do u know the reason why?]

Geet goes and stands besides him and placed a kiss on his cheek

Geet: kyunki tum iss duniya k sabse ache dost ho aur usse bhi ache insaan ho. Thanks for being such a great friend Prem [The reason is simple u r the best friend that anyone can have in this world and more importantly u r a great humanbeing Thanks for being such a great friend Prem]

She goes to Adi and kissed him on his cheek

Geet: Agar har ladki k paas aap jaisa bhai ho toh uske daaman mein toh bus khushiyaan hi hongi gum ka saaya uske aas paas bhi kabhi mandara nahi sakega [If every girl has a brother like u then her folds will be also full of happiness there won't be any place for sorrows in her life]

She took Adi and Prem's hand in her hand

Geet: Aap dono hi toh mere apne ho aapke alawa mera iss duniya mein koi nahi hai aap dono ka Geet k gumo par hi nahi Geet ki puri zindagi par banta hai toh aap dono ne aisa soch bhi kaise liya k aapki Geet aap dono ki izazat k bagair kahi chali jaayegi [Both of u r my only family; in this whole world u r the only one who I can claim to me mine; both of u have full authority on Geet's life how could you'll think that I would walk away from ur life without taking your permission]

Geet kissed their hand individually

Geet: Ab aapki Geet aapse vaada karti hai k wo humesha muskurathi hui aapko nazar aayegi ab se humari zindagi mein sirf khushiyaan hongi kyunki gamo k baadal ko mein suraj ki roshni se bheker kar aa gayi hoon [I promise from today onwards ur Geet will only smile as I have destroyed the dark traumatic clouds with the bright light of the sun]

Geet: So aaj se humari zindagi mein bus khushiyaan hi hongi [So from today onwards our life will be full of happiness]

Geet: Hmm' End

Adi and Prem gave a satisfactory smile to Geet

Geet: Are abhi kya sirf smile se kaam chayenge mujhe ek jadu ki jhappi nahi denge? [Hmm' It seems both of u r going to gift me only a smile won't u give me a hug?]

She opened her arms and made a cute baby face

Prem and Adi get a new life with her childish antics they immediately take her in their protective and love filled folds

Geet: Ab humari family humesha happy rahegi [Now our family will live happily forever]

They break the hug

Adi: Waise Geet tere mobile ko kya hua hai? [By the way Geet what's wrong with your mobile?]

Geet: Kuch nahi maine simcard badal diya kyunki main apni nayi zindagi ki shuruwat naye cheezo se karna chahti thi [Nothing I got a new simcard as I wanted some to start my new life with new things]

Prem: Ye sahi kaha tumne toh chalo issi nayi shuruwat k liye jaldi se apna saaman pack karo kyunki 2 din baad hum iss desh se bahar jaa rahe hai tumhare liye ek special surprise hai [U r right Geet common now start packing your stuff as after 2 days we r going to go abroad to take the new step towards your new life I have a very special surprise for u]

Geet: Surprise kaisa surprise? [What Surprise?]

Adi: Wo toh tumhe 2 din baad hi pata chalega [U will get to know about it within 2 days]

Geet: Bataiyena pls [Pls tell me]

Prem: Nahi Geet iske alawa kuch hukum hai toh farmaiye [No Geet if u have any other requirements then order us but we r not going to tell u about the surprise now]

Geet: Thik hai mat bataiye waise haan aap dono k liye mere paas ek kaam hai mujhe ek personal secretory ki zarurat hai kyunki Renu apne gaon chali gayi hai humesha k liye aur ab ye aap dono ki zimedari hogi mere liye ek nayi secretary dhundne ki [Okay don't tell, by the way I do have some work for u guys my old secretary Renu has left the job and has gone to her village permanently so now I would be requiring a new secretary so it would be your duty to find a good secretary for me]

Prem andAdi: Par ye humara kaam thodina hai [But this is not our job]

Geet: Surprise nahi bata rahe thena ussi ki saza hai ab 2 din k andar dhundiye mere liye ek nayi secretary tab tak main apna saaman pack kar lethi hoon. Good luck guys [U were hiding the surprise from me na this is your punishment for it now find a secretary for me within 2 days till then I will do my packing. Good luck guys]

Prem and Adi: Ab kya kare? [Now what should we do?]

Meanwhile,

Maan: Kal ka din Naintara ko zarur yaad hoga aakhir hum dono k liye itna special jo hai ye din [I am sure Naintara must be remembering the significance of this date as tomorrow is such an important day for both of us]

Maan: Ek kaam karta hoon Naintara ko phone karta hoon [Let me talk to her on the phone]

He dials her number

Naintara: Hello Maan

Maan: hello Tara kya kar rahi ho? [Hello Tara what r u doing?]

Naintara: Kal ki party k final arrangements kar rahe hai [Just completing the last moment arrangements of tomorrow's party]

Maan: Tumhe kal ka din yaad hai? [U remember the importance of tomorrow?]

Naintara: Offcourse Maan kal ka din hum kaise bhool sakthe hai kitna important hai ye humare liye [Offcourse Maan how can I forget this date it is so special for me]

Maan: Sahi kaha tumne achha kaho tumhe kya gift chahiye? [U r right so tell me what gift do u want?]

Naintara: Aapko jo pasand ho wo aap le aaiye waise Maan ab hum phone rakhte hai hum nahi chahte k kal k party mein koi kami ho [Whatever u want to gift its okay with me; Maan I will talk to u later as I want the party to be perfect]

Maan: Okay Tara. Love u

Naintara: Love u too

The call ends

Maan: Tum kitna pyar karti ho mujhse Tara tumhe ye baat yaad thi k kal hi k din maine tumhe propose kiya tha aur ussi ki khushi manane k liye tum party de rahi ho main bhi tumhe ek badiyaan sa taufa dunga humare iss special day par [U love me so much Tara u still remember that I had proposed u on this date and u r giving a party to celebrate this occasion; I will make sure to make our special day extraspecial by gifting u a memorable gift]

PRECAP 1: Maan: Tumne iss wajah se yeh party rakhi thi? [U had arranged this party for this reason?] (Piya is laughing at Maan's condition😆 😆😆)

PRECAP 2: New entry

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LOVE-Piya


Part 30: Page 42

Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome Update ...Loved the Geet-Prem-Adi Bonding Muaahhh , Maan deserve what he gets in precap even more than that ..Okkay new entry ..Prem babu ki love story bhi start ho jayegi finallly I guess...I loved Prem see first time in Maaneet FF i loved some one else than Maan ...Aww kya hoga mera Waiting for next update
Edited by --Fairy-- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow piya..simply amazing..
loved the scene between geet prem n adi...bless them both, they care sooo much for her...they dint even let her speak 😆

n she gave kisses 2 both...hw sweet 😊

maan ur dream will shatter..ur heart will break.. u will be left alone 🥺 n we all will b laughing at ur state 😉

awesome update..love geet prem n adi n cant wait 4 new entry 😃

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