A Series of Most Fortunate EventsPt11 p115,Note121

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-asya-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#141

oooh. that was a beautiful ss!! I never write anything here, just read, but you made me write today!!

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deepterence

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Posted: 13 years ago

#142

😊its really fantabulous...u captured their emotions...very beautifully..nd whn i read...ur updates..i really wish..kash aisa hota hota to kya hota...ur writings..has the magic..which we hav lost now a days...continue..pls...gd luck...

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mrin0709

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Posted: 13 years ago

#143

wonderful update

thanks for the PM

i hope Arnav tells her soon...

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neverbefore

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Posted: 13 years ago

#144

That was an exquisite chapter. I felt like I was living through the whole scene with them...it was so vivid, atmospheric and just plan wow!

Loved it.

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Exprimere

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Posted: 13 years ago

#145

WOW!!! I don't know why you are even asking for comments! It is BRILLIANT and you know it!

But that would be my only comment if you don't update soon. So (please, please, please I beg of you), update sooon!

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indy12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#146

I am loving that arnav is cpnfronting her!!

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Maddy1270

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Posted: 13 years ago

#147

thank you for the pm... best wishes for the remainder of your exams

a truly amazing piece of writing... loved the ever-supportive nk, and thank god for a payal with a backbone [that she seems to have misplaced in the show!]

wow, the images used in the descriptions are beyond words, they are that vivid: All she did know was that something deep within her heart, concealed beneath the layers and layers of weathered steel she had salvaged for her defence, was clamouring loud and high, shouting out jumbled possibilities, painting pictures of dreams she had only glimpsed once, before the canvass had caught fire and crumbled to ash before her eyes. She did not have the courage to watch those pretty colours, the vibrant, sparkling colours that existed in her fantasies, darken into sombre grey and black once more.

arnav's vulnerability and realisation of how much he had hurt khushi, and even himself, on Diwali night was very nicely brought out! they seem to be building a better understanding, which will come in handy when the shyam truth will be revealed... hopefully only shyam will suffer, and to some extent anjali, but no one else... won't be able to cope with any more MUs!

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purplepixie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#148

i so really wish the cvs had gotten to this before that stupid leech destroyed everything!!!!

Its awesum!!!😊 thnx for the pm...

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fffan123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#149

The part is Fabulous!!!!!!

Glad for the tentative friendship between NK and Payal. I hope the snake's truth is exposed very soon.

All the best for your exams 😊