A Series of Most Fortunate EventsPt11 p115,Note121

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ashred12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#131

wow..arhi scene left me breatheless !!

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bmtdluver

@bmtdluver

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Posted: 13 years ago

#132

Good luck with your exams! Lucky...i have 8 left! Thanks for taking out the time to write an update. It was amazing. You capture khushi's and arnav's feelings perfectly. If only this could have actually happened...

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devsum

@devsum

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Posted: 13 years ago

#133

so arnav realises how he hurt Khushi last time he came near her?. Thanks for the PM.

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Varsha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#134

Whheee! :D I practically squealed when I saw that you'd updated! :D 4 more to go!! Good luck my dear! :) Am sure you will do well! :) Super excited for the FF update! :D

Ooo.. Loved how NK managed to allay Payal's fears for the time being. WOnder how they will bring it out to the family! :) Garima's fears too nicely portrayed. And Nani able to soothen her, knowing what exactly is gnawing away at her heart. Loved the jibe at Delhi traffic! :P

Khushi.. You poor poor darling. If I were in your position I would have spontaneously combusted under the "laad governor's" gaze. Kudos for being able to hold your own and at least get out words that make sense. ;) Her fear of getting her heart broken once again and to take in the meaning behind the words he was uttering was beautifully portrayed.

The shift in the atmosphere was palpable the way you wrote it Nafisa. Mischief giving way for a grave seriousness reflecting how much the man has changed.

Arnav *sigh* He makes me fall in love with him each and every time! And the bangles! Wow!

I'm craving for more!!! :(

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anyabell

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Posted: 13 years ago

#135

oh that was beaauutiful. You have a way with words, darling!! LOVELY.

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Shruti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#136

I would always be grateful to Rae for making a post
Thank you FF writers
Otherwise I would really have missed all ur lovely work dear
I first read ur work mohabbat door jaane na de
And now this
And I will just say u r a fabulous writer and it always leave me in awe after reading ur work
But this update left my mouth hanging open
I so loved arhi over here the emotions feelings and the way they spoke reminded me all the times we had in show before Shyam fiasco
Just love ur work
Thanxx so much for PM

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iamtopper

@iamtopper

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Posted: 13 years ago

#137

superb luved it... hope so there is no misunderstanding betwn the 2 in this ss... plz cont...

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Kalyaani B Rao

@Kalyaani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#138

Payal is such a strong character in this story and am really leaning towards liking her now. She is so caught in the mess that SMJ wants to create in her little sister's life, she wants to save her at any cost, even her marriage can be stopped for the second time and she would not care. She is not being selfless she wants to do the correct thing, kudos to you Payal. One can always think was NK's reasoning correct, should they wait or not in disclosing SMJ's deceit in front of the family, this too time will tell.

Arnav and Khushi, get on with it guys, why do you have to send us poor souls into frenzy by your silliness. Let's get a checklist going now:

They like each other – check

They want each other – check

They are scared to take this forward – check

They are not sure what to do next – check

Now what?? Help needed and fast

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maazia

@maazia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#139

You truly are an amazing writer!!!! You've portrayed every emotion so beautifully. Can't wait to see what happens next. The panditji stuck in traffic...will the wedding go on????

And best of luck for your exams...

Thanks for the PM

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varshapan

@varshapan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#140

sigh... deep sigh!

these events are so very fortunate i must say...

payal and nk make an unlikely but great confidantes. nk's character has finally been given some depth - one which he has the potential for but never takes off in the show. as with payal.

and arnav, oh, isn't he wonderfully emotionally retarded... no offence but he somehow never grew from the time he lost his family...

lovely update.

all the best for your exams and hoping you get through them breezily... and then to pick up on your classic FF - mohabbat... :)