A Series of Most Fortunate EventsPt11 p115,Note121

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anumol

@sweetanu2314

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Posted: 13 years ago

#161

aww...poor khushi cant take arnav's torture anymore yaar...say it man...nice update dear...

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Sona

@sparikh

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#162

awww...this is fantastic! Loved A/K convo...K doesn't know how to react...LOL

New friendship of some sort...Devar/Bhabhi (NK/Payal)...

-Sona

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Swati Hansraj

@swati-89

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#163

Read the third update now...the way u have written u have brought back the intensity, the heartbeats erratically jumping in anticipation, the locked breaths that i had when i used to see Arnav and Khushi chemistry up on the screen. A series of most fortunate incidents indeed. The Cvs should take a page out of ur story for future reference for scenes as u have depicted here.

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angellovergirl

@angellovergirl

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#164

this was really good!

I loved the way you described arnav and khushi's feelings

cant wait for the next update :)

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amv63

@amv63

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#165

Very very nice.

I totally empathize with Payal. She is in a major quandary having hidden something so important from Akash. Hope NK is able to help her and Khushi.

And of course Khushi Arnav are moving in exactly the right direction. I'm glad he realizes that what he did on Diwali affected her deeply and now she finds it difficult to believe in his changed attitude towards her, to trust his feelings for her.

But he's noticed she's wearing the bangles he got her...that always brings a smile to his face.

Good luck with the exams.

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#166

wow this is getting interesting
payal worried about shyam
khushi worried about arnav's behaviour and if he will break her heart or not while arnav just wants to tell khushi whats in his heart
this is getting better by each update please do continue soon
looking forward to what happens next

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medha

@medha16

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#167

very beautiful!
loved arhi interaction,ur words r simply magical!

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NaLeyton23

@NaLeyton23

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Posted: 13 years ago

#168

How do you write so bloody well??

that was amazing!

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smileyhug7679

@smileyhug7679

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#169

Oh I am so loving this honey coated Arnav g who wants to make it thru to Kushi and tell her wat he feels..

Oh good ness I am so hglad Payal is mature in this she is taking up things in her own hand

Loved it ...

Loving nk yipeee u go dude

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Simran

@dmg123

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#170

This was Brilliant!!!...

I am very glad that NK is taking the responsibility upon himself to help Payal...it is a nice, different side of NK that we have not yet seen.

I also like how Payal's character has been shaped up.

Khushi and Arnav...they are so sweet...and the way you portray them...I am speechless. Whenever you write about Khushi looking into Arnavs's eyes, it feels like we are actually there...your writing is that descriptive!

I really like the end...he gave her bangles!!...

Do continue this as well as your FF!!

Good luck with your exams.