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pranita1202

@pranita1202

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

superb👏

it gave me to goosebumps

his condition made me 😭

so princess was just pretending to b mean

or she actually chose duties over him as she herself is unknown her feelings 4 him

i pick the d second option

guessing it will be a love , hate, revenge kind of story

may b he cum back as rich n to avenge 4 his sufffering

but he will have feelings 4 her n the love may rekindle admist the revenge session

eager 2 read😊

Edited by pranita1202 - 13 years ago

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geetap

@geetap

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

wat a sad part...😭very emotional too, plz continue soon, thanks for pm

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Nandini

@Nandini25

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

interesting start

m eager 2 know who is who

I hope the princess is not Mugs as he seems to be so cruel

update soon

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Shreya

@sparksfly

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

RTMC ff !!! yay !!

very intrstng n diffrnt story !!

im very curious 2 noe more...do write more !!!

ur choice of words is excellent !!!

one culd sense d pain ...n feel it 2...

apt title !!!! Rashu is gr8 wid titles !!

do connue soon...

thnx 4 d pM...

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Radhika Sharma

@ridzzi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

pihu first of all sry for being so late and short comment...

ok your prolouge is very interesting...

waiting to see what is actually b/w them...and their life took turn...

continue soon...

luv u...😊

Edited by ridzzi - 13 years ago

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proteeti

@sambhavami

Stunner

+ 11

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Love It To The Core !!

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piuli

@prahelika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: rashi.rose
Oo My God its shocking yaar:O Sad and INTERESTING:-) thanks 4 pm dear:-) cont...

glad u liked it😊...thanks dear...

will cont. soon...

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piuli

@prahelika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: samu_khamkar
I liked it but i m confused

thanx for pm

thanks dear...😊

the prologue is taken from the middle of the story...and if it sounds likable yet confusing then i guess i'v done my job well😉...

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piuli

@prahelika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan
very very interesting start
waiting for more

thank u dear😃...will update soon...

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piuli

@prahelika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo
o ma god.
lovly prolugue

just so sooperboo

welll the gal to loves him or not, is she mc???
coz, their were no feelings frm her side, as the prince had,

prince is really disheartened...
i feel.
he is shattered damn badly, but may nt d gal...

prince actually dosent belong to royal, he ws sold...dats sad..

bt dat doesn't mean he is nt a prince, .

lovely stry
deing to see n read, wat they will do wid him...