FF:SUPERNATURAL-Chapter 12(Updated on Page 41)

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DhwaniKS

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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

I reAlly liked it.. Hav not been a supernatural fan...bt I love ARNAV and khushi too much...

Do pm me d next time u update...

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barunxoxo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

Awesome update!! :D i have a hunch that Lavanya's going to die which will lead Arnav to hunting again with Sam and Dean!! is it true? :P
And i guess Khushi's already a hunter and ArHi might meet in an encounter or something of that sort😉
well,anyways lovely update. i love you for merging my two fav shows into one😃

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Manahil192

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Posted: 13 years ago

#83

Well Cuttoo You Finally Updated :D As Soon As I CAME From The Sucky Exam Your Update Was The Driving Force In Cheering My Mood :) KKG WITH A BANG ! Thats More Like It ;) Cant Wait Update Soon :>

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INGCIV

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Posted: 13 years ago

#84

I LOVED YOUR FF AND PLEASE WRITE A LONG UPDATE .

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jenshad

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Posted: 13 years ago

#85

NOOO, Arnav & Lavanya Together :| AWWW, Khushi Left 😳

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Silvy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#86

Awsome. But Hate Khushi's Parents. Glad She Left Them.

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smashitup

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Posted: 13 years ago

#87

⭐️ loving the mixture of the two backgrounds x

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smashitup

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Posted: 13 years ago

#88

😲 oh she left home !Good narrative so far ...

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Tayyaba Akhtar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#89

OMG u just combined my two fav shows!!!! love it , keep it up and plz pm me when u update!!!!

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Batool Imran

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Posted: 13 years ago

#90

Hey,

First thing first, I cannot thank you enough for dedicating this chapter to me.🤗 My mood had been preety pulled off due to well a not-so-goo report card of mine, yet reading this chapter, definetly helped me chuck out a lot of bitter memories from my mind, for example not attending the prize distribution ceremony for the first time ever in my life time.😭 What I pity more is more that just some 2-3 marks can be so life changing, danmed!😭

Oh, erm sorry, I get carried away sometimes, really sorry., Coming to talking about the chapter, can I request something to you? Please? Could you just erm right a bit of longer chapters, please?😳 Actually, I am addicting to reading long stuff, and not merrily small installments, sorry if I am asking much, but erm I had to tell you that anyway.😳

The chapter itself, considering its only the third one, was very well written. Everything from the grammer to the construction of lines was very well scripted.👏 Besides, it being an intoductory chapter, and we not even knowing all the charcetrs to length as yet, I am super glad that it turned out to be so good.😳 You know what, just a piece of advice, if you can manage to put up great things in these 4-5 beggining chapters, and build up strong foundations, your story si going to be a hit!👍🏼

Speaking about the characters now, yeah this was definetly a ArHilicious update.😉 Now ArHi in different background is still ArHi after all na?😉 La, poor thing, I am now almost definetly sure that thie yellow beady eyed demon, is for sure returning back, and like Dean-Sam-Arnav's mom she too is going to be burned alive.😳 You know what, Arnav-La conversation though typically a bit eastern, I could refer to it from the first epi of Season 1, where Jess and Sam are in a bar, and she is like 'What will you do without me?', and then a kiss. They seem to be sharing the same kind of comfortable cosy relationship like La and Arnav, and it ended bad, really preety bad.😳 Even the Dean-Lisa, thing I just saw in yesterdays epi (Season 6, Epi 20) did not work out, so I am doubtful f this one is ever going to last.😳 A womens sixth sense, is usually correct, so well La, erm you are in for trouble, that being my best guess.😳

And Khushi, not our typical KKG, or is she? Did not appear to be anyone, she doesnt seem to be the ardent sacrficing kind.😉 And I am glad for once, if she isnt, time for a change!😃

Thankyou for The Pm.

Keep up with the good work.👏

Love,

Batool😳

Edited by nav_bat - 13 years ago