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Posted: 13 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: nazibah

You have done the one thing I have been hoping for you combined my two favourite shows together!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love Sam and Dean and add Arnav to the mix and it's my dream come true!!!!!!!!!!
CRAP!!!!!! Arnav is going to marry La!!!!!!!!!!!
I wonder what Khushi's role will be!!!!!!!!!!!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE add me to your PM list!!!!!! I will be over the moon if I got to read more!!!!!😃
are those enough smiley faces for you to add me?😃



Thanks so much for the comment ! I will definitely add you to my PM list. I would love you to read more! Please please Like and Comment. Thanks again!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: seriallover17



Thanks so much for the comment ! I will definitely add you to my PM list. I would love you to read more! Please please Like and Comment. Thanks again!


No problem I can't wait to read more of this!!!!😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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First of all yay! Supernatural crossover!!

I would suggest making Chapter one your prologue or adding more to the original prologue it doesn't do your story justice. I skipped over the story when you first posted😳 it and didn't give much though to it but I'm REALLY glad i decided to come back for a second look.

Can Arnav speak hindi so his brothers don't understand him to annoy them 😆😃

What season have you basing this on? After reading chapter 2 I'm guessing season 1 but I'm not 100% sure.

Why do the Winchesters need Arnav? (To find john'?) they seem to be handling the hunts pretty well on their own.

Can u please not kill La? Maybe she's a demon that's trying to get info on the Winchesters (kinda like ruby!) perhaps the actual La never meet Arnav while she wasn't possessed-idk I just don't want her to die😭😭😭thats enough to get him back into hunting.

Did Sam leave for Stanford in this series? How old are the brothers?( I get the feeling like Arnav may be the oldest)

Is it weird that I still want Khushi to be her clumsy,crazy,chamkili and bubble self.(that's what Arnav loves about her!) ⭐️

I read nav_bat's comment about Khushi and Dean having compatible personalities but for some reason I can't see it. I can't even image them in the same room together 😕 and I'm usually really good with crossovers characters too.

😲 *gasp* omg I can totally see Sam and Payal having the hots for each other!😉(although Payal might just end up dieing since all the girls Sams been with end up dead!)

Heheh as u can tell I'm a diehard supernatural fan😆, have u caught up to season 7 yet??? Loved the finaly! I've had a supernatural inspired OS running around in my head for ages I just haven't gotten around to writing*sign* Sorry if I'm asking so many questions.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: mz.brar

First of all yay! Supernatural crossover!!

I would suggest making Chapter one your prologue or adding more to the original prologue it doesn't do your story justice. I skipped over the story when you first posted😳 it and didn't give much though to it but I'm REALLY glad i decided to come back for a second look.

Can Arnav speak hindi so his brothers don't understand him to annoy them 😆😃

What season have you basing this on? After reading chapter 2 I'm guessing season 1 but I'm not 100% sure.

Why do the Winchesters need Arnav? (To find john'?) they seem to be handling the hunts pretty well on their own.

Can u please not kill La? Maybe she's a demon that's trying to get info on the Winchesters (kinda like ruby!) perhaps the actual La never meet Arnav while she wasn't possessed-idk I just don't want her to die😭😭😭thats enough to get him back into hunting.

Did Sam leave for Stanford in this series? How old are the brothers?( I get the feeling like Arnav may be the oldest)

Is it weird that I still want Khushi to be her clumsy,crazy,chamkili and bubble self.(that's what Arnav loves about her!) ⭐️

I read nav_bat's comment about Khushi and Dean having compatible personalities but for some reason I can't see it. I can't even image them in the same room together 😕 and I'm usually really good with crossovers characters too.

😲 *gasp* omg I can totally see Sam and Payal having the hots for each other!😉(although Payal might just end up dieing since all the girls Sams been with end up dead!)

Heheh as u can tell I'm a diehard supernatural fan😆, have u caught up to season 7 yet??? Loved the finaly! I've had a supernatural inspired OS running around in my head for ages I just haven't gotten around to writing*sign* Sorry if I'm asking so many questions.



Hey! Thanks a lot for the lovely long comment!
I am actually not basing the FF in accordance to any season. I simply pen down the idea that forms in my mind. I have just finished 5 seasons. A really good friend of mine introduced me to the show and I have been loving it since then! I am currently watching the 6th season. Stay tuned for more updates!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65

Hey everyone! So I am back with another chapter! I dedicate this chapter to ss374 and nav_bat for leaving such wonderful and motivating comments right from the beginning! Hope you enjoy!

Chapter 3- Hitting the road

"How many times do I have to say I don't want to marry?", she bellowed at the shell shocked couple in front of her.

"And how many times do I have to remind you to keep your tone down when talking to us, Khushi Kumari Gupta?", Shashi Gupta asked his daughter with eyes as cold as the waters of the majestic Atlantic ocean. She quickly lowered her eyes.

"I am sorry for misbehaving. But you know what I want to do. And if I can't have that, I rather not do anything else in my life, leave alone marriage."

Before Shashi could say anything further, Garima cut in, "I told you Shashi! This girl is useless! I had warned you before bringing this orphan into our house! She will defame us in the society if she continues to keep up with this attitude!"

"Society? Amma? For Devi Maiyya's sake! Which century are you living in? We are not in India Amma. We have been staying abroad for so many years now. People here have an open mind!", Khushi tried justifying herself.

"That is not the way to talk to your mother Khushi.", Shashi said.

"When has she ever treated me like a daughter Babuji? All she has ever been doing is ordering me around. She wanted us to move abroad, we did. She asked me to go to University, I did. She asked me to do anything and I did it willingly in hope that she will finally accept me. And all I ever asked in return was love. Love that every daughter deserves from her mother. I never received an ounce of appreciation from her after all I did. Why? Just because I am not her real daughter? And now she expects me to marry, sit at home and sacrifice what I have been living to do. If I don't deserve her affection then she doesn't have a right over me either!" Khushi could feel tears encrust her big hazel eyes.

"Khushi. I am doing this keeping in mind your future. Do you really want to embrace the bitter truth that snatched your parents away from you? Do you really want to face the ugly truth that took away your childhood. It is my job to protect you and I will do anything to fulfill the promises that I made to your father. Don't forget….he was my best friend."

Beautiful memories of her father pricked her heart. She quietly got off the table and dragged her feet to the kitchen to do what gave her solace.

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"Arnav! How does this look? Oh wait! Maybe this one looks better?"

"What the? Lavanya…can't you see I am working? I have a very important meeting in a few hours and here I am. Here is the ASR helping his girlfriend pick out an outfit for….."

"Our wedding.", Lavanya completed the sentence. "What could possibly be more important than our wedding? There is so much to do and here you are. Here is the great ASR typing away to glory on his laptop when he is getting married in what…like 2 months?!" Lavanya pouted.

Arnav smirked, shaking his head thinking how he had gotten so lucky to have this beautiful woman in his life. He wrapped his arms around her petite figure and said, "I am sorry baby. But work is important too. I can't ignore it. Besides the wedding is two months away. We still have a lot of time in hand."

"Time will pass and we won't even realize. I want to cherish these moments and capture them in my heart forever. Who knows what destiny has in mind for us. Anything could happen during these two months….I could…."

"La…please. You know I hate it when you talk like this. I will never let you go. Keep that in mind. I have seen and felt countless losses in my life and I have nothing left but you. So don't ever…don't ever say that again." His voice was laced with pain and his vision grew blurry as tears threatened to flow down his chocolate brown eyes.

Lavanya cupped his face with her small hand. "I am sorry Arnav. I didn't mean to hurt you. But I have this fear…somewhere deep inside like something bad is bound to happen."

"Don't worry. I am there by your side. Always. We promised….remember?"

Lavanya smiled, her eyes glinting with hope. She rested her head on his shoulder as warmth and assurance enclosed her frightened heart.

"Now let's select your outfit, shall we?"

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The smell of piping hot jalabies wafted through the Gupta house. Khushi tried to get herself to think on her next move to convince her parents to let her do what she wanted to do. Nothing that she had tried had worked till date. She let out a sigh as she professionally moved her hand over the pan forming perfect shapes and the other hand holding a half eaten jalabie. She stared at the heap of delicacy that she had just made. Her mind was as tangled as the swirling paths of the jalabies. And suddenly an idea flashed through her mind.

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She stacked a handful of jalabies in a box and put it in the bag she just finished packing. She placed the heavy bag over her delicate shoulders and tip toed to her parents' room. Her face turned pale as she looked at the sleeping form of her father, worry lines evident on his forehead. She felt guilt make an agonizing path through her veins. She was the cause of his problems. Maybe leaving was the least she could do for her father. She touched his feet taking his blessings and left a note under the light of his bedside lamp.

"I am sorry Babuji, but this is what's best for everyone." She threw her bag in the car and with one swift motion of the key, the engine roared to life indicating the beginning of something new, something exciting. With her mind finally made up, Khushi Kumari Gupta hit the road.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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A NOTE

Hey everyone! Firstly, I want to thank everyone who has commented on my FF. Your feedback, whether positive or negative, means a lot to me.
Don't be hesitant to criticize. For me, criticism is a synonym of motivation. When someone criticizes me, there is a fraction of a few seconds when I feel offended like anybody else would. But then those comments encourage me to be a better person or in this case, a better writer. I have always loved reading and writing but never put it in such action. It's my first time. Some of my chapters might be disappointing or not up to the mark. I apologize for those in advance. But I am trying really hard to live up to your expectations. Therefore, please co-operate with me.
About the story, I have not based my FF in accordance to any particular season of the show. I pen down what comes to my mind. The story develops while I write. The characters and their personalities are pretty much the same. There might be many similarities and differences in the storyline or plot. I haven't planned the entire FF. I don't even know how long will I be carrying the FF. It highly depends on your response. Some dialogues might be the same from the show. (After all, Dean has some of the most
unique dialogues!!!)
Lastly, if you read my work, PLEASE LIKE & COMMENT!

Love you all!
Manal😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
Finally KKG makes an entry! Woot-woot! She's my sweetheart and she's finally arrived and in her style.
I know the Arnav-Lavanya are important but I still don't like them as a couple. Sorry! I think I'm too biased towards KKG-ASR coupling.
Hoping to see Dean and Sammy in next chappie!
I almost forgot,who's the eldest among the these three Winchester brothers?

And this is for you for giving us such a quick update:

Edited by peppygeek - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Totally Amazing!
But when Arnav and Khushi will meet?
Arnav and Lavanya are ok together but they'll never have what Arnav and Khushi do between them.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
So I'm guessing Khushi's parents were hunters and they died well... while hunting?
I'm glad she made and entry!!!!!!!!!! I like this Lavanya so I hope she like doesn't die, but it is your FF!!!
Can't wait to read about when all four of them finally meet that is going to be one hell of a read!!!!!! I have a feeling Dean and Khushi are going to be close which then means the green eyed monstor in Arnav will come out?
I'm jumping to conclusions!!!!! anyway LOVED the update!!! Can't wait to read more!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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great update..lekin short hain...

its thrilling n exciting..

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