FF: Cul-de-sac Ch 7 -Pg.49 28/06

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neverbefore

@neverbefore

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Brilliant! So much happening and it flowed so beautifully. Loved the last paragraph.

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Zania

@zaniax

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Beautiful os and lovely ending😊

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fire.vs.ice

@fire.vs.ice

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Loved it absolutely loved it!!!!!! U have exams too? Me too...y does the show give amazing twists when v r supposed to study rite??

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Gunjan Mukherjee

@gunjanmkj

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

My goodness! Dat was one hell of an os! So much of drama n action! U achieved in one single os wat evn a ff cnt achieve..seriously,brilliant! Loved it!

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Krani

@Krani

Dazzler

+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Except he never got to verbalise that story, on account of the fact that no sooner had he neared them, no sooner had he spoken, a square, granite-hard fist had rammed straight into his face. He only remembered a couple of stars bursting in front of his eyes before dropping unconscious.

THAT was the icing on top!

Amazing OS! Really!! Absolutely filled with goodness of drama, dhak dhak, revelations, hurt, anger...EVERYTHING!

And I LOVED that Shyam got what was coming.

This should have happened in the show. Dammit CVs! You should be reading our FF's to come up with ideas, rather than putting mindless comedy filled with Bubbly and Swami. Although, glad that IPKKND is finally moving in the right direction again :D

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321abc

@321abc

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Awesome OS, I really liked how you described everything

Thanks for the pm

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boisecrazy

@boisecrazy

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

I do not know if and when the CVs are going to clear ARHI mis-understanding, but you made me happy today. Loved to read your OS. Please continue...

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randomiesta

@randomiesta

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Weak?? are you kidding?? that was awesome!! it was really well written...I'm so glad shyam was pushed into the pots...Him getting punched was the icing on the cake...glad arnav finally found out the truth...I think I've told you this before but you really have a flair for describing feelings and emotions...btw I hope u finish your exams soon cause I really miss Mohabbat door jaane na de...All the best...dont forget your FF once you finish the exams though 😛 and thanks for the PM :)