FF: Cul-de-sac Ch 7 -Pg.49 28/06 - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG! I'm right now at the Airport lounge waiting for my connecting flight :P But I just had to read this and after reading nothing could stop me from commenting! This was awesome. My work is cowering under the awesomeness of yours! *sigh* If only Arnav had found out like this. If only Khushi had been persuaded to committing suicide because of this and not because of the stupid reason given on the show. The dream was gripping. I was once again reminded of you dark corridor and Door indicating light :) Just that this time it was Arnav! :) His panic, his worry everything so beautifully portrayed. Shyam deserves more than just a few flower pots but I'm glad Arnav punched him. I'm cackling at the thought of tweety birds flying around Shyamu's head now! Khushi was great! This is how she should react man! Raise a helluva lot of noise whenever the creep comes close! And it all culminates in the terrace again! I wish you could write more too! :) I miss reading ur FF! :( Good luck with your exams! :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
oh, this is but awesome!!

dhinka chika dhinka chika... shyam seeing stars! oh it was worth everything.. so much breathing space for the frustrated soul :D

you made me sooo happy

thanks for the pm... and i hope you are also in a better mood now that your difficult papers are also over.. well, have a selfish motive here - mohabbat door jaane na de update :P


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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
Continue With Second Part Please 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
this is awesome. loved how u described Arnav's feelings in the beginning and a delightful ending. all the best with ur exams
Edited by Arshi_Ever - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow dear...missing your updates very much...loved this as well...it was awsuuum oh man my heart stopped for a moment when khushi thought of embracing death...wow it was awsuuum n thnx 4da pm dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
nice os...


all d best 4 ur exams...


thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
wonderful os...pls do continue this if u do get the time...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
hi dear
omg that was amazing
loved it
full on action n the end was awesome...the way u desrcibed shyam.🤣🤣
take care hun
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
lovely os! wish something like this would have happend in the original track! would love shyam getting hit by kushi and arnav😡
great writing style! 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wonderful update.I'm glad Arnav saved Khushi.

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