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chetna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

plz pm me
wenevr u update

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Tanishtha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

nyc... kriyaansh ki horror love story...

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

interesting concept... do continue it...

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tina tartari

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

awesome

plx continue n add me 2 ur pm list

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Shweta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

hey...an amzing concept...i read ur other works and all of yhem were equally entertaining...plz pm me the next tym u update any of ur works...😊

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Blackheart

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Awesome u should continue pms to me whn u send

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payal sood

@love_arsha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

AWSOME CONCEPT...

PLS CONT. ND THANX FOR PM ME...😊

Edited by love_arsha - 13 years ago

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Maneet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Hey guys, here's the first update and i'm telling u guys befroe only its a short one and maybe a little boring so plzz joothas and chaaplas mat marna.

It was the start of the weekend...every one busy in their own worlds some were getting ready for work, some for schools and colg. But in a small house a beautiful girl was sleeping so peacefully in her room, without any tension. But her sleep was broken due to the alarm. She was in no mood to get up but was helpless as she had to go the colg. Finally she woke up with much difficulty with sleep still lingering in her eyes. As soon as she saw the time all her sleep was vanished.
Girl:oh god its 7:30 and i need to reach the colg by 8. Rey will be coming any moment. Chal kriya jaldi tayyar hoja warna late hojaayegi. She immediately rushed into the wash room got ready and came out within 15 mins. She herself was shocked to know that she got ready in 15mins.
Kr(to herself): wow kriya aaj toh tune world record bana diya, tune toh kammal kardiya itni jaldi tayyar ho gayi.
Suddenly she heard the sound of a car's horn blowing. She guessed that it might be rey. She immediately locked her house and went out. As soon as she was going to sit in the car her phone rang. It was her mom.
Kr:hiii mom good morning.
Sm:good morning beta. kaisi ho??
Kr: mai theek hu mom aap kaise ho??
Sm:mai bhi theek hu...toh tumhari packing sab ho gayi
Kr:haan mom sab hogaya hai aur mai rey ke saath colg jaa rahi hu permission lene for a half day leave taaki hum shift kar sake.
Sm: Kriya beta r u sure tum log ussi ghar mai rahoge, tum log koi aur ghar bhi toh dhund sakte ho na woh ghar hi kyu. Beta woh ghar safe nahi hai.
Kr:mom kuch nahi hoga hume every thing will be fine trust me.
Sm:I trust u beta. Acha ab mai rakhti hu tum apna khayal rakhna aur beta ek baar fir sochlo tum dono uss ghar mai rehna hai.
Kr:mom mai aapko kitni baar bata chuki hu hum ussi ghar mai rehenge aur kuch nahi hoga. Ab byee mujhe jaana hai
Sm:bye beta.
Finally she finished her call and sat inside the car.
R:hii
Kr:hii
R:tum aaj bahut beautiful lag rahi ho
Kr:thnxx(blushes a lil')
R:toh hogayi mom se baat
Kr:haan
R:kya keh rahi thi vo
Kr:wohi jo pichle 1 week se kehti hai uss ghar mai kyu shift h rahi ho. Mujhe samajh nhi aa raha sab log uss ghar ke baare mai sunte hi itna kyu dar rahe hai.
R:Pata nahi,
Finally they start for the colg and all through the drive they kept talking to each other. And finally they reach the colg.

Precap: well i haven't thought yet...

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Shweta

@Shweta-kriyansh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

a good start with a nice convo between kria and her mum...wondering whats in the house...suspense kills sometimes...but a nyc update...evn the lil kriyansh in end that u gave us...😊