Kriyansh SS-True Love v/s Evil link to Thread2 pg1 - Page 93

Originally posted by: lovely7010

Hey guys, here's the first update and i'm telling u guys befroe only its a short one and maybe a little boring so plzz joothas and chaaplas mat marna.

It was the start of the weekend...every one busy in their own worlds some were getting ready for work, some for schools and colg. But in a small house a beautiful girl was sleeping so peacefully in her room, without any tension. But her sleep was broken due to the alarm. She was in no mood to get up but was helpless as she had to go the colg. Finally she woke up with much difficulty with sleep still lingering in her eyes. As soon as she saw the time all her sleep was vanished.
Girl:oh god its 7:30 and i need to reach the colg by 8. Rey will be coming any moment. Chal kriya jaldi tayyar hoja warna late hojaayegi. She immediately rushed into the wash room got ready and came out within 15 mins. She herself was shocked to know that she got ready in 15mins.
Kr(to herself): wow kriya aaj toh tune world record bana diya, tune toh kammal kardiya itni jaldi tayyar ho gayi.
Suddenly she heard the sound of a car's horn blowing. She guessed that it might be rey. She immediately locked her house and went out. As soon as she was going to sit in the car her phone rang. It was her mom.
Kr:hiii mom good morning.
Sm:good morning beta. kaisi ho??
Kr: mai theek hu mom aap kaise ho??
Sm:mai bhi theek hu...toh tumhari packing sab ho gayi
Kr:haan mom sab hogaya hai aur mai rey ke saath colg jaa rahi hu permission lene for a half day leave taaki hum shift kar sake.
Sm: Kriya beta r u sure tum log ussi ghar mai rahoge, tum log koi aur ghar bhi toh dhund sakte ho na woh ghar hi kyu. Beta woh ghar safe nahi hai.
Kr:mom kuch nahi hoga hume every thing will be fine trust me.
Sm:I trust u beta. Acha ab mai rakhti hu tum apna khayal rakhna aur beta ek baar fir sochlo tum dono uss ghar mai rehna hai.
Kr:mom mai aapko kitni baar bata chuki hu hum ussi ghar mai rehenge aur kuch nahi hoga. Ab byee mujhe jaana hai
Sm:bye beta.
Finally she finished her call and sat inside the car.
R:hii
Kr:hii
R:tum aaj bahut beautiful lag rahi ho
Kr:thnxx(blushes a lil')
R:toh hogayi mom se baat
Kr:haan
R:kya keh rahi thi vo
Kr:wohi jo pichle 1 week se kehti hai uss ghar mai kyu shift h rahi ho. Mujhe samajh nhi aa raha sab log uss ghar ke baare mai sunte hi itna kyu dar rahe hai.
R:Pata nahi,
Finally they start for the colg and all through the drive they kept talking to each other. And finally they reach the colg.

Precap: well i haven't thought yet...

Originally posted by: lovely7010

Here's the update and its a bada wala update hope u all like it... Do hit the like tab and give me ur reviews.

They entered the colg and the first thing they did was go to principal's office.
Kriyansh:sir may we come in
Princi: yes come in
R:sir humein actually half day leave chahiye thi coz hum aaj shift kar rahe hai
Princi:ok btw kahan shift ho rahe ho tum dono
Kr:sir vo city ke outskirts mai jo bunglow hai vahan par.
Princi's expressions changed to very serious and worried one.
Princi:guys be careful.
They were shocked at this tone of princi.
Kriyansh:ok sir. Kriyansh came out of the cabin.

R:yeh sabko ho kya gaya hai. Why is everyone behaving so weird when we tell them we are going to shift in that house.

Kriya:I dont know rey, anyways lets go to the canteen. They go to the canteen and find the gang already present there.

Kriyansh :hii guys

Gang:hii

Sw:so, all set for shifting

Kr: haan swayam sab kuch set hai

Sh:guys r u sure tum log ussi ghar mai rahoge. I mean hum log koi aur house dhundte hai tum logo ke liye.

R:Sharon hamare paas aur koi option nahi hai, kriya ko apna house aaj hi empty karna hai and mere ghar ki renovation bhi kal se shuru hone wali hai. So itne short span of time mai hume voh ghar hi mila.

Kr:aur tum log itna worried kyu ho. Jisse dekho vo same question puch raha hai. Akhir hai kya uss ghar mai

Ne:people saying ki uss ghar mai koi rehta hai

R:neha kaun rehta hai??

Ne:vo vo vo...(she was a bit scared) babu u saying

Kr:neha kya vo vo laga rakha hai
Vi:guys log kehte hai there's something in that house
Kriyansh:matlab??
Nil:gus matlab ki that house is a haunted one
KR:wat!!!!!!!!!!!!
Si and Ri:humne bhi suna tha ki vo haunted hai
Ne:aaj tak jo bhi vahan gaya hai vo zinda vapis nahi aaya
Vish:ya dude shez rite
Kr: guys aisa kuch nahi hai
R:ya guys darna band karo and plz next time se aisi baaton mai bleive mat karna.
Sw:rey tum log iss baat ko ignore nahi kar sakte
R:swayam tu bhi, tu kabse sprits aur ghosts mai beleive karna shuru kar diya
Sw:rey mai aisi baaton mai beleive nahi karta lekin jo kuch bhi yeh log bol rahe hai vo sach n usse ignore bhi nahi kar sakte.

R:guys mai last time keh raha hu uss ghar mai kuch nhi hai aur iss baat par kriya bhi agree karti hai rite kriya. But there was no response from her. She was lost in her own thoughts. Finally after rey's many attempts she cums back to her senses.
R:kya hua kriya, kya soch rahi ho tum
Kr:kuch nahi

The boys take rey in one side leaving all the girls behind.

Si:yeh boys ko kya hua achanak side par kyu chale gaye

Vish:dont know dude karni hogi inhe kuch baat lets leave them.

Boys

Nil:rey toh kya plan kiya tune

R:plan?? kaunsa plan??

Vi:arrey tu aur kriya ek saath ek hi ghr mai rahoge haina

R:haan

Ni:toh kya ka karne ka socha hai tune...sara time toh tu romance mai hai bita dega

Vi:tum dono seperate rooms mai rahoge ya fir ek room mai..

R:oye chup of course separate rooms mai

Sw:acha!! kya pata tu sirf humare saamne jhoot bol raha ho aur ghar jaake

R:swayam tu bhi

the boys were continuously teasing rey same was with kriya

Girls

Ne:arrey wah kriya u and rey ek saath ek ghar mai aha

Sh:hmmm toh kya karoge tum log...tum aur rey toh 24*7 saath rahoge na

All this while kriya was blushing like hell and rey was admiring her.

Vicky and Nil were waving hands infront of him but no use. He was still staring at her deamingly and in this while kriya turned towards rey and found him staring at her. She blushed even more and looked down.

On seeing this every one started coughing bring back kriyansh not kriyansh actually bring back rey to the present. To avoid any teasing from the gang rey spoke

R:ok guys hume ab chalna chahiye...byee

Ni and Vi: haan ab toh tuje badi jaldi jaane ke liye akhir kriya ke saath jo rehna hai. Chal jaa byee

Gang: bye guyss...have fun and they winked them😉

Kriyansh:byee guys
Sh: and guys take care.
Kriyansh shook their heads n left from there.

Precap: Kriyansh spending time in a beautiful garden.

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Originally posted by: lovely7010

Heya😊 I'm back with an update. I hope this part is a long one and if u still find it short then I'm soo sorry...Enjoy the update:)

Part 4:

While going towards the car kriya feels as if some one was following her. She turns back and see there was no one.
R:kriya kya hua
Kr:rey mujhe laga ki koi hume follow kar raha hai par jab dekha to koi nahi hai
R:this place is really strange. Lets just get out of here fast.
They sit in the car and rey starts driving. Just after 10mins the car suddenly stops and causes a jerk due to which they fall forward.
Kr:rey yeh car ko kya hua
R:i dont know,lets just check.

It was q very calm road with a few trees present. They both go outside and find that the tyre was punchtured.
R:yeh tyre achanak se puncture kaise ho gaya.
Kr:rey iss mai konsi badi baat hai ho gaya hoga tyre puncture.
R:lekin kriya aaj subah hi car garage se aayi hai.
Kr:oh ho rey zyaada mat socho aur tyre change karo.

Rey feels something strange but he keeps his thoughts and gets the spare Tyre. He bends down and inspects the punctured tyre. He finds a hole on the Tyre, it was as if some one has purposely punctured it. He sees some insects of very small sized coming out of the hole. As soon as those insects went away from there he quickly changed the Tyre and they heeded towards the villa. All through the journey rey was thinking about the events that took place firstly the bushes thing then kriya feeling some one was following them and now Tyre puncture thing. He felt that all these events were some how related to each other.

Their journey was very quite but the silence didn't remain long. They heard sound coming from a nearby place. Rey immediately stopped the car and they decide to find out from where the sound was coming. It was a very strange sound and they were hearing it for the first time. They more close to that place they reach the more louder the sound became. Suddenly they could not hear the sound it stopped. They looked around to find some clue where they were. All they could see was some bushes and an apple tree in between them. It was a single tree no other tree was present. Kriyansh were busy figuring out from where the sound came but suddenly a ripe apple caught kriya's attraction. She couldn't stop herself from going towards it. Rey saw that she was going towards the tree so he also followed her but he was busy thinking some thing

Rey*in his mind*:Its very strange??!? Its a strange sound and all of a sudden stopped but hows that possible and from where it was coming. And now this apple tree its even more strange that only one tree is present here and it is not even the season of apples then how come its present. There is definitely something wrong here.

Suddenly he saw kriya plucking an apple. It was very ripe compared to the others. She was about to eat it but rey snatched it from her.
Kr:rey yeh kya mujhe wo apple khana hai do mujhe.
R: nhi tum yeh nahi khaogi
Kr:kyu
R:kyunki mai keh rha hu
Kr:rey plzz
R:no

Rey was feeling something strange about that apple. He immediately broke that apple in to 2 halves. Kriya was watching him with curiosity. As soon as he broke that few very small insects started coming out it. Before those insects could climb onto his hands he threw it away. Kriya was a bit scared. He saw that those were the same insects which were in that hole of the Tyre but he didn't tell kriya because he didn't want her to get tensed. He turned towards her and found her staring at that apple. He could clearly see the scared expression on her face. He hugged her slightly so as to tell her that it was nothing to worry about.
Kr:thanks rey
R:its okay, lets go back.
She nodded yes in response.

Precap:Rey's car is missing...

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Originally posted by: lovely7010

I'm so sorry for the late update. I was just busy with my colg and stuff and on top of that my poor net connection due to which I couldn't update. Guys thank you soo much for liking my SS. Now enough of me talking. Enjoy the update.

Part 5:

They started heeding towards the car and as soon as they
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Originally posted by: lovely7010

Here's the update guys. This time I'm not very late. I hope this one's long enough as many of u told me that the previous one was a bit smaller and I'm sorry for that. And guys plzz bear with me if give short updates sometime as i write chup chup ke from my parents. Enough of my bakwaas now. Enjoy

Part 6:

Kriya chose a room on the first floor and rey chose a room on

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Part 7:

The next thing rey heard is kriya screaming.
Kr:aaahhh
He left the coffee on the stove and rushed towards her. As soon as rey reached there her reflection became normal and kriya was shocked on seeing this. He saw kriya's left hand had next update will be probably after friday only. Till then keep spamming😉

Originally posted by: lovely7010

Hello and I'm shocked only 41 likes for the , chappals, eggs and tomatoes are welcomed. Enjoy the update.

Part 8:

Originally posted by: lovely7010

Hello guys I'm back with another update. But this time I'm very upset 😔 the number of likes have been reducing from the past 2-3 updates and my demand that i mentioned in the previous update was also not completed. I though of not updating but still i'm updating as I'm a bit busy till the next week. Hope i get good response for this one. Enjoy

Part 9:

Rey was sleeping peacefully suddenly he heard some sound coming from the nearby window in his room. He heard a sound coming from the garden as if some one was digging the ground with the help of shovel. On hearing the sound he woke up from his sleep and rushed towards the window to see wgat exactly was happening. There he saw the shadow of a person. He assumed that the person was digging a hole in the garden. He immediately started calling the person and when the shadow heard rey's voice it started going away and soon it disappeared and now he found no one present there. It was very quite and calm. Neither he could see the shadow anymore nor he could see any hole in the ground. He peeped a little more to have a clear view of the garden. The moon light provided enough light for rey to have a view of the
Precap:kriya tells rey about her dream

Phew!! completed. Quite long isn't it??So hows it??I hope you all liked it. Plzz hit the like tab and give me your reviews. And next update will be updates only after page 90.😳 And guys my other SS I will always love u will be updated only after u complete the demand given there.